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luckylucky1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#961

Very cute update and thank you for pm

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#962

Read it all in one go!! great work! keep it up! update soon...cant wait to read more!!

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#963

loved the update very cute and beautifully done loved how he realize she would be stressed out so he had jalibies waiting for her so sweet thanks for the pm

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Takia

@Bookaholic1988

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Posted: 13 years ago

#964

So Cute! I wish the reel life Arnav was as smart as your ASR. But alas I know I am just dreaming. I just found out about this story today and its so sad that I found it the day before my homework assignment is due! :( Now I have to wait to finish reading it. Great job btw👏👏👏 Please pm me😊

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Lovely1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#965

The piece of starched cotton was accepted and Arnav tried not wince as she noisily blew her nose. A minute later Khushi nudged him and tried to pass the now kajal, gloss and other unmentionables-smeared cloth back to him. Arnav was rewarded with a watery smile as he stuffed the hanky in his pocket, not even a look of disgust on his face.

Behna,

Excellent update - so much sumaa bandhaya hai ki story ka mazaa aa gaya!

I love how much substance you have in it - on top, you referneced the incidence above back to the one where Khushi had blown her nose in her dupatta I believe...

Nice! Nice! The pace of your writing is excellent - you keep the same tempo when writing different aspects of the story - you have command on all the aspects!

Brilliant!

Behna ji, grab some sleep too...

Edited by Lovely1 - 13 years ago

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#966

Awww!!! That was just the sweetest peak into what is awaiting us in the coming parts ;)

Loved reading it!

Especially towards the end where even the slightest of unease in Khushi had Arnav wanting to appease her. And the way he gifted her with roses and jalebis??? You are raising my expectations in men! :D Hahahah but seriously, that was an amazing part! :D