Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar THREAD10 link #11 pg 145 - Page 60

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Awesome teaser.
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awesome teaser...

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PART 96

Geet: Aap chaliye mere saath Maan [Maan come with me]

She holds his hand and starts walking towards the area where the Mehndi function was going on

Meanwhile,

Annie: Geet problem kya hai teri tu hume mehndi lagane kyun nahi de rahi? [Geet why r u not allowing us to apply Mehndi?]

Dev: (thinking) Ab tujhe kya batau Annie Bro aur Geet k romance mein bali ka bakra bun gaya hoon main [Now how should I tell u Annie that I have bcm a scapegoat for the sake of Bro's romance with Geet]

Dadima: Geet aapne ye ghoonghat kyun oodh rakha hai aur upar se aap jabse aayi hai tabse aapne kuch baat bhi nahi ki aapki tabiyat toh thik haina bete? [Geet why have u covered your face with this viel and if I am not wrong u have not spoken a single word after coming here r u alright dear?]

Dev: (thinking) Jab tak chup hoon sahi salamat hoon Dadima jaise hi bolna shuru kar du uske baad jo pitayi hogi meri shayad phir aap apne pothe ki aawaz dubara na sunn pau issliye mujhe chup rehne dijiye Dadima [As long as I am silent I am perfectly fine once I get exposed and once I get beaten up maybe u will no longer be able to listen to the voice of ur grandson so Dadima let me remain silent]

Meera: Main samaj gayi Dadima apni Geet chahthi hai k sabse pehli cheez jo uske haatho par likhi jaaye wo Maan jiju ka naam ho issliye nakre dhika rahi hai [I got it Geet wants to start her Mehndi by writng Maan's name first hence she is behaving so strangely]

Annie: Bus itni si baat chal abhi likhthe hai tere saiyaji ka naam [Oh such a small reason wait let me fulfill ur wish right now by writing your beloved's name first]

Dev: (thinking) Nahi aisa mat karo meri future wife mere baare mein kya sochegi k main apne hateli par apne bade bhai ka naam mehndi se likhwakar ghoomta hoon Oh no this is not happening mera toh impression banne se pehle hi tuth jaayega kaun ladki mujhse shaadi karegi nahi nahi main kuwara nahi jee saktha [No pls don't do this what will my future wife think about me my entire image would be ruined even before it is properly built. Oh no this is not happening which girl would agree to marry me? No no I don't want to be a bachelor throughout my life I need to stop this]

Meera: Lau main likhthi hoon Maan jijaji ka naam [Show let me write Maan's name on your hand]

Dev tried to resist but Annie and Meera pulled his hand and Meera started writing the first word "M" on his hand as soon as the first word was complete Dev's fear of leading a bachelor's life increased and he removed his viel immediately and shouted in horror

Dev: Main Dev hoon Geet nahi [I am Dev and not Geet]

All the ladies were shocked and all of sudden the expression of their eyes changed and Dev's fear increased

Dev: Dekhiye deviyon main toh ek seedha saadha ladka hoon jo k apne Ram jaise bhai aur sita jaisi bhabhi ji ki madat kar raha tha aakir unka bhi toh dil karta haina kuch der saath rehne ka aap logh samaj rahihaina [Ladies try an understand I am an innocent guy who is helping his brother and bhabhi who r like Lord Ram and Goddess Sita to spend some time with each other I hope you'll our understanding me]

Ladies: Hum toh aapki baate samaj gaye par aap ye nahi jaana chahenge k hum kya soch rahe hai [We understood ur feelings but won't u like to know what is going on in our minds right now?]

Dev: Ji kyun nahi jab aap logone mere jasbaatho ki kadar ki hai toh mera bhi farz banta haina k main aapki baat sunu [ Yes why not you'll have respected my feelings so its my duty to listen to ur words as well]

Dev: Boliyena sharmaiye mat [Pls go ahead u need not feel shy]

Ladies: laatho k bhooth baato se nahi maante 'humla karo [People who do not give into talks do understand the language of kicks'.attack girls]

Dev: Bro '.Geet mujhe bachaiye [Bro'Geet pls save me]

Dev started running for his life but luckily for him Geet entered the room at the right time

Dev goes and hides behind Geet

Dev: Geet apne bhai ko inn chudailo se bachao [Geet save ur brother from these witches]

Geet: Dev tum jayo koi tumhe kuch nahi karega [Dev u go from here no one can harm u]

The girls were going to attack Dev when Geet gave them an angry glare. Dev immediately left the room

Dadima: Geet bete kaha reh gayi thi aap? Aapki Mehndi ki saari taiyaariyaan ho gayi hai zarur Maan ne aapko behkaya hoga apne saath chalne k liye aane dijiye unhe ab unki khair nahi [Geet where were u dear? All the preparations for your Mehndi function is complete I am sure Maan might have convinced u to go with him let him come I will give him a proper punishment]

Geet: Nahi Dadima ye sach hai k Maan k saath thi par wo toh aap sab ki madat kar rahe the Mehndi ki adhuri taiyaariyon ko pura karne k liye [No Dadima this is the truth that I was with Maan but he was only helping you'll to complete the incomplete preparations of this function]

Annie: Kaunsa adhura kaam Geet saari taiyaariyaan toh ho chuki hai [What incomplete preparations we are done with everything]

Geet: Achha batau aap logone kya taiyaariyaan ki hai? [Oh really tell me what all preparations have you'll done?]

Meera: Abhi batathi hoon [Wait let me tell u]

Annie: Ye dekh hum sab ne milkar ye decide kiya k mehndi lagane se pehle hum tere haatho ko gulab jal se nourish karenge taaki teri mehndi ki raunak ka koi mukabla na ho [We all decided to nourish your hand with rose water before applying Mehndi so that no one can stand in front of the glow of your Mehndi]

Meera: Itna hi nahi hum koi ordinary mehndi cone use nahi karnewale hum toh mor (peacock) pank se tere haatho mein designs banaenge taaki mehndi ka har ek design tere liye yaadgaar bun jaaye [We are not going to use any ordinary mehndi cone for making designs on your hand we will be using peacock feather to make the designs so that this moment stays in your memories forever]

Annie: Agar tujhe ye bhi kum nazar aata hai toh sun humne Delhi k sabse bade aur famous botanical garden se ye sabse gehri Mehndi k pattiyon se ye paste taiyaar kiya hai taaki tere mehndi ka rang sabse gehra ho [If u feel that this is also not sufficient then listen to this we have made this mehndi paste by crushing the best Mehndi leaves that we purchased from the most famous botanical garden of Delhi so that your Mehndi gets a dark shade]

Meera: Sirf rang hi kyun iss Mehndi ki khushboo toh charo diahayon mein fhali hui hai itni strong hai iski mehek [Why only color the fragrance of this Mehndi is so strong that its smell is evident throughout this room]

Annie: Humne toh ek kadam aage ki bhi soch li aur keemti motiyon ko peeskar tere mehndi k paste mein daal diya taaki tere mehndi wale haatho ki khoobsurati sabse alag ho aur zyada din tak barkarar rahe [We went a step ahead by crushing precious pearls and adding it to the paste of ur Mehndi so that the beauty of your Mehndi lasts for a longer duration of time]

Meera: Aur phir ye dekh jaha teri Mehndi honewali hai uss jagah ko jannat ki tarah sajaya hai humne taaki tu kisi hoor se kum nazar na aaye [Just have a look at the place where we r going to do ur Mehndi we hv decorated it like a paradise so that u appear like a fairy during your Mehndi function]

Annie: Ab bata abhi bhi koi kami reh gayi hai? [Now tell me are the preparations incomplete?]

Geet: Haan [Yes]

Dadima: Aap kehna kya chahthi hai bete? [What do u want to tell dear?]

Geet started walking towards a particular direction and her eyes were fixed on a particular place

Geet: Aap logone mere liye gulab jal mangwaya taaki mere haatho ki Mehndi mein raunak aa jaye par aap ye bhool gaye k Geet se judi har ek baat mein raunak tabhi chahthi hai jab uski aakhon ko Maan ka muskuratha chehra nazar aaye [You'll arranged rose water for me so that my Mehndi starts glowing but how could u forget that every thing associated with Geet starts glowing automatically as soon as her eyes sees the smiling face of her Maan]

Geet: Haan Maan ki ek muskurahat hi kafi hai Geet ki saadgi ko ek ruhani raunak dene k liye [Yes Maan's one smile is enough to give a diving glow to Geet's simplicity]

She continued walking with a smile on her face

Geet: Aap mor pankh se mere haatho par design bananewale ho taaki ye pal mere liye yaadgar bun jaaye par aap ye bhool gaye k Maan k saath k bagair Geet ko har mehfil mein tanhayi nazar aathi hai [ U r going to make the design with peacock feather on my hands so that this moment remains in my memories forever but you'll forgot that without Maan every celebration has no meaning for Geet]

