New OS turned SS: The Last Straw!! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
nice one for a first timer... But it was short... next update, let it be a little longer!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Nice👏👏...look really interesting 😃 ... Do PM the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you all so much for all ur encouragement. Part 2 might be a little short..but hey ..gotta build the tension!! but i do thnk tht u guys would want the entire break down in one part...

(PSSST !! theres a hint in the last sentence above)
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Part 2:

The day went by as usual. Soon everyone had left. She walked over to the sofa and sat there, not waiting or planning what she was going to say or how she was going to demand an answer. She just stared into blank space.

The sound of the door opening jolted her back to reality. But she didn't rush to the direction of the door.

"Om Prakash!" yelled Arnav in the usual fed-up and annoyed tone he had after a busy day at work.

he strode in, not noticing her. Khushi stayed seated calmly.

"Om P-" he was cut off.

"he is not at home!!" Khushi yelled back at him somewhat coldly.

He turned around to find Khushi just a few feet behind him.

"where is Di and everyone else?" he asked. His tone warning Khushi to stay in her limits.

"why??" she simply asked. She did not stammer nor did she flinch.

A sudden calm over took the whole house. Everything went silent. There was not the sound of any footsteps, not the sound of the wind passing through the empty hallways, not even the sound of their own breathes. It was so quite that their heart beats could be heard...that is if there were any to be heard in the first place. It was a the calm before the storm.


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no need to bombard me with rotten tomatoes etc...i will have Part 3 up and ready by tonight...hopefully. and once again i am way too excited to proof read proper so excuse any mistakes.

for PMs please buddy..it makes all our lives much easier no??

and thankyou all!! 😃

Edited by GoBananas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
loved it.. please continue and pm me next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Very sweet writing. Waiting for part 2 😊
roldc thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Oops sorry ... just read your part 2. It was too short. Look forward to a long part 3 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
simply fabulous..add me in plzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
i loved ur OS...PLZ continue soon... cant wait to read more...mwahh luv ya... btw yeh beeing a writer really is hard. nd they do get pissed of when ppl don't responce much...so far i've written 2 OS for arhi and 1 SS for Virman, oh nd also 1 FF for arhi which is INCOMPLETE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it ,amazing os, pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
great start can't wait to read more

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