Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar THREAD10 link #11 pg 145 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm


embarrased geet ...she spilled out d beans ...😳



maan toh gaya


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u for th epm

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Posted: 13 years ago
lvd the update...poor geet😆
do con soon
thanx 4 the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello friends

I am so sorry for the delay actually I had planned to give an update today but I had a very bad day in office so right now I am not at all in a mood to give updates
I have holidays for 3 days so I would be updating tomorrow
Pls forgive me for the late updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiitng for the update princess
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Posted: 13 years ago

Naughty Maan...bechaari Geet...woh bhi kitne aaram se puch rahi thi and poor girl...i can't believe she asked that question to Daadima

I am sure Maan ko bhaut manana padega ab apni sharmayi hui gusse wali jaan ko

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Hello friends

I am so sorry for the delay actually I had planned to give an update today but I had a very bad day in office so right now I am not at all in a mood to give updates
I have holidays for 3 days so I would be updating tomorrow
Pls forgive me for the late updates
love-Piya


we will wait dear... and sorry for the bad day at office... mera bahut wonderful day hai... first at so many posts... of my beautiful writers...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
to humari princess update kar rahe haii aur hume bataya bi nahi ke online hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.
love-Piya
PART 90

All the 3 ladies burst out laughing

Maan enters the Mansion exactly at that point of time

Maan: Kya hua Dadima aap log itna has kyun rahe hai? [What's the matter Dadima why are you'll laughing so much?]

Annie: Humari hassi k peeche aaphika haath hai Maan bhai [U r responsible for this hilarious situation Maan bhai]

Maan: Maine kya kiya? [What did I do?]

Dadima: Ofho Maan ab itne bhi bole mat baniye agar aapko sach mein ye parampara shuru karwani thi toh humse keh diya hotha hum toh turant hi maanjaate yun jhooth bolne ki kya zarurat thi? [Maan don't try to be innocent if u wanted to start this tradition then u should have told me I would have definitely agreed what was the need to make up stories?]

Maan: Kaunsi parampara? [Which tradition?]

Meera: Wahi aapke aur Geet ki special tradition [The special tradition between Geet and u]

Maan: (nervously) Aap log mazak kar rahe haina? [U r guys r joking right?]

Dadima: Mazak toh aapko bhari padnewala hai Maan kyunki aapki bholibhali mangetar ne humsabko aapke "Kiss" wale tradition k bhare mein batadiya aur bechari khud sharm se pani pani ho gayi. Geet ko chedne mein hume jitna maza aaya usse kayi zyada mushkil aapko honewlai hai apni jaan ko mananne mein [U have to pay heavily for ur joke Maan as ur innocent fiance has given us a detailed explanation about the so called "Kiss" tradition. We had a great time while teasing Geet but it would be a difficult task for u to pacify her]

Maan was totally out of his senses he immediately rushed to Geet's room as he didn't want to make a fool of himself by standing there with Dadima

Dadima: Jayiye Maan mana lijiye apni Geet ko waise bhi rutne manane se pyar ka rang aur bhi gehra ho jaata hai [Go Maan pacify ur Geet these small tiffs are very essential to increase the depth of love]

Meera: Dadima rang se yaad aaya kal toh holi haina kya hum holi celebrate karenge? [ Dadima tomorrow is Holi r we going to celebrate it?]

Dadima: Bilkul Khurana khandaan Holi badi hi dhoomdham se manatha hai aur ye saal toh Geet ki pehli holi hogi humare saath ab toh aur bhi maza aayega [Off course Khurana's celebrate Holi on a very large scale and this would be the first Holi of Geet with us so it would b great fun]

Annie: Dadima Geet ko Holi k rango se allergy hai Holi k din wo apne kamre se bahar hi nahi nikalthi toh wo humare saath celebrate kaise karegi? [Dadima Geet has allergy towards the colors that r used in Holi infact she never steps out of her room during this festival how will she celebrate this festival with us?]

Dadima: Hmm' chalo achha hai Maan aur Geet ko kuch pal eksaath bitane ka aur mauka mil jaayega [Good now Maan n Geet would get some more time in privacy]

Meera: Kya matlab? [I didn't get u]

Dadima: Bete agar Geet Holi nahi khelegi toh Maan bhi nahi khenlenge aur iska matlab hai wo apni Geet k paas hi rahenge aur jab wo dono paas rahenge tab woe k dusre se pyar bhari baate karenge humare liye toh yahi sabse badi baat hogi hum sab bahar rango mein Holi manayenge aur ye dono apne pyar ki Holi mein khoye rahenge [Dear if Geet won't participate in this Holi bash then Maan also would do the same that means both of them would be with each other throughout the day and I am really happy for both of them here we would celebrate the festival of colors and there Maan and Geet would get drowned in the color of their love]

