New FF:Where my Heart lives Part 2(pg 17)

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Hira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

hey its gud do continue..!!!

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Tandrima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

It sounds great...can u pm me the updates please??

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asrksr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

hi!i'm in 'flashback mode' now!tere liye!!!but arnav in mental asylum😭plz make him better fast,ok?miss.kapoor?ekta madness proof again😉so plz dont even think about stopping dear.continue soon and do pm me.
All the best😊

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bhavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

eagerly waiting... Junior Ekta Kapoor ...!!!! 😃

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aditi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

very interesting and intriguing...ASR in mental asylum...reminds me of beginning of KMH season 1 except that he was in jail!
would love to read further... continue soon😊

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700983

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

this seems intesting girl
n awww why is arnav in mental asylum ???
do continue i wanaa read more
n judging by untouched memories i can kinda tell this 1 will b amazing 2 :):):)
thnks sooo much 4 the pm

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Ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter One:I am dead

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"Mr Arnav Singh Raizada?" Ms Kapoor asked the young man who was sitting next to her.But the man didnt response or looked up.

He was just lost in his thought.In his hands he was holding some chalk.

"Mr Raizada?" Ms Kapoor tried it again.She slowly touched his shoulder.

Suddenly he looked up.His eyes were chocolate brown.Ms Kapoor couldnt say how he was looking at her.He eyes said nothing.

He looked at her hand and removed her hand quickly from her shoulder and shaked his head and kept distance from her.

"Dont Worry..I am not here to hurt you.I am here to help you.Will you tell me your name? I am Rhea Kapoor."

He looked at her but said nothing.

"You can trust me.I only want to help you..."

"L-Laad Governar..." he whispered and quickly moved to the wall to write something on it.

"Laad Governar...Laad Gvernar..."he repeated again.

"Laad Governar? But your name is Arnav,right?"

But that man shaked his head.

"No..No..No...Arnav.Arnav is dead...Arnav is dead"he said.

"But you are not dead?"

"I am Laad Governar..."he whispered.

"Okay Laad Governar.I have something for you...Do you want to see it?"

But the man still shaked his head.

"No...No...Leave me alone.." He was still writing something on the wall.

"What are you writing one wall?"

Rhea looked around the room and saw that the walls of the room were almost completly written with chalk.

She read some of them.It were just sentences or names:

"Laad Governar" "I love you" "Heartbeat" "Jalebi" "Sanaka Devi" "Arnav is dead"

Suddenly she found something written with red chalk.It was a name.

"Khushi"

Rhea turned and saw Arnav who was sitting again on the floor.He looked all alone and lonely.The way he was sitting on the floor brought tears in her eyes.

She had to help him...But he didnt want to talk.

This was the sixth time she was trying to talk to him but he never talked to her.

He only said "Laad Governar or Arnav is dead..."

But Rhea never lost her hope because she wanted to help Arnav,wanted to hear his story .She wanted to know who Khushi is.

A tear flew from her eye.

Arnav saw her tear and looked at her.He was touched seeing her tears.He stood up and looked at her.

"Tears...Laad Governar hates tears...makes him mad..You should go...Leave Laad Governar alone before he gets mad..."he whispered.

Rhea looked at him.She knew that he would blast in some minutes.She didnt want to hurt him so she moved toward the door.She didnt know that something fell from her file.It was a photo of someone.

She was about to open the door when she heard Arnav whispering.

"Khushi...KHUSHI!!!"

How was it?😊

I only continued because some people cheered me up.Actually I didnt want to continue because the response wasnt as high as expected...I want to thank everyone who commented on the prologue.

And I wanted to thank my BF who once again inspired me and because she choosed the name for this FF ❤️

Edited by Ri_luvs_ArShi - 13 years ago

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700983

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

yayyy me first as soon as i saw that no one commented i quickly wanted 2 read it n write something so here is my comment
OMG i wonder why arnav is in mental asylum n awww i feel so sorry 4 him he keeps n callin himself laad governor n awww all his walls r filled with chalk u can kinda tell that he dont tlk alot yea so bck 2 the walls topic awww so many things r about khushi n awww khushi is in RED !!!
OMG arnav saw a pic of khushi i wonder what he will do
eagerly wauting 2 read more plzzz update soon n thnks 4 the pm
p.s : love this FF it seems baree intresting :)

Edited by Fafu77 - 13 years ago

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supriya.ipkknd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

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Oh wow! U brought tears to my eyes... Arnav in mental asyum.. lonely wid no one around... cant see him in dat state... looks like ur inspired by "Tere liye".. it also started on a similar note :)

And arnav calls himself laaD Governor... awww... and jalebi... sanka devi... on the walls.. so cute...

(Anurag used to write Mishti on the walls in TERE LIYE :p )

And dat pic!! that means Rhea is connected to khushi... right?...u hv left me emotional.. now how cn i go to sleep 😭

P.S. waiting 4 d next part Ritu 😊

Edited by supriya.ipkknd - 13 years ago