New Abhi Nikki FF - From You to Me-Completed - Page 12

Rucha , good catch 😊 . I understood what Jibs meant though.

First of all I owe you an apology for not editing my previous res but sachi I was thinking of editing it today when I saw you post another part and this kinda ruin whatever I thought of posting. Did you get what I'm trying to say?🤔 I'm trying to say that I was kinda curious to find out what Abhi was going to tell Sid, was he going to tell him his little secret or was he going to cook up a new story to cover what he blurted out due to the heat o the moment. But now, I got my answer.😉 Last part was fab and this part was even more interesting and nice. Loved evry bit of it.
The little AN moment, Abhi holding Nikki as she passed on and then turning all caring types, me likey.😉 He loves her so much but the arrogant man would never accept, how I love his attitude!😍 lol
And then Nikki-Sid convo was actually a little surprising, I didn't think she would let him know that much but then she needed someone to share and she has definitely found a true friend cum patient listener in Sid. I love their bonding.
That Sid-Tam element that you've added in the story is cute too. But the best thing was that suspicion that has cropped in Abhi's mind...lol...I'm loving this confusion. I wanna know what Abhi will do under the effect of his jealousy.😈 Men are illogical when jealous.
I'm curious and all impatient for the next update.😉
Update soon!

oops ... i dint even send out pm's for this part ... heheheh my bad

I like how you portray the thoughts of two different individuals in same scene.. A is just trying to be professional and hide Sid being his brother while N sees their trust issues, indifference in it.. Clever..

And N getting rude with Sid... unconscious anger and frustration is so evident but Sid's innocence and good intentions cant keep her secluded for too long. Like that.

Oh and how easy going Sid is and how genuinely he cares for N.. I again want to reiterate that i am loving him in your FF :) He seems more adorable than A and N right now with all thats going on between A and N :) And from Sid's point of view, it only proves why he likes N so much.. Even after finding out Sid being A's brother she has changed her attitude towards him.. She sees his capabilities, willingness to not use or tar A's name for any favors.. I think that he feels sad only because A cant see it or believe that..

Another wonderful piece when A comes to N's cabin to see how she is doing. N is obviously bothered that A isnt bothered about her well being.. but surely A is also feeling guilty for things he said and he genuinely apologized.. Cute.. Its awesome how you show his indifference and care towards her in same scene.. He did tell her to take care of herself afterall..A surely knows how to confuse N.. He keeps showing that he has moved on and doesnt care for her and yet he does these small things and she is back to square one when he shows that care.. How can she know if that was a colleague or a person who once was so interested in her.. So many mixed signals.. And there you think was time when A complained N for giving mixed signals.. He is epitome of mixed signals at moment.. I am glad you show this U turn in their feelings, emotions..

Oh and how genuine A and Sid's relationship sound... It just proves Sid just wants his bro to not underestimate him.. he so genuinely cares for him and feels so *apanapan* that he practically lights up at just two nice sentences from him.. Finally its good to see A atleast seeing the efforts sid is making... And how cute it was of sid to plan for getting treat at Taj and A giving in :) Its good to see this fun and caring side of A which cant come out in hospital where he goes all bossy.. and then at home he is conflicted that if he goes soft Sid might not learn all the things he needs to.. but A has finally learnt that its ok to go soft once in a while...

Amazing job girls... I am so so glad for this theme, the approach you are taking, The details you take care of.. It makes me want to read next one right away.. Guess that's what all writers crave for, their readers looking forward to next one even with more eagerness.. and you have dont it.. Congratualations... :)

Just to make you guys a little anxious ... the next part is ready ...almost ... and if I may say so ... it's super good ...main to senti hogayi use pad ke 😳 so well written ...

@jyothi , Thanks dear . There , I was almost worried when i did not see your comment . But then I did and I am so happy 😊

@immamayurfan , Thanks a lot. So glad you liked the part .

@Rucha , So now I see why you are so busy 😊. Great job with the birthday thread all you guys . I am sure AT is one lucky man to have fans like you all.

@ cukish , ariel , ruch , Trish , hemvb , piya-jiya , Thanks a lottt guys . Your likes really mean a lot to us .

