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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

I know everyone was expecting a huge twist in part 2, but to let you guys Part 3 and 4 have the BIGGEST and CRAZIEST twists ever!

The whole Raizada parivaar gathered, surrounding Kushi. She felt more and more nervous. As she tried to release the words from her mouth, nothing would come.

Kushi: There's going to be a new family member joining us soon.

Everyone's faces began to blossom with happiness and tears. As Kushi studied everybody carefully she saw ASR's shocked eyes, he stood there as a statue. While Shyam looked like someone shot him in the head.

As everyone left, ASR closed the door really hard and locked it. Kushi began crying already knowing his response.

Wth! How can she be pregnant, this is impossible...As the terrace scene races back in his mind, he knew his answer. Kushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada , you are going to DIE. He began clenching his fist.

Arnav: The baby your carrying...is it Sh...

Arnav stopped himself.

Arnav: Yeh kaise hua.

Kushi: Bha...

Arnav: For god's sake Kushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada you are DISGUSTING...whose child is this!

Suddenly, Kushi's heart beat stopped, she knew he could be sarroo, but how could he ever say that!

Kushi: Buss! Yeh bacha mera or APKA hai...bhaang ki raat ki vaja sai.

The night raced back into his memory...How could this happen...but it's MY child.

Arnav: You were supposed to be here for 6 MONTHS not 6 LIFETIME damn it!

Kushi began crying all over again

Arnav: It's HER who you want to see in pain and to keep her away from Shyam; this child is the perfect thing. But hurting OUR baby is too cruel. (ASR kept repeating this to himself).

As he looked down, to see Kushi's face he began feeling her pain and decided that he will be a good father. I will have to play along, but honestly I AM happy with the baby...very happy.

Arnav: Mujhe... Ma...maaf kardo.

Kushi: Wiping her tears, KYA!

Arnav: I apologize for what I said and I'll be a good father, to our new baby and I am happy with the baby. Truly am.

This is our mistake and we should handle it, I have always wanted a child, but not this way Kushi thought sadly.

As Kushi smiled her amazing smile...the one Arnav fell in love with, the one he trusted. But the terrace scene raced back into ASRs head. He smiled the coldest smirk possible and went to sleep.

MORNING

This morning shockingly, Arnav found KKGSR by the poolside trembling in the cold. Is she CRAZY, she is pregnant!

Arnav: What are you doing?

Kushi: I know...pickup everything before Di sees.

Arnav shook his head and walked away.

As Kushi got up, she felt severe pain in her back.

Kushi: OUCHH

Arnav: Kushi are you okay?

Arnav grabbed Kushi's soft hands and swept her off the floor into his arms. He carefully placed her on the bed. Kushi stared right Arnav's eyes, there eyelock broke suddenly when there was a knock on the door.

Arnav: I'll get it.

Kushi: Okay

Arnavji yeh kyun karte hain, khabhie Laad Governor banke mujhe rulaate hain aur khabhie ek patti banke mujhe kush karate hain...Kushi thought.

Suddenly, their worst nightmare walked in it was Shyam.

Arnav: Jijaji what are you are you doing here

Shyam: Oh, I brought sweets to congratulate you guys on your baby.

ASR wanted to punch that weirdo, but since Kushi was pregnant he force himself to keep his cool.

Shyam: Kushiji, here is a jalebi for you.

ASR began getting pissed, his fist started to clench up and he was 2 seconds away from killing Shyam.

Kushi's palms got sweatier and sweatier as Shyam got closer and closer...

PRECAP: Kushi will be SHOCKED by ASR's actions and Shyam plans to have the baby KILLED!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
This Is Getting Interesting :) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
omg can't wait to read more ... lovely update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
omgg write fast cant wait to read moree
loved it
add me to ur buddy list and pm me wen u write again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh god save the baby and clear all misunderstanding!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Awesome can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Just read both updates and gosh your hillarious!😆

Seriously, Everyone was sleeping and me on my lappy casually reading this OS, I came to the first part, I read Arnav getting angry as Khushi was in the bathroom and the line 'Arnav: Answer me DAMNT IT!' cracked me up!🤣 Second update, The line 'While Shyam looked like someone shot him in the head.' completely cracked me up aswell, What the!?😆

Really interesting, Gosh Arnav do you have to be so..such a laad governer!? He's so mean to Khushi!? I can't believe e's not possesive over her? I mean how can he think her and Shyaam!? It gives me the shivers thinking about it!🤢

Update soon and please PM me when you update!🤗
Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Awesome update!!

Really getting interesting!! Could u please add me to it list!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cant wait for next part continue soon and thank u so much for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sadly guys I will only update on the weekend because Part 3 accidently got deleted by mistake I am really mad and will try to rewrite it asap...but I will need more likes and comments

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