~~Chasing Midnight~~Kriyaansh FF - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont mind both
combine both plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnxx for d suggestions..😊
Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think 1st option is nyc 1... coz marriage nd all... i dnt want all dat yar... seriusly... marriage nahi...
mjhe 1st option zyada btr lga... baaki up2 voting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
well i would lyk u to combine both n continue the story n if u cant combine both then i'll prefer 2nd one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
..Thanxx for d suggestions.It wud be started wid clg n dey will get married during d college days itself very soon without telling deir friends due to some problems..
Hope none of d suggestors will becum angry..plss.

It will take just 1 min to read dis...plss do read to get a clear picture of d story.
Cumin to introduce d characters dat will take off d story..
Rey n kriya as defined upto now..
Seniors:-rey,sharon n neha.
Sharon Raiprakash-a good n an evil vampire sometimes.
-rey n neha's friend
-Likes rey personally
Neha-a gud vampire too..senior attituded person.
-sharon n rey's friend.

Juniors:-kriya,swayam n vicky.
Swayam-a vampire{none knows except rey}
-rey's cousin{der relationship is personal n no one knows}
-kriya n vicky's friend.

Vicky-a normal freak out person
-believes in friendship

Shivam-an evil vampire{vampire who hunts vampires}

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He pulls himself from her n looks at her innoncent face.Their eyes get locked.Her soft, delicate, brown curls were now a sweaty mess, her eyes were clouded with tears.He could feel her pain.
"I'm so sorry," he choked out, lightly brushing her cheek.His dark hair fell over his face as he sob over her body.She wiped his tears without stopping d admiration of his eyes.She jerked her neck to d side for him to continue."You've to do dis.Der is no other way,do it",she demanded.
He bent down to d neck n whispers,"u r d best part of my life ever".He kisses her n then bites.She whines in pain.But he was right there was very little.Just two pinpricks, then a deep feeling of sleep.She could hear him sucking and swallowing, feel herself began to get dizzy, woozy.Just like giving blood at the donor drive.Except she probably wouldn't get a doughnut after this.
She slumped in his arms and he caught her.She could feel him walk her over her to the bed and lay her down on the top of sheets, then cover with the blanket.He kisses her on d forehead.
"Will I ever see you again?" she asked.It was hard to keep her eyes open.She was so tired.But she could see him very vividly now.He seemed to glow.He looked more substantial.
"Maybe," he whispered."But you'd be safer if you didn't."
She nodded dreamily,sinking into the pillows.
In the morning,she felt logy and told her mom she felt she was coming down with the flu and didn't feel like turning up to d college.When she looked in the mirror, she saw nothing on her neck-there was no wound, no scar.Did nothing happen last night?Was she indeed going crazy?She felt around her skin with her fingertips and finally found it, a hardening of the skin,just two little bumps.Almost imperceptible, but there.
On d next day, she dusted the plaque near the fireplace and looked at it closely.It was inscribed with a family crest.Underneath were the words SINGHANIA HOUSE.He was there with his mom,dad n sumone else maybe his brother.His face was been stroked.
At d night, d rattling of sound doesn't come.She wonders what would have stopped d creature out to d night.Her mind flows in d thoughts.Why is dat der is no more windows crashing?Why did he stop?What must have happened?Is he all right?Did anything happen to him?The final question was soothing like a thunderstruck in her tears.Her eyes start began to moisten.
Lips compressed, she shoved herself and starts sobbing.When her tears had dried she gave up.She was d way too tired n slept off.
She woke up in d morning n stretched her arms,it was like new season had come up to enlighten everyone with happiness and peace.It was d first day of her new college.She went near d window but hesitates to open it.She remembers him n his words,"As long as you keep that windows closed, it can't come in.And I'm safe."Though she tries her level best it was impossible for her to shatter his dreams.
She gets ready,locks d door n catches an auto.In d midway 2 d college it stops.The autodriver says dat it won't get repaired soon.She waits on d road cursing d driver silently.There were no vehicles..it was a dead n silent road..after a while she watches a bike coming by.She stops it.A young,good looking boy was driving it.
Kriya:Plss'can u give me a lift to St.Louis college?
Man:Yes sure..even I'm going der.
Kriya thanks him n gets on d bike.
Man:St.louis..If u don't mind in which year u r studying?
Kriya:Ist year n u..
Man:Ya,I'm studying d same..but I didn't see you anywhere yesterday..
Kriya:I didn't come..today is my first day.
Man:Oh..All d best!!!:)
Kriya:Thank you..
Man:What's your name??
Kriya:Kriya n ur's?
Man:Swayam shekhawat..
They reach d college n get down together.Swayam accompanies kriya n dey go to d class.He introduces his friend.
Swayam:Kriya..he is Vicky.Our classmate..
Kriya:Hi Vicky..nice meeting you.
Vicky:Same here..
Swayam:By d way classes doesn't start now..It wud be better If v go to canteen.
