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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#821

lovely update!

thanks for the pm

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#822

its awesome as usual...thanks for the pm...waiting for manali

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#823

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the hug in the last part left so many things unsaid

was he remembering the day when he tied payal in the same way he tied the shoelaces

was he cherishing the moments again or was he regretting the way things turned out for them

and khushi hugging back saying its ok i forgive you for that

the update was very interesting from the start n cheesy too the way she said m your wife n i will exercise my rights on ur clothes n arnav's reply back was great

update soon dear😛

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#824

Lovely update! They are finally ready to leave for their honeymoon! You described Khushi's feelings so beautifully. And loved the last scene! It was so domestic and at the same time he looked to her for comfort. From the past possibly? Continue soon! :)

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#825

Loved Khushi's my right statement & Arnav's reply. Yeaaahhh... Next update honeymoon...

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#826

loved the update dear... please update soon

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clover

@clover

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#827

NIce update. I would really love to see the teasing Arnav.

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
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I was just stalking your thread! Lol!

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I may be reading too much into it but I am guessing in the last part, Arnav remembered the Diwali night and the completely jerk actions of his that followed it and that was his way of asking for forgiveness and Khushi's way of forgiving was by hugging him back?

Anyway, that last part completely changed the tone of the chapter and was my fav part. :)

The chapter started off as naughty and went on as a build up for their honeymoon. Loved it. Specially Khushi's line of having a haq over Arnav being his wife... :)

Continue soon! :)

You have hit the bull's eye Angel, about the last part being all about seeking and getting forgiveness. Thank you...

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#829

That was much more than just ok.. I loved it.. Especially the last part.. Laxmi added a really nice humorous touch.. Very well written.. Looking forward to the next part.. Thanks for the PM! :)

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#830

im loving this arnav...naughty arnav...and everything he said,...uff i dont know how can khushi be still alive...and he is actually counting the hours...i just loved this update...and cant wait for the next update...