Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani # 3 - Part 66 Pg 56 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update
loved it
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loved it
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🥳CONGOS on becoming GOLDIE!!!!!🥳
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Originally posted by: ruchs

🥳CONGOS on becoming GOLDIE!!!!!🥳


Thankyou sooo much :)
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Originally posted by: ruchs

EDIT:

ME FIRST???😲

Loved how everyone teased them...😆

Haaye the proposal was so sweetl!!!😳

Geet's proposal was awesome'.😳

Loved the engagement rings too'😆

OMG maan bhi na kahin bhi shuru ho jaata hai'😉

Everyone is so sweet and happy for them'😳

really waiting for Holi celebration'.😳

Loved the update a lot!!!😳

Sholly for getting gayab'.😳

Love you'
Ruchi


it is fine don't worry...

glad that you liked the update...

ab haan...thodi teasing session toh honi chahiye na...

ab holi update is going to be really good..

and i hope yoou lot like it...
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yaar iska bhi update dedo na plzzz
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any chance of update today????????
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Heey...me back with an update...😉 THE LOOONGEST Update you can ever imagine! It is about 16 pages long...now I want comments from all you...Long comments...this took me ages to write...so I think I deserve long comments for this one! 😉


Part 62


Arohi was sleeping happily in her room when arjun crept inside her room and tip-toed in, to see her sleeping. He took some pink colours in his hand and then rubbed it on her cheek, and whispered Happy Holi in her ears. Arohi jumped up in bed and saw Arjun standing their with his arms crossed looking at her amused.

Arohi: Arjun...aap? I mean what are you doing here? (Arjun came forward and whispered in her ears)

Arjun: Rang lagane aya tha...I hope you don't mind.

That was when arohi had realised what he had done and then Arjun ran off, smirking to himself, where as Arohi was already in a bad mood.

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Here Geet was just waking up when she felt a hand on her cheek bone, a big masculine hand that she could recognise. "Maan" she whispered in her sleep. She opened her eyes to see the most gorgeous sight ever...her maan dressed in a white kurta looking absolutely dashing. She felt a soft kiss on her forhead, as he bent down and claimed her.

Maan: Good Morning Geet...

Geet: Good Morning...(she blushed)

Maan went on the side and sat down on the edge of her bed and pulled her on his lap.

Maan: Geet yeh humari pehli holi hain saath main...jab tum meri zindagi main ayi tho tumne meri berang zindagi main khuhiyian bardhi...aur aaj main meri mishty ko rang lagaunga...

He lifted her top a bit from the nightdress, and caressed her tummy with the red colours. Geet closed her eyes to savour the feeling. His hands moved around her navel and slightly pinched her. "Ouch" moaned geet. She opened her eyes to see the naughty smirk of her fianc. She made a pouty face at him which made him chuckle.

Geet: Maan...ab aap jayiye...mujhe tayiaar hona hain..

Maan: So get ready then...I haven't stopped you but I am sitting right here!

Geet: Maan please...(her cheeks turned red)

Maan: Geet itna sharmao math...I mean main hi hoon aur humse kya chupana...(he smirked)

Geet: MAAAN...

Maan: Jaa raha hun...mishty!

He pulled her closed by her waist and gave a quick peck on her cheeks and left her.

Maan: baaki baad main...

He then left the room quickly, where as geet hid her face in the pillow. She felt like a teenager who was head over heels in love with her maan. She then went for a quick shower.

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The holi preparations were just beginning. Everything was ready and prepared. The whole farm house illuminated with colours of all sorts and lots of sweets, jalebi's and bhang. The atmosphere was full of colours and excitement from each individual. After getting ready, Geet came out and saw everyone, she wished everyone a happy holi.

All the Families and friends gathered in the main hall to start with a small Pooja. Dadi and Mummiji started the prayers while everyone else just concentrated and prayed together. Maan and geet were holding hands, like almost promising to be together no matter what problems they would have but they would always share that together, while the rest were busy looking at each other, promising the same thing. Soon the Pooja ended and now it was time for the masti. Everyone was gathered outside, ready to play Holi. They were men with drums around their necks, people who were making thandai and bhang and fresh jalebi's being cooked on the spot. It was the perfect celebration, the ambiance decorated with beautiful colours cloths and 10 tables full of every colour that was available and 5 big round swimming pools full of coloured water and a lots of pichkaris.

Savetri Devi came with a thal of pink colour and to start the celebration she applied small amount of colour on everyone's foreheads like a tika. All the young, bowed down to touch all the elders feet. Geet and maan bent down together to take her blessing and them mummji-papaji's feet.

Mummiji: Jeete raho bete...

Papaji: Jeete raho...

Annie: What a cute couple...(Everyone giggles)


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Arman: Arre...yaar...dhol bajana shuru karo...

The drums sent a wave of excitement in everyone, it symbolised the start of the holi festival. Everyone's hearts started pumping loudly with the excitement.

All: HAPPY HOLI...BURA MAT MANO HOLI HAIN...

