SS: Trials Of Love (Part 3 n 4 on Page 17 n 18)

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: bobeeta
really good .. Looking forward to the next part .. x

Thank you😉

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lollipop143
Loved it!!!

Thanks😳

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

I loved it... please update soon

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Priyanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

very well written...pls cont...pls dont get offended...i wud like to point out a tiny mistake...khushi nk para... u hve written "his broken english"... it should hve bin broken hindi...

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Tandrima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

It was beautiful...very well written

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

👏👏thanks...love it...amaizng...👏👏

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coolgal49

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Good update! Please do not finish it in 3 parts!

Interesting storyline. so please continue

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: priyaaac
very well written...pls cont...pls dont get offended...i wud like to point out a tiny mistake...khushi nk para... u hve written "his broken english"... it should hve bin broken hindi...

Thanks...😉

In part 2...there are no dialogues of Nk and in part 1, nk says h comeon khushi ji, khasye". Khushi hit her head and corrected 'khasye nahi hasye". .. .. so where the broken english????😕