New OS turned SS: The Last Straw!! - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. They're both so... raw.
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar itna sadd kyu banayaa...pleasee happy kar do is os ko plzz...or next os k liye plz pm continue rakna...and plzz make this os happy..not sadd..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Still very intense! Keep it up. Please PM me when you update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

continue and please pm me just sent a buddy request

Zaynah
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Posted: 13 years ago
uhhh it hurts seeing khushi in this state. it seriously hurts ...thