OS: A Confession Of Sort...(Pt 17+18; Pg26)

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JustFlameAHolic

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Posted: 13 years ago

this is my first ever OS, i have not written any story-like thing in almost 2 years so bare with me! plz plz feedback coz i know if you were to write an OS yourself, you would want feedback! so LIKE and COMMENTT guyss! 😊 if you want a PM on next update, then plz comment saying so thanks!

Part 1: A Confession of Sort...

Snake: hum aapke saath rehni ki ummid nahi chodenge khushiji.. *he smiles his revolting smile and walks away*

Arnav's bedroom:

Khushi walks in lost in her own thoughts about arnav, not once giving a thought to what Shyam had said. She was so confused that her brain could not function whether what had actually happened was actually true. She remembered flashbacks of Arnav dancing; flashbacks of her in his arms, how he didn't let go of her hand, how he pulled her close to him; in his embrace. She smiled at the thought.

Arnav was at the poolside, moving left to right, right to left, restless. He remembered her cupping his face, it was the first time khushi had done something like that, how her words pierced his heart when she says ''bhulaana chahte hai lekin bhulana pate'', the way her innocence made her ask why her heart beats faster when near him. Arnav stopped in his track fuming as ASR started to take over him. 'mein aisa kaise hone de sakta hoon' he thought.

Suddenly his heartbeat increases, *dhak dhak*

Khushi's heartbeat increases *dhak dhak* she looks down and clutches her dress near her heart. She looks around to see him staring at her by the glass doors.

*flashback + rabba ve in the background!* They both remember how they were in each other's arms, how content they both felt, how arnav told her the reason why her heart beats fast, he remembers himself holding her hand close to his heart so she could feel his dhadkan. *dhak dhak* they remember telling each other how they feel, they both remember how he said, ''jo tum mehsoos karti ho, who mehsoos karta hoon';

A gentle gust of air hits them both as if to emphasise they breath the same air, as if trying to unite their breaths. *rabba veee*

They both knew they had said to each other what they probably should not have; a beautiful confession of sort!

part 2 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&TPN=2�

part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54523541�

part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2890019/os-a-confession-of-sort-pt-17-18-pg26?pn=5

part 5: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&TPN=6�

part 6 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&PID=54658418�

part 7 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&TPN=9�

part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2890019/os-a-confession-of-sort-pt-17-18-pg26?pn=12

part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2890019/os-a-confession-of-sort-pt-17-18-pg26?pn=14

part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2890019/os-a-confession-of-sort-pt-17-18-pg26

part 11: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&TPN=19�

part 12: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&PID=55563242�

part 13: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&TPN=22&#55920664

part 14: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2890019&TPN=23�

part 15 and 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2890019/os-a-confession-of-sort-pt-17-18-pg26�

part 17 and 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57491445�

Edited by JustFlameAHolic - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

that was really sweet!

beautifully written!

continue with part 2 soon :) and pm me!

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was really nice!!!! continue soon 😊

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Crazy44um

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Posted: 13 years ago

Please continue...that was awesome ... really please next scene:)

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was gorgeouse! Lets hope on the SHOW, they both realize what they have said as well!

At least PARTS of it! I just wish that disgusting Snake had not got to Khushi when he did! I just want him DEAD!😡

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JustFlameAHolic

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
That was gorgeouse! Lets hope on the SHOW, they both realize what they have said as well!

At least PARTS of it! I just wish that disgusting Snake had not got to Khushi when he did! I just want him DEAD!😡

thank you! yea i know!! coz Khushi didn't know what snake was talking about, she just seemed confused, i.e. didn't remember she told himm!! we all want him dead!

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JustFlameAHolic

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: roohi_love
Super sweet!!! 😃

thanks, let me know if you want me to PM you for next part :)

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JustFlameAHolic

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2:

Arnav looked away from his wife's beautiful face. He let ASR take over and stormed inside the room, sat on the recliner and opened his laptop. He typed away furiously.
Khushi saw him fuming and was even more confused. 'did he not mean any of that' she thought? Tears started forming in her eyes, and she turned…walked away to the bathroom.

Shyam was gloating, he had never felt that happy in his life before than he did now. *he walks inside his room*
Anjali: are aap aagaye? *she looks at him, he was still smiling. Anjali walks up to him and places her hand on his shoulder which brings him back out of his haze. He looks at her confused*..''aap ke chehre pe itne badi muskaan kyun hai, zara hume bhi toh batayye…aap ne to bhang nahi pee, phir aap aise muskuraa rahe hai jaise aapko bhang ka nasha chadha hai. Kahin aap ne sach mein…
Shyam: *smiles and looks at her* are nahi nahi rani saahiba, hum,…hum to bas isliye khush hai kyun iss baar ki holi kitne acche se huyi. *she hugs him and he hugs back in response*
Shyam thinks, 'nasha toh chaddha hai rani sahiba, uske liye bhang ki koi zarurat nahi hai, khushiji jo hai. *smiles*
…
Anjali: woh toh hai. Pata hai, hum bhi bohot khush hai. Poochiye kyun?
Shyam: kyun?
Anjali: kyun ki khushi ji go unn ka parivaar waaspas mil gaya aur to aur unhe naniji ne bhi maaf kardiya. *snake just smiles and anjali continues,* lekin sab se acchi baat ye thi ke hamare chhote ne aur khushiji ne ek doosre ko rang lagaaya…
Shyam's mood starts to downfall, *twitching of the face*
Anjali: kya soch rahe hai
Shyam: kuch nahi bas yunhi..
Anjali just shakes her head and goes downstairs.
Shyam says to himself out loud: agar rang lagaa bhi liya to kya hoowa, khushiji sirf meri hai or meri hokar rahegi. Ab to mujhe sab sach pataa chal gaya hai…hmph ab bacha sakte ho to bachaalo apni iss ''shaadi'' ko saale saab! *smiles his revolting smile again*

Arnav's bedroom:

Khushi comes out the bathroom having washed her face and changed. As soon as she came out, she was stopped in her tracks by the yelling of Arnav.
Arnav: tum ek bhi kaam thikse kyun nahi kar sakte Aman!!!!! (sorry had to put this line in!!)
Just then he feels her presence, he stops talking, Aman was saying something but he couldn't hear a thing. All that time, his mind was busy thinking about that person behind him and his heart beating away erratically. He couldn't show his emotions again, he thought. He got up and stormed out the room.
Khushi realised what he was doing, he was avoiding her, avoiding talking about what happened between them. Was it really JUST the nasha of the bhang she thought?
Khushi: *looks up and softly says* hai Devi Mayya. Yeh humhe kaisi uljhan mein daldiya hai.. *she then realises she's talking to DM and so she says, ''yeh mat samajhna ke hum aap se madad maang rahe hai..hum to bas…'' she got lost in her thoughts again. 'lekin bhang peene sai to dil ki baat bahar aajati hai, iska matlab….''
Just then her face brightened up into a huge smile! She had an ideaaa!
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*sorry i shall put in more arshi scenes in the next part for torturing you guys with snakewa scene* :D i know that the tagline had something to do with payal being kicked out etc, but not gonna put that in..coz then it would get boring! feedback plz :) x