Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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cadbury26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#791

😊excellent work

u r a master of words ...

some particular words used by u are such that they also truly picturize the whole ff in front of our eyes ... keep goin u r the best ...👏

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Jenni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Okay, that just made me cry. Update please...

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curiousbookworm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#793

this was sooo saad and sooo amazing! i have finals in 2 weeks and yet ... i read all of this FF in one go!! beautiful! i love the connection... (anyway that you could upload a pic of that elie saab dress btw?) !! this is soo saad! any way arnav can meet ajay and then the truth of the matter could come out so that arnav wouldnt "hate" khushi ... or could arnav talk to anjali? but i doubt anjali woukd tell!!

please please Pm me when you update! this is beautufully written and i dontt want to miss ANY of it!!

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#794

the ending quote was awesome...

fab update...

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ASRism

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Posted: 13 years ago

#795

Sonu...OMG that was so emotional and touching...
I think Arnav will get into action now

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__blossom__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#796

Read the whole FF in one go...it was beautiful... Magical I would say...so addictive once I started I couldn't stop... Yu my freind have written the best FF ever I'm so so so much in love with this! Continue soon can't wait to read more
Want to see arnav's reaction to her illness...can't wait to read how yu pen it down...eagerly waiting...loved it!
Plz pm me wen yu update 😊

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#797

Just read the last 2 chapters together! it was beautifully written!

so heart wrenching.

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SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#798

Gosh I wanna cry!

I feel so bad :'( .That goes without saying ofcourse.

When she says 'And he was gone forever' That was no literal-right?? :(

Cant wait to read the next one !!!

Poor Khushi-wish she'd tell him though.I dont doubt he'd be with her till the end! :')

Thanks for the PM! :D

Continue Sooo000n ;D

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#799

yeeey! Updates!

@ ch. 17: Oh my goood, he made pictures! Not only of their day together, but of her. Such a nice memory to keep! Ah man, shes trying to create distance, so heart breaking, fate is being very cruel to them. On the other side, arnav is SO cute, trying to bake a cake for her. BAKE! ASR! hahaahaghah He is sooo sweet, wishing her at 12 exactly! and apparently hes good at cooking too! So weird! Omg, I feel so sad when I think of him finding out about her illness.

Wow, I lve the way you described the kiss, it was so poetic and romantic! And Im a sucker for rain kisses, it reminds me a bit of one tree hill!

Their frolicking lips involuntarily gave birth to a raw passion, so strong that wouldn't be dimmed in a thousand years

Looove this sentence.

@ ch. 18 ; wow. The confession. 'Dont'. I love you, soo sooo much. But I cant be with you! Amazing how you put something so delicate in such perfect words. Ouch, he left. Without saying anything? Not even asking anything? why!? Will he come back? You wrote this sooo beautifully, i feel every emotion soaring through me! great job!