Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#501

loved the update ..

i'm actually looking forward to the next update...😉

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clover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

It was beautifully written.😊

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

another good chapter. thanks for the PM

you have a very light touch in your writing, none of the emotions seem forced

great work

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
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AWWW!

It started off as slightly tense but at least she admitted she missed him and then it was just super cute! Someone stole Arnav's car but it was still cute! ;) :D

I loved the fact that you gave this nice breezy gentle update after the whirlwind of the last part of the last update. This had the romance, the attraction and the wistfulness!

Man, they should kiss already and make it Bella Notte like no other! ;) :D

Thanks for teaching me a new word! :)

I liked the end line the best...gives hope although the way she kissed him, it made me slightly sad at how she is trying to compromise in her life - she so wants Arnav to love and caress but because she cant have (or so she thinks) she will make do with small actions...sigh.

But Arnav is catching on a bit...so good. :)

Update soon.

That was the whole point, I felt the last chapter went a way bit overboard with the emotions, so this one had to be lightweight :)

Also, the kiss on Khushi's part was not exactly a compromise, she didn't think before doing it, it came naturally.

And Rae, I really love your comments, look forward to them 😊

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: appy_12
Nice. Very well written.

They're falling for each other.. And Khushi doesn't want this. She's trying to put as much distance as possible.. But is failing miserably..

So they will end up together.. The last line suggests that..

And are you a linguistics student?? Your writing and sometimes your words.. They amaze me!

Waiting for their Delhi date! :) Continue soon! :)

Thank you so much, glad you liked my work.

And, no I'm not a linguistics student 😛

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

Absolutely beautiful! Love your way of writing ..Thank you for the pm!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: mistyrains

That was the whole point, I felt the last chapter went a way bit overboard with the emotions, so this one had to be lightweight :)
Also, the kiss on Khushi's part was not exactly a compromise, she didn't think before doing it, it came naturally.

And Rae, I really love your comments, look forward to them 😊

That makes me feel better. :)

I got sad thinking of how wistful her life is...but at the same time I cannot help but think how Arnav is going to react when he finds out and he will be pissed, I think, at his sister for hiding it...sigh.

Save him from major heartbreak, wont you? :)

And I look forward to your updates. :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

JUST LOVED IT...IT WAS SUPERB

PLZ UPDATE SOON

THANKS FOR THE PM

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Reserved I started from this will go back and read from start. I liked this part sorry for being haphazard and starting from middle will comment properly later

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#510

OK this was good and really nice ... They did had a beautiful time together ... I really hope Khushi gets better really soon and PLEASE make Arnav find out some how and make her get well soon ... I don't wanna read a heart break in this story, where she might die from cancer...NOOO PLEASE... this was really good and i loved it ... Thanks for the PM ... Please update soon ...