Geet: Haan Geet k liye toh har wo pal yaadgaar hai jo usne apne Maan k saath bitaya; jab wo mujhe chedthe hai; mujhse pyar bhari baate karte hai mujhpar apna haq jatathe hai toh har ek pal Geet k dil k kitab mein ek yaadgar lamha bankar reh jaathi hai [Every moment that Geet has shared with Maan is precious for her; when he troubles me ; whispers sweet notings or claims me by showing his possessive side '.all these moments become an unforgettable memory in the book of Geet's heart]

Her eyes were depicting true love for Maan as she continued walking

Geet: Delhi ka kyun Annie iss duniya ki sabse gehri Mehndi bhi mangawalo par Geet k haatho par uska rang tabhi chahyega jab uske Maan ki pyar bhari nazar uspar padegi [U can get the world's best Mehndi Annie but it would show its true color on Geet's hand only when Maan's love filled eyes admire them]

Her heart started racing rapidly as she was very close to her destination

Geet: Shayad iss Mehndi ki mehek charo dishayon mein fhaili hui hai par Geet ki saasein toh tabhi mehenkengi jab Maan usse apne baho k panahomein kaid kar lenge [The smell of this Mehndi may be evident in all the directions but Geet's breat would become fragrant only when Maan takes captures her in the loving folds of his arms]

Geet: Maan k pyar ki khushboo mein jo taazgi hai jo dilkashi hai wo iss duniya k kisi bhi Mehndi mein nahi ho sakthi [The fragrance and the freshness that Maan's love possesses cannot be compared with any Mehndi of this world]

Geet shifted the curtain and everyone was shocked to see Maan standing behind it

Geet: Geet ki Khoobsurati ko nikarne k liye motiyon ki zarurat nahi hai Uski khoobsurati mein char chand tabhi lag jaate hai jab uske Maan usse pyar se chuthe hai [The beauty of Geet does not require the aid of precious pearls ' 4 moons r added to her beauty automatically with one touch of Maan]

Geet: Geet ko kisi banawati cheezo ki zarurat nahi Maan ka pyar hi kaafi hai usse sone sa nikhar dene k liye [ Geet does not require any artificial things Maan's love is enough to give a golden touch to her beauty]

She touched Maan's face with utmost love and submitted herself in his loving embrace

Geet: Geet ki jaanat toh Maan ki baho mein hai aur hoor kehlane ki khwaish naa pehle mujhe thi aur naa aage kabhi hogi [The paradise of Geet lies in her Maan's arms' she never wated to be a fairy and will never think of becoming one]

Geet: Pariyon ki raani toh saikdoh hongi par Maan ki Maayari bus ek hai aur wo main hoon mere liye isse badi pehchan aur kya ho sakthi hai [Anyone can become the queen of fairies but there is only one who can be Maan's Maayari and that's me and this identity is enough for me to lead my entire life]

Geet: Maan k bagair meri saari khushiyaan adhuri ha iye Mehndi bhi [Without Maan all my happiness is incomplete including this Mehndi]

Maan was overwhelmed by Geet's confession. He kissed her forehead lovingly and tightened the hug

The rest of the ladies started applauding in happiness

Geet: Dadima main chahthi hoon k meri Mehndi mere Maan k aakhon k saamne ho [Dadima I want my Mehndi to take place in front of my Maan's eyes]

Dadima: Aisa hi hoga bete [Your wish will be fulfilled dear]

Maan: Dadima maine terrace apr Geet k Mehndi k liye kuch special intezaam karwaye hai main chahtha hoon k Geet ki Mehndi wahi par ho [Dadima I have made some special arrangements for Geet's Mehndi on the terrace and I want the function to take place over there]

Dadima: Hume koi aitraaz nahi hai' ladkiyon chaliye terrace par chalthe hai [I have no problem common girls let's go to the terrace]

The girls take all the necessary items and start walking towards the terrace.

The group of boys were already present on the terrace to make the function more interesting

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

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Music

Maan scooped Geet in his arms and started walking towards the special swing that he had arranged for his Mayari'the swing was decorated with Mehndi leaves and beautiful red roses

Ye kudiyaan nashe di hai pudiyaan

Ye munde gali k hai gunde

Ye kudiyaan nashe di hai pudiyaan

Ye munde gali k hai gunde

nashe di hai pudiyaan, gali k hai gunde

The rest of the girls and boys started their silly fights to add the spice of naughtiness and mischief in the ceremony

There was a proper sitting arrangement for the rest of the ladies and Dadima, Annie, Meera and Pinky made themselves comfortable in their respective seats next to the swing

Oh' oh '

Maan placed his Mayari on the swing and started rocking it with his love'after few seconds maan took some steps in a backward direction and pressed a switch with his finger