All the girls were on one side while the boys were on the were on the side. All of them grabbed the colours in their fists and threw it in the air. It was like a song competition between both the girls and boys.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=uyh9jYSGpCg[/YOUTUBE]

ghansham aaj holi ka
sang hai gopi ganwar
gaawat gori kamal
sang sang naache
dhin kit dhin kit dhinan
baajat mridang taal
sang sang ek saath
ek radha naache
sar ra ra bhar rang daal
bheegi chunari yeh laal
de bhar pichkari daal
shaam nahi aaye
bhar ra ra bhar aayo bhaag
jaage hai sabke bhaag
sang sang ek saath ek radha naache
aarr ra ra mat rang daal
bheegi chunari hamar
arra ra ra ra raa

The boys came forward and started dancing towards the girls and put colour on them lovingly. Maan came close to geet and put her red colour on her cheeks and her saree that she was wearing, where as Yash came close to Meera and filled her maang with the red colour.


do me a favour lets play holi
rangon mein hai pyar ki bol
ho mere pichhe pichhe pichhe kyon aaye
mera jiya jiya kyon dhadkaaye
jaa re jaa dont touch my choli
uff yeh holi haai yeh holi
hey do me a favour lets play holi
uff yeh holi haai yeh holi
rangon mein hai pyar ki boli

The girls got colours in their hands and put them lovingly on the boys. Arohi came close to Arjun and dropped a whole plate of rang on him for revenge for the morning. While Mohit and Dil were having fun putting colour on each other and messing with each other.

uff yeh holi haai yeh holi
do me a favour lets play holi
neela peela laal gulaal
uspe tere gore gaal
kaali kaali aankhon wali
mast mast hai teri chaal
hai bahana holi ka

Arman came to Riddhima and twisted her around and twirled her around, almost dancing with her and them put colour on her. Adi and Pinky were standing in one corner with Annie, feeling awkward but still enjoying the ambience.


paas aana chahe tu
chaand se mere chehre pe
rang lagana chahe tu
ohhh holi hai aani jaani
tere dil mein hai beimaani
main nahi hu itni bholi
uff yeh holi haai yeh holi
do me a favour lets play holi
uff yeh holi haai yeh holi
do me a favour lets play holi
u
ff yeh holi haai yeh holi

The Song soon came to an end but everyone was still in the mood to dance some more.

Yash: Kya yaar...band kyun kardiya?

Mohit: Haan...itna maza aa raha tha...

Just then Serena and tasha came and joined them. Maan had invited them too as Serena was Dadima's best friend's daughter so he felt that he should and Geet was also supporting him so no-one could say a thing.

Serena: Hi MK...

Tasha: Hello Sir...

Maan just nodded...to them and then went back to talk with Yash.

Pinky, Meera and Geet were standing on the side.

Pinky: Dekha Geet...uss Serena ko...she knows your his fiance..but still unpe line maar rahi hain...kamini..

Meera: haan..yaar she has no manners that his fiance is standing right there...par phir bhi...bahot chalu lag rahi hain...

Geet: Tum dono...ab please phir se shuru mat ho jao...yeh maan ki guest hain...aur sirf holi ke liye ayi hain...kal engagement pe nahi thi na...

Pinky: Yeh Pyaar main andhi ho gayi hain!

Geet: Pinky...aur waise Sasha ne sirf Hi hi bola hain...

Pinky: Tujhe dikh nahi raha...kaise ji-jaji ko ghuur rahi hain!

Meera: I agree with pinky...

Geet: Uff...tum dono bhi na...(saying that she left)

Everyone was engaged in chatting when Arman was looking at Riddhima. She looked so beautiful in what she was wearing. As if in a trance, Arman came forward and some light music started.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=zkqVKdeUEG4[/YOUTUBE]


He came to Riddhima and started singing to her when everyone giggled looking at their new found love.

Rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jaayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

Riddhima reciprocated her love and started to sing back to him in a soft voice. Arman took some colour in his hand and rubbed it softly on riddhima's cheek, and riddhima did the same lovingly.

Hey, rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jaayega tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayega sang

Rang sang mera mil jaayega, ang ang tera khil jaayega
Rang sang mera mil jaayega, ang ang tera khil jaayega

Riddhima saw Arman coming towards her with fists full of colour so she decided t run and she was running avoiding pillars but in the end, arman found her and pinned her to the pillar.

Rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jaayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

He then carefully let his hands slide down her dress and let it fill it with his colourfull love. Riddhima felt sparks with his touch and instantly, hugged him. He pulled her closer and playfully bit her cheek.

Rangon mein hai ishq pyaar
Aankhon mein hai mast bahaar
Ho baahon mein hai pehla yaar
Arre lamhon mein hai intezaar

She then turned around in his arms and stood there for a little while, conveying her feelings towards him. Arman then swiftly turned her around and dipped his head and kissed her passionately, tasting her inner secrets. He then pulled back after what seemed like ages. Riddhima blushed scarlet red.

Honton pe hai ek pukaar, dil mein hai dard-e-zahaar

Honton pe hai ek pukaar, dil mein hai dard-e-zahaar
Haan, rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jaayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

They were back to the reality when they felt all their friends around them.

Geet: Arre...wah Arman...you dance nice...and riddhima you too...

Annie: hmm...kyun Arman...chupa rustam nikle tum tho...

Yash: Arre...bechare Arman ko kyun bol rahe ho...Riddhima bhi toh hain...

Mohit: Hmm...kyun...

Arohi: hmm...par bhai...aapke gaal pe joh lipstick...(Riddhima looked wide-eye at Arman while everyone burst out in laughter)

Riddhima blushed scarlet red and Arman just looked embarrassed. Riddhima went over and cleaned his face lovingly, mouthing a quick sorry. Just then a servant came with thandai, but no-one knew someone's mischief who mixed bhang with the thandai. Everyone refused to take some as they thought it was too early for some thandai except Yash, who seemed to be in a great mood.

Suddenly Yash pulled Meera, giving her half a shock and everyone else too, while Arohi giggled. Everyone suddenly stared at Arohi looking for some sort of explanation.

Arohi: Woh...thandai nahi thi..bhang thi...(All the girls gave a glare to Arohi while the boys laughed looking at Arohi's mischief)


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