Annie and Meera started smiling

Meanwhile,

Geet is standing in front of the mirror

Geet: Babaji ye kya kar diya maine sachhi mujhse bada paagal koi nahi hoga bhala aisi bhi koi parampara hothi hai kya pagli kahiki bolnese pehle ek baar soch toh lethi [O God what did I do? I am indeed a fool I should have thought atleast once before leaking out all the secrets why couldn't I think that there can be no such tradition]

Geet: Par main sochthi kaise ye baat Maan ne kahi thi aur Maan ki har baat mere liye iss duniya ki aakhiri baat ho jaati hai aww'iska matlab hai Maan ne mujhse apni Mayari se jhooth kaha aane doh unhe unki khair nahi bilkul bhi baat nahi karungi unse baat toh dur unhe apnea as paas bhi mandrane nahi dungi [But how could I doubt this tradition Maan was the one who told me this and for me every word of Maan is the last word of this world, aww' that means he lied to me let him come I won't spare him I won't talk to him forget about talking I won't allow him to enter my room]

Maan: Bapre Madam ka gussa toh saatve aasman par hai [O my God her anger has reached its peak point]

Maan: Koi baat nahi ek baar pyar se aawaz detha hoon yun meri baho mein chali aayegi [No problem I will take her name with so much love that she will immediately melt in my arms]

Maan: Mayari

Geet grabs a pillow in her hand and starts walking towards Maan with a beautiful smile on her face

Maan (thinking) Main jaanta tha meri Geet mujhse kabhi naaraz nahi ho sakthi [ I knew my Geet can never be angry on me]

He opened his arms as he was expecting Geet to hide herself in his embrace

Geet walks towards him and takes the pillow and starts hitting him with all her strength

Geet: Ek toh galti karte hai aur sorry bolne k bajaye mujhe baho mein bharne k sapne dekh rahe hai[First of all u commit a mistake and instead of apologizing u r dreaming of taking me in ur embrace]

Maan was totally shocked by her reaction

Maan: Ouch Geet mujhe dard ho raha hai pls mujhe marna bannd karo[Ouch Geet it is hurting pls stop hitting me]

Geet: Ek aur bahana Khuranaji pillow se dard nahi hotha par haan flower vase se dard zarur hoga aaj aap Geet k gusse se bach nahi paayenge aur na hi main aapke dramebaazi mein phasne wali hoon [Another excuse Khuranaji I have never heard that someone can be hurt with a pillow but I am sure that a person can definitely be injured with a flower vase, today u won't b able to escape from my wrath and I u won't b able to pacify me with ur sweet talks]

Maan: Jaan apne Maan ki baat toh sun lo [Darling just listen to me once]

Geet went on hitting Maan with the pillow

Geet: Kissing ka tradition haan ab main aapko Hoshiyaarpur ka tradition batathi hoon [Kissing tradition right, now let me tell u the tradition of Hoshiyaarpur]

Maan takes the pillow from her hand and locks his eyes with Geet. He looks at her seductively and with immense love

He placed his hand on her waist and whispered huskily

Maan: Hoshiyaarpur ki sherniji kaunsi parampara ki baat aap keh rahi thi kya hai Hoshiyaarpur ki parampara bataiyena [Tigress of Hoshiyaarpur what tradition were u talking about tell me na]

Geet grabbed a flower vase in her hand and without breaking the eye lock she too responded in a seductive tone

Geet: Puri karenge iss parampara ko? [Will u participate in this tradition?]

Maan brushed his lips with hers

Maan: Hukum kijiye aapke liye toh jaan bhi haazir hai ji [Order me I can sacrifice my life for u]

Geet: Hoshiyaarpur ki paramapara ye hai k shadi se pehle dulha dulhan k haatho se khoob peete [The bride is supposed to beat her bridegroom black and blue befor marriage this is the tradition of Hoshiyaarpur]

She raised the vase to hit him but Maan was quick enough to escape her attack

He ran from her room and Geet closed the door immediately

Geet: Bade aaye the apni pyari baato se mujhe manane [It won't b easy for u to pacify me with your sweet talks]

Maan: Baapre ye toh sachmuch ki sherni jag gayi ab iss sherni ko apni Maayari mein kaise badlu? [O God she was indeed a tigress now how am I supposed to change this tigress back to my Mayari?]

Maan: Kuch toh karna padega [I need to do something]

He started smiling as he got an idea

The window of Geet's room was open

Maan had collected different gifts and had placed them on the ground

He used a rope and attached it with a small basket

He successfully directed one end of the rope on the window of Geet's room

He placed the first gift in the basket it was a beautiful bunch of red roses

He pulled the other end of the rope so that the basket could reach the window

Geet was fuming in anger in her room when she noticed something on her window

She walked towards the window and saw the basket

She noticed Maan standing beneath her window holding his ears and asking for forgiveness

Her heart melted after seeing this sight, no one dared to stand in front of the great Maan Singh Khurana and here the same man was holding his ears in front of her but this time she had to control her emotions she opened the basket and found beautiful red roses in it

She took the flowers from the basket and moved in a backward direction

Maan: Chalo phool le liya matlab ye sab jhooth mutha ka gussa hai [She accepted my flowers that means her anger is fake]

Before Maan could say something else Geet showered him with the stem of those flowers

Geet: Pyar ki rahe aasan nahi hothi ji kaatho par bhi chalna seekh lijiye [The path of love is not so easy u need to learn to walk on the thorns as well]

Geet twisted her nose and made herself comfortable on the bed

Maan: Huh ye kya tareeka hua kaate mujhe de diye aur phool khud k paas rakh liya main bhi dekhta hoon tum kab tak mujhse u ruthi rahogi [Huh' what was this she kept the flowers for herself and she gifted me these thorns okay let me also see how long will ur fake anger exist]

Maan pulled the rope towards himself and placed the second gift in it

It was her favourite chocolate which Geet could never resist

He once again pulled the rope and Geet could see the basket in front of her window

She walked towards the window and opened the basket and her heart started jumping in joy on seeing her favourite chocolates

She took those chocolates and looked at Maan

Maan: Meri sweet si would be wife k liye ye sweet sa taufa [A sweet gift for my sweet would be wife]

He winked at her. Geet gave him a sweet smile and took some steps in the backward direction

Maan: Hasi toh phasi, good job MSK aakhirkaar tune apni jaan ko mana hi liya [The one who laughs get caught, good job MSK finally u were successful in pacifying your ladylove]

But his dreams lasted only for few seconds as Geet threw some Bitter Gourds on his head

Geet: Mere kadwe se would be husband k liye ek perfect kadwa gift [A perfect gift for my sour would be husband]

Maan: Geet tum' [Geet u..]

Geet showed a thumbs down to Maan and again made herself comfortable on the bed

Maan: Ab main hukum ka ikkam use karne jaa raha hoon Mayari ab toh tumhe manna hi hoga [I am going to use the ace of spades now Mayari ur anger will calm down in a matter of seconds now]

Maan placed a cute Teddy and a small note in the basket and pulled the rope

Geet opened the basket and finds the teddy in it she notices the note and starts reading it

Note:

"Ye teddy samalke rakhna Mayari ye mera pehla taufa hai humare pyar ki pehli nishani humare baby k liye jab wo humari zindagi mein aayega tab humara pyar aur bhi gehra ho jaayega wase batau tumhe pehle ek Junior Dhusht Danav chahiye ya phir ek Junior Mayari?

[Keep this teddy carefully Geet it is my first gift for the sign of our love, our baby. I can guarantee u Geet the day our baby enters our life our love would become all the more beautiful by the way what would u like to have first a junior Dhust Danav or a junior Mayari? ]

Geet blushed after reading his note all her anger melted in a matter of seconds

She was still lost in those naughty yet soul touching sentences of Maan when Maan pulled the rope and removed the basket and he himself got to her window with the help of the rope

He entered her room and whispered huskily in her ear

Maan: Bataiye Mrs. Khurana ladka k ladki? [Tell me Mrs. Khurana boy or girl?]

Geet hid her face in his chest

Geet :Aap bahut bure ho Maan aakhir aapne mujhe mana hi liya phir se aap jeeth gaye aur mera gussa haar gaya [U r very bad Maan u managed to pacify me successfully u won and my anger failed]

Maan caressed her back lovingly and dipped his head to place a kiss on her shoulder

Maan: Maan aur Geet k beech kabhi bhi gussa aa hi nahi sakha hum dono k beech agar kuch hai toh wo hai pyar aur aaj bhi humara pyar hi jeeta hai Geet aur aage bhi jeeth humesha hi humare pyar ki hi hogi [Anger has no place in between Maan and Geet only love can exist inbetween the two of us and today also our love has emerged victorious and this would go on in the future as well]

Geet: I love u Maan

Maan: I love u Mrs. Khurana

Geet blushed and submitted herself completely to his love

Precap 1: Maaneet's romantic Holi😳 and Dev's tragic Holi😆
Precap 2: Wedding preparations begin😃😃😃

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome di...
loved it to the core...
the last gift was defo hukum ka ikka!!!!!!!
loved the gussa of our sherni...
ll be waiting for more updates di...

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