Within a matter of seconds there was a continous shower of jasmine flowers from all the directions exactly at the place where Geet was sitting' Annie whistled in excitement with this gesture of Maan whereas Geet was finding absolutely no way to hide the blush of Maan's love which was quite evident on her face

Mehndi laga k rakhna doli saja k rakhna

The ladies start Geet's Mehndi ceremony and Maan started approaching Geet with a red colored viel in his hand'Dadima recognized the viel immediately it was their traditional viel which was given to her by her mother in law and she had ordered Maan to give this viel to that girl who will be the most important gem of his life'she was feeling so happy today

Mehndi laga k rakhna doli saja k rakhna

He placed the viel on Geet's head with utmost love and caressed her face gently'

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajana

He lifted Geet's face by holding her chin and kissed his two fingers and placed the fingers on her lips

Mehndi laga k rakhna'doli saja k rakhna o o

Annie and Meera pushed Maan behind due to this naughty act of his...the gang of boys immediately come to his rescue to save him from the beatings of these girls

Oh..oh'aa aaa

The team of girls were going to attack the boys when Geet started singing

Sehra saja k rakhna chehra chupake k rakhna Sehra saja k rakhna chehra chupake rakna

Maan looked at his angel'Geet placed her hand on her lips as if accepting the invisible kiss of Maan and after this acceptation she guided her fingers to her heart exactly on the place where Maan had written Maaneet with the Mehndi making Maan feel all the more special

Ye dil ki baat apne dil mein dabake rakhna

She raised her other hand and allowed the moonlight to fall on it'The words "I love u" that Maan had written with the firefly ink were sparkling like a cluster of stars

Sehra saja k rakhna chehra chupake rakna

Mehndi laga k rakhna'doli saja k rakhna

Maan gave a flying kiss to Geet and Geet hid her face by covering it with one of her palm

Music

Dev had changed his oufit and was back to his normal self 'he somehow gathered courage to make an entry into the Mehndi function'but as soon as the girls saw him they started attacking him and Dev was running here and there trying to protect his life

Here Maan had arranged all the favourite dishes of Geet and was waiting for the moment when he will himself feed Geet

After finishing all the arrangements he turned around as his eyes were desperate to admire his Maayari'he noticed that Dadima and Annie were trying to convince Geet about her Mehndi design but Geet was adamant that this is the only way she wants her Mehndi to appear and she is not going to change this design

Udd udd k teri zulfein karti hai kya ishare dil tham k khade hai aashiq sabhi kuware

Maan started singing as he knew that something special was going on his Maayari's mind' her curls were giving him the message that this special act of Geet is for him and now he was getting desperate to see Geet's special Mehndi

Chup jaaye saari kudiyaan ghar mein sharam k maare gaon mein aa gaye hai paagal sheher k saare

Meanwhile, Meera was successful in trapping Dev and she was forcing him to do situps and poor Dev he was following his order without thinking twice it seemed he could do anything for her

Nazare jhukha k rakhna daaman bachake rakhna

As Maan was busy admiring Geet he noticed the pinkish tinge on her cheeks turning into a reddish shade and he realized that indeed this was the moment when Geet's hand was getting decorated with his name'

Nazare jhukha k rakhna daaman bachake rakhna

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajana

Maan started approaching her as he was eager to see his name on his angel's palms but as soon as Maan approached her Geet took her hands behind and gave him a teasing smile

Sehra saja k rakhna chehra chupake rakna

Mehndi laga k rakhna'doli saja k rakhna

The celebrations were now on full swing every member of the family was singing and dancing in joy

Music

Maan requested Geet through his eyes to show him her Mehndi but Geet continued to tease him'Maan moved his face very close to hers and as usual Geet could not resist him

There was a winning smirk on his face as he was proud to see the effect that he has on his ladylove

Oh oh oh 'aa aa aa'

Without thinking twice Maan scooped Geet in his arms and made way to the dance floor 'Geet opened her eyes and hid her face in his chest

Main ek jaawan ladka tu ek haaseen ladki

He lifted Geet and placed her on his shoulder and started dancing

Ye dil machal gaya toh mera kasur kya hai

Without spoiling her mehndi Maan gracefully twirled Geet by holding her waist and with one quick movement he settled himself on the swing and placed Geet on his lap in a resting position

Rakhna tha dil pe kaabu ye husn toh hai jaadu jaadu ye chal gaya toh mera kasur kya hai

Geet could read the naughty thoughts of Maan in his eyes'Maan brought his face close to Geet's face and Geet rubbed her nose with his telling him that his naughty tricks are not going to work today

Rasta humara thakna darwaaza khulla rakhna

Maan supported Geet by holding her waist and made her to sit comfortably on his lap'

Rasta humara thakna darwaaza khulla rakhna

He looked at her maang with utmost love and placed a kiss on her maang as if thanking her for making him a part of his life

Lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajana

Before Geet could react Maan took a garland of marigold flowers and placed it lovingly on her neck' Geet was overwhelmed by this gesture of Maan this simple act of Maan had touched her soul

Kuch aur ab na kehna kuch aur ab na karna

Tears were flowing from her eyes Maan was going to wipe them but Geet stopped him as she wanted these pearls to carry the message of her heart'the message of their love and their beautiful bond

Kuch aur ab na kehna kuch aur ab na karna

Ye dil ki baat apne dil mein dabake rakhna

She placed both her hands in front of his eyes and Maan got the greatest and most magical surprise of his life'each and every inch of her hand was decorated with his name not once but numerous times in different styles'yes this was the only design that she had allowed the ladies to make on her hand

Mehndi laga k rakhna'doli saja k rakhna Sehra saja k rakhna chehra chupake rakna

He was unable to voice his happiness in terms of words; he could read her eyes which were telling him that Maan u the most precious ornament of ur Geet' ur name itself is enough to make ur Maayari the most beautiful girl of this world

Shawa oye oye oye Shawa oye oye '..

But before Maan could say something Geet's eyes started reflecting a different emotion

She took her lips next to his ear and whispered lovingly

Geet: Aapki koi bhi baat galat ho nahi sakthi aap uss din mujhe ched rahe thena kissing tradition ko lekar par aapki iss Geet ne toh usse sach samaj liya aur waise bhi khuda kabhi jhooth bol nahi saktha aur Geet k liye toh aap hi uske khuda ho aap galat kaise ho sakthe ho [Maan u can never be wrong u were teasing me that day with your so called kissing tradition but Maan for ur Geet that was the greatest truth as God can never lie and u r my God then how can I let the words of my God to be wrong?]

Music

Maan understood what she was trying to tell but before he could do anything she took him in his magical spell by capturing his lips within her soft and delicate petals'she was showering her love by this one kiss of hers'she proved it that she could even die for fulfilling every small and big desires of his heart; she entered his mouth and started relishing every secret of his and communicated to him that she will keep on loving him till the last breath of her life

This kiss was really magical as Geet was telling him how special he was for her'the entire family was watching this scene Annie was whistling in happiness..Dev tried to cover his face as he was too shy but Meera was not allowing him to do so and was trying to tell him the scene was so romantic and divine' Dadima was feeling as the most blessed women on this earth as today both her children were happy and more importantly no one could define their love in words as it had no limits

Shawa oye oye oye Shawa oye oye '..

Maaneet never required words to understand each other's feelings. Maan understood that with her action Geet was trying to tell him I will ensure that each word that falls from your mouth will turn into a reality'maybe u were teasing me that day but my heart has accepted those words as the biggest and sacred truth of this world and this action of mine is just a small token of love for the man who is the most precious and priceless possession of my heart'I love u Maan'I love u

Music

Maan took her viel and without breaking the kiss he placed her viel on their heads as this world belonged only to them and no one else had the right to enter their world as in this world they were no longer Maan n Geet they were Maaneet; he took Geet in his possessive embrace and responded to the kiss with equal passion and offcourse with an undying love whose beauty and sacredness was more great than the godliness of the almighty himself

PRECAP: Adi: "Kidnapping aur wo bhi 4 ladkiyon ki nahi main aisa kuch nahi karnewala" [Kidnapping and that too of 4 girls no way I am not getting involved in this plan]

Kidnapping toh tumhe karni padegi warna'[U have to do this kidnapping or else..]😉😃😳

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update piya loved it
loved the song selection
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update.
Its simply awesome.
loved it very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what an update Piya...and Geet actually kissed him...whoo...even i am whisteling
awesome Mehndi and as usaul unique and romantic
loved it completely
Sorry aaj kal I am not able to discuss with you more...lot of office work so very busy...travelling bhi bad gayi hai
but you are writing fabulous...and great updates in all the stories...trully speaking I am bowled over with your imaginationa nd creativity for writing such beautiful poems and updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
osum update piya waise dev to poora phasa lekin bhabi ne bachali the explanation of mehendi by othere gal nice but geet explanation with maan in heart was superb ore maan in mehendi wah the gana the gestures the pics osum precap same
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Posted: 13 years ago
piya di really lovely uppdate.maan and geets love is so divine .i dont have wrds about our maneet.the precap is really exciting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m feeling blessed to readthis beautiful story. loveing maaneets journey... lovely ff... love u dear...

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