*A FairyTale Ending* - SaJan Story

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Awesome update manjari...lovd the cat fight.lolz
omggg wats wrong with Samrat?
Cnt wait to know...
Thanks 4 d pm

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Shreya

@SM_317

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

heyyy manjiii🤗

wow amazinggg nd rocking part..😉

rofll samrat crying while watchng movie,,🤣nd loved d whole phn call thing..he slept while tlkng to her..🤣poor gunjan..🤪

but d last part was really shockingg😲

i guess Samrat does have feelings for her..nd he got jealous seeing gunjan dancing wid sum guy..

but felt bad for gunjan..any girl would get shocked if her best frnd comes nd kisses her out of nowhere..🥺😒

eagerly waiting 4 d next part..

cont soon..

love uu

SP..

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Awsum part Manji!!! 🤗 🤗

I love the way how you write down each and every word so nicely!

Samrat was hillarious in the first half of the update! 🤣 🤣

I was literally shocked at the second half! Samrat kissed Gunjan?? 😲 But that's not much of shock as he has feelings for her, he is only yet to realize them, isn't it? 😳 I wonder how Gunjan must be feeling after the kiss... she was so confused and several questions ran in her mind! 🤔

Do continue soon... and sorry for late comment, was pretty busy in replying to comments on my FFs! 😆

Love,

Ria.

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: -ritchelle-
Oh my God.

Manjari, this is fantastic! Sam went and made out with Gunjan? Holy crap! I mean he really was high, wasn't he? But one thing that I realised, he really has feelings for her, and he's not aware of it..cause like when you're drunk, its like you land up saying the truth and kinda doing stuff straight from your heart, cause you're not thinking straight!

I just hope Gunjan's alright! She seemed so hurt and betrayed! I would too, I mean, her best friend made out with her in the middle of a party, embarrassed her, and kinda insulted their friendship! Gosh, I just hope everything's alright!

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Lots of Love,

Rit
PS: I'm already in SG!
PPS: You're sick? Kya hua? I hope you're okay now! Do take care of yourself okay?

Hey Rit 🤗 Thank you so much ! Haha, told you this Fic will be full of suprises because it is from 1st person point of view. You feel what she feels.

Lol, yes, that's what people say, but who knows?

Will update tonight..!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: saduf
awww... that was such a beautiful update
poor gujan her dreams must be shattered with samrat's action and i guess samrat was secretly in love with gunjan thats why is becomes jealous of Rick dancing with gunjan which force him to take this step and i also think that samrat subsided his love for a long time because of gunjan's detail of her prince charming and samrat does not fit in it...poor samrat his POV must be shown as well
awesome update
totally loved it

continue soon
Sadaf

Hey Sadaf 🤗 Thank youuu! Yea, it is a disaster when your best friend kisses youin front of your whole college!

OhMyGod, you actually went so far back. Wow. You are analysing this fic very well :)

And yes, I will be showing Samrat's point of view also, but in a different way!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: MoNayaLover96
Wow!! This update was just superb!! Really was shocking !! When Gunjan danced with Rick it looked like Samrat really didn't like it !! He does have feelings for Gunjan but deep inside his heart! He just hasn't realized it! Well that's Samrat alright! Always realizing after a BIG hungama!

But felt very bad for Gunjan! She is right in her proverb! Anybody would feel like this if his/her best comes out of nowhere & kisses her in public!! He was really high on drink! Man I really hope nothing worse happens now! But looks like damage has already been done!

cont soon Dear! Can't wait for the next part..!!

Get well soon! Hope you come back with a great health & another mind-blowing update!

Love,
Nila ❤️

Hey Nila 🤗 Thank you so much! Yea, ofcourse he didn't.

Haha. I know, it was unexpected for Gunjan as you read how she felt after or during the kiss.

I will update soon!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: -CreativeSoul-
awesome update manji 🤗
and wow what a twist
i really wish we had samrat's pov to know what is happening in his mind is it just because he was drunk or ? oh well can't wait to see how the story progresses continue soon

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tanzeel

Thank you Tanzeel 🤗 But tanzeel, if Samrat's pov is given then the whole point of this fic will be ruined. you are gunjan, not samrat, so you know very well what she is thinking and you need to think how Samrat is thinking yourself!

Will update soon!