Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

Bella Notte means beautiful night?
I actually thought it would be something like a beautiful maiden or something! :P

Well, anyway, so beautiful it was!
Very! :)
I totally loved how Khushi got back into the cheerful mode, which he now identifies her with!
I know, it was only after he said that he would be there for a week, that she let go, but still, I was glad to have her back! :D

And then, the events that followed were so amazing!

And she called him a dumbass? :O
She did? :D I love her all the more for that!
Well, nobody calls Arnav Singh Raizada a dumbass, nobody!
But when it comes to Khushi, well it doesn't matter anymore, does it? :D

I loved the jalebi part and then the auto part! :D
Brilliant! :D

And then the end about not being with him anymore than needed, did pain a bit, but then I just reveled in the sweet camaraderie that followed, only to be brought crashing back to reality by that last line! :P
Yeah, this FF makes my head go through a myriad of emotions, all at the same time! :P

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

You have got me thinking, people do thrive on a love story which is steeped in mystery and this case on both sides. I am sure the days, evenings and nights are going to beautiful at this rate.

The story is heading in a very meaningful manner, which is keeping the interest levels high, need not say this, but PM or no PM, I really do look forward to this story.

P.S. - I really like Arnav in this story he is still a bit of a Khadoos but a lot more believable.

Edited by kabar1978 - 13 years ago

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#493

Sigh!

So sweet! Neither of them are willing to admit they are falling for each other... They go out and hang out, and have no idea that it is so obvious!

I feel bad for them both, your update is so beautiful, it is sad and heartbreaking to know what is to come their way... Pain. Not prediction, assumption based in the situation, her cancer, and him not having recovered from his mom's death... How in the world is he going to deal with the terminal nature if her illness?

Thank you for the PM!

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

its sooo beautifully written...

and i know that it will end in tears big time...

thanks for the pm

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@.1.1.1.1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

beautiful update, thanks, loved it, plz update soonwa😃

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

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AWWW!

It started off as slightly tense but at least she admitted she missed him and then it was just super cute! Someone stole Arnav's car but it was still cute! ;) :D

I loved the fact that you gave this nice breezy gentle update after the whirlwind of the last part of the last update. This had the romance, the attraction and the wistfulness!

Man, they should kiss already and make it Bella Notte like no other! ;) :D

Thanks for teaching me a new word! :)

I liked the end line the best...gives hope although the way she kissed him, it made me slightly sad at how she is trying to compromise in her life - she so wants Arnav to love and caress but because she cant have (or so she thinks) she will make do with small actions...sigh.

But Arnav is catching on a bit...so good. :)

Update soon.

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago