OS: The Big 'Bhang' Effect - Page 7

That was amazing, I just hope the Holi episode gives us a respite in their war and we can see them together properly even if only for a few minutes.

awww he expecting her to apply color on him.. that was very very sweet... Loved it..

Loved it. Please write more!

He pulled her away from his tight hug and held her hand and led her to her duvet on the floor. He sat down on it, leaning his back on the wall and stretched out his legs. He then gestured her to come and sit between his legs. She obediently obliged and placed herself between him and carefully leaned her head on his shoulder, wrapping her arms around his body. He held her tightly around her waist, providing the warmth of his body to her. He pulled the Duvet on top of them, shielding them completely from the night's cold wind.

Khushi- "Why do you hate me Arnavji?" she looked up innocently at his face and asked him.

Arnav-"Why do you hate me Khushi?" he questioned her back, his eyes full of pain and hurt.

hey i can imagine this scene..really cute..hope something like this happens...

just nw reasd ur other OS..wow ..they are fantastic..

Dady and baby raizada - really cuteee...

Moving on.. oh no...

i need that thing --funny🤣

Till the end- i liked it...couldnt name the feelings i had while reading this..really nice..touching..

check and mate-wow funny naughty and hot...

really liked these..

and nw am reading chalo bhai Australia series...

Pls Pm me when ur next work is ready dear...

The cute, romantic OS is way better than the hot one. I feel like writing something romantic is harder than the mature OS because it's really easy to go cheesy. This OS was def not cheesy. Super cute. 👏

loved it to the core...well written... i loved it...thank yoou very much for that wonderful os...

it was awesome...it completely explained their state of mind well...

HOW WAS IT??wat a dumb question is that yaaar...without any gutteriness it was just all the more delicious ...ufff i wna this exactly to happen and more also!! please go and tell this to the cvs!

SUPERB! 👏 👏
Anyway I'll be read'g ur OS's 4 sure...
Plz add me in ur PM list

aweee... love it!!! loved the part when you described how arnav was gloomy and disappointed and it turned into all smiles when khushi put holi colors on him; it showed how he is still a child at heart, so vulnerable despite his mature look.