Originally posted by: Nehu_1

First of all I owe you an apology for not editing my previous res but sachi I was thinking of editing it today when I saw you post another part and this kinda ruin whatever I thought of posting. Did you get what I'm trying to say?🤔 I'm trying to say that I was kinda curious to find out what Abhi was going to tell Sid, was he going to tell him his little secret or was he going to cook up a new story to cover what he blurted out due to the heat o the moment. But now, I got my answer.😉 Last part was fab and this part was even more interesting and nice. Loved evry bit of it.
The little AN moment, Abhi holding Nikki as she passed on and then turning all caring types, me likey.😉 He loves her so much but the arrogant man would never accept, how I love his attitude!😍 lol
And then Nikki-Sid convo was actually a little surprising, I didn't think she would let him know that much but then she needed someone to share and she has definitely found a true friend cum patient listener in Sid. I love their bonding.
That Sid-Tam element that you've added in the story is cute too. But the best thing was that suspicion that has cropped in Abhi's mind...lol...I'm loving this confusion. I wanna know what Abhi will do under the effect of his jealousy.😈 Men are illogical when jealous.
I'm curious and all impatient for the next update.😉
Update soon!

Hey Nehu ,

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

I like how you portray the thoughts of two different individuals in same scene.. A is just trying to be professional and hide Sid being his brother while N sees their trust issues, indifference in it.. Clever..

And N getting rude with Sid... unconscious anger and frustration is so evident but Sid's innocence and good intentions cant keep her secluded for too long. Like that.

Oh and how easy going Sid is and how genuinely he cares for N.. I again want to reiterate that i am loving him in your FF :) He seems more adorable than A and N right now with all thats going on between A and N :) And from Sid's point of view, it only proves why he likes N so much.. Even after finding out Sid being A's brother she has changed her attitude towards him.. She sees his capabilities, willingness to not use or tar A's name for any favors.. I think that he feels sad only because A cant see it or believe that..

Another wonderful piece when A comes to N's cabin to see how she is doing. N is obviously bothered that A isnt bothered about her well being.. but surely A is also feeling guilty for things he said and he genuinely apologized.. Cute.. Its awesome how you show his indifference and care towards her in same scene.. He did tell her to take care of herself afterall..A surely knows how to confuse N.. He keeps showing that he has moved on and doesnt care for her and yet he does these small things and she is back to square one when he shows that care.. How can she know if that was a colleague or a person who once was so interested in her.. So many mixed signals.. And there you think was time when A complained N for giving mixed signals.. He is epitome of mixed signals at moment.. I am glad you show this U turn in their feelings, emotions..

Oh and how genuine A and Sid's relationship sound... It just proves Sid just wants his bro to not underestimate him.. he so genuinely cares for him and feels so *apanapan* that he practically lights up at just two nice sentences from him.. Finally its good to see A atleast seeing the efforts sid is making... And how cute it was of sid to plan for getting treat at Taj and A giving in :) Its good to see this fun and caring side of A which cant come out in hospital where he goes all bossy.. and then at home he is conflicted that if he goes soft Sid might not learn all the things he needs to.. but A has finally learnt that its ok to go soft once in a while...

Amazing job girls... I am so so glad for this theme, the approach you are taking, The details you take care of.. It makes me want to read next one right away.. Guess that's what all writers crave for, their readers looking forward to next one even with more eagerness.. and you have dont it.. Congratualations... :)

Hey Pri , another super comment from you . Thanks so much .

Originally posted by: pra19

@Rucha , So now I see why you are so busy 😊. Great job with the birthday thread all you guys . I am sure AT is one lucky man to have fans like you all.

hmm.. thank you! :)

Update was really nice... Abhi is getting possesive... Me likes :D yar i d have loved 2 see nikki in her sari.. Must be looking really gorgeous.. Enough to take Abhi's breathe away... ;)
ya AN moments... Thanks... I realy enjoy reading them.😃
🤗 you rock !!!
Im waiting eagerly for the next part.. As Mitzi is saying its really good n well written.😃

Originally posted by: ANrucha

hmm.. thank you! :)

Update was really nice... Abhi is getting possesive... Me likes :D yar i d have loved 2 see nikki in her sari.. Must be looking really gorgeous.. Enough to take Abhi's breathe away... ;)
ya AN moments... Thanks... I realy enjoy reading them.😃
🤗 you rock !!!
Im waiting eagerly for the next part.. As Mitzi is saying its really good n well written.😃