Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139 - Page 79

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Posted: 13 years ago
I really loved it. The emotions were beautifully written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
The lines in the end so beautifully said it all. I love this story and every bit of it. I think, Arnav needs to know - he deserves to know the reason. Wonderfully written!
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Posted: 13 years ago

A rainy night in the city, your hand in mine, a messy room, a silent sigh. Your hand slips away.

Rain keeps on falling, your silky hair. Rain keeps on falling, your salty tears.

Another night some time ago, we walked the streets, lantern lights, stars lit the sky.

We laughed and laughed.

I guess there is a time for everything. A time for everyone. A time to laugh, a time to cry.

I guess, we have had our time.

Wow!! This is so beautiful!! Bt I'm happy dat she said how she feels
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains



ROA#18| A Song Of Ice And Fire II

At first I felt dizzy.

Not with the kind of dizziness that makes the body reel.

But the kind that's like a dead emptiness in the brain.

An instinctive awareness of the void.

-Fernando Pessoa, The Education of the Stoic-

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...

'Khushi. I love''

'Don't. Please.'

...

'So what was this? Over the past few weeks?'

'Arnav''

'What Khushi? Look at me dammit.'

'Arnav''

'You don't feel'the way I do'?'

She braved herself to look into his eyes. They held the same fury that she had last seen the first day she had met him. But it was different now. His eyes spoke volumes to her. She looked back, fighting back the tears that were roaring to spill to soothe the pain in her heart, on seeing the similar pain in his eyes. She breathed in, and spoke. Heart pounding and the blood thudding in both thudding in their ears.

'I love you. So, so much. But I can't be with you.'

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His grip on her loosened, a lone tear dropping from his eyes, one he didn't bother to wipe away. He looked at her, for a long time. Arnav scrutinized her face, searched her eyes, for a shred of hope, love, and regret at what she had said, but found none. All he saw was walls. ...

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Khushi, watched him go, carried her trembling feet towards the door, through which he had left seconds ago. Stood, their, hearing fading footsteps. Her eyes closed, as the stream of warm water made their way down her checks, her neck, burning her to the core. She dropped in a heap, on to the ground, hugging her knees as close as she could. She buried her face between her knees, trying to think that it had all been a nightmare. But she knew that it was not.

He was gone. Gone forever.

Khushi felt tremors the waves of emptiness surge and crash through her body. It finally dawned on her that she had lost him, he had come to her, only to let go.

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You are going to live your life Khushi, not live, survive, she corrected her thoughts mentally. No matter how fatal losing Arnav was'fresh hot tears seared her cheeks again, she looked up into the skies, 'he had been snatched away right from her hands, leaving her completely changed, with only the outer layer of skin above from before, she would continue to play out her life in the same way she had chosen a long time back, in silence.

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A rainy night in the city, your hand in mine, a messy room, a silent sigh. Your hand slips away.

Rain keeps on falling, your silky hair. Rain keeps on falling, your salty tears.

Another night some time ago, we walked the streets, lantern lights, stars lit the sky.

We laughed and laughed.

I guess there is a time for everything. A time for everyone. A time to laugh, a time to cry.

I guess, we have had our time.

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I loved the title.
I loved the dialogue.
I loved how each and every emotion has been described. The play-by-play of the weather, and expressions reflecting each other.
Simply beautiful.
Words cant explain what this evoked in me.
And for that...
👏
~Arya~
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read the last two chapters...mesmerising and heartbreaking. So beautifully written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was so far the BEST UPDATE ...heart touching ...this was the first time i cried reading something
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ouch!!! This one hurt... How could khushi manage no tears? Oh my god!!! This was really sad.. :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was soo sad yet beautifully written, the pain, the expressions, the feelings. 👏 My heart broke for both of them. This was amazing!
Beyond Amazing. 😊

A rainy night in the city, your hand in mine, a messy room, a silent sigh. Your hand slips away.

Rain keeps on falling, your silky hair. Rain keeps on falling, your salty tears.

Another night some time ago, we walked the streets, lantern lights, stars lit the sky.

We laughed and laughed.

I guess there is a time for everything. A time for everyone. A time to laugh, a time to cry.

I guess, we have had our time. ---- I loved this

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Posted: 13 years ago
that update was so emotional ! evokes so much sympathy for Khushi's condition
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

thanks 4 d pm

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