They go to d canteen n sit.Kriya becomes busy checking out each n everything around her.Her eyes get fixed at something'N he was none other dat Vampire..Reyaansh Singhania'How can dis happen?.He is sitting happily with a girl on his lap n an other one beside..She gapes at him wid startled eyes.Swayam notices n snaps his finger infront of her.She realises n pops out.
Swayam:Kriya..wat r u looking at??
Kriya:Nothing..I was just looking around..
Vicky:Wait let me order something for us..
Kriya curses herself.How did u trust him so blindly?How can he do dis?Wat did he do?It was ur mistake u trusted him..He didn't tell u to trust him...He used you kriya..N u r back to support him..crap!!..stop dis..he is nothing but a cheater who cheated u for blood..cheater vampire!!.Kriya was constantly staring at him n he finally notices her.He was happy to see her n smiled broadly but she misunderstands his smie to be a prankful smile.U r fooled kriya..dis is d response u get for trusting a person beyond limits.Vicky disturbs her by giving her a drink.She takes d drink from his hand n haves it.
Kriya:Thanxx Vicky..
Vicky:No thanks n sorry between friends..V r friends.Ok..
Kriya:Ok..I will leave now I have some work..
She glares at him n walks off about to leave.The girl who was sitting on rey's lap stops her.
Girl1:Hey my name is Sharon n ur name..
Kriya:kriya..
Sharon:give respect haan senior'I'm ur senior'u have to call me madam is dat clear N y r u talking to dat swayam..anythng spl..*giggling*
Girl2:N u hav to call me neha madam n him reyaansh sir..get dat!!!
Reyaansh:Stop it both of u..*lukin at kriya*u can go.
Kriya shots a bustful look n leaves.Swayam who was noticing all d while joins kriya outside.
Swayam:Did u feel bad??
Kriya:Bcoz??
Swayam:Sharon..
Kriya:No..took it lite..
Swayam:Forgot to tell you..dey r our seniors n v will have to listen to dem..it is a rule.If they go beyond d rules v can complaint to d princi.
Kriya:Seniors..juniors.Wat d hell?
Just then Sharon who was passing by hears dis.
Sharon:hell..u wud know wat wud b hell mayb within some days baby..
Swayam:Kriya shall v leave.
Kriya:Ya..
Kriya n swayam leaving sharon dumbstruck.Neha comes to her n notices her angry looks.
Neha:Wat happened Sharon..u r lukin serious.
Sharon:Just bcoz of dat kriya..swayam is getting more.
Neha:Don't worry babes..afterall dey r our juniors.Every1 wud b in control within a few days!!
All d day classes go on randomly.Seniors completes der classes before juniors n leave except rey who was waiting for kriya.Kriya bids goodbye to Swicky(swayam n Vicky) n goes insearch of auto.Rey was standing der leaning on a car.She ignores him n moves.
Rey:Kriya I need to speak to u..
Kriya:Imn't interested..sorry.
Rey:Just listen to wat I want to say..
Kriya gives him cold shoulders n goes further.He pulls her n pins her to d car.
Rey:I wanted to see d same kriya who trusted me like hell..not d one who will misunderstand me.
Kriya:Trust?? n U??.You can never be together.U broke my trustn u used me..rey.Sorry..reyaansh singhania.
Rey:It's nothing like that..just listen to me once..
Kriya:I don't think I need to..
Rey:Actually I..
Swayam was moving around d same way.She calls him without listening n he was coming towards dem.Kriya pulls off rey's grip n walks to swayam.She gives a distracted look before she exits.Swayam stops n waits for kriya.Rey was watching for swayam to go n kriya was looking at him from d corner of her eye.
Kriya:Swayam,can u pls drop me to d home?
Swayam:Yeah..sure.
Rey comes to d spot.Swayam was looking at him with wat r u upto look whereas kriya was fuming in anger.
Rey:So u r gonna drop her..
Swayam:Yes..she is my friend.
Rey:I don't care..leave.
Swayam:Sir..but..
Rey:I will drop her safely U can go..
Kriya:No swayam..U r nt going.
Rey goes to swayam n calls him aside n whispers something in his ear.Kriya was getting annoyed.Swayam nods n dey come back.
Swayam:kriya i think u shud wid rey..he is our senior.
Kriya:No thanks..I'll go by myself.
Swayam:It's already too dark..so pls.
Kriya:Bye swayam..
She starts moving.Both of dem tries to stop her but no..she was on her way.Rey tells him to drop her n also sumthing else.
Swayam:kriya stop I'll drop you.
Kriya:Thanks swayam..
Kriya gets on d bike n dey start.They were almost near to d house.Swayam stops d bike.
Swayam:Kriya I think u cud go from here..
Kriya:Thanks..*getting down*
Swayam:My pleasure.
Kriya:Bye swayam..
Swayam:Bye kriya..Gudnyt.

Recap-Rey will tell her d reason..deir bond will form again.

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Plss don't forget to post ur comments...
Any changes u wanted me to make r welcomed..
Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
combine both idea its really difficult to choose one as both are good
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Posted: 13 years ago

Personally I would prefer the 2nd one. We already got to see them in college. I would be eager to know how the storyline move on by getting them married.

Another suggestion could be a combination of both options. Starting from college ending in marriage.

But whatever option u choose i am excited to know how ur ff Chasing Midnight--Kriyansh moves on.

N yeah thanks for turning this SS into a FF. All z best

Plz do pm me when u update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yaar too good poor rey she didnt give a chance to rey to explain amazing update update soon and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updt .thnx for d pm.eagerly waitin for d next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks I prefered the first one only as then it could lead to the 2nd one later on but anyways good idea and loved the update and thanks fro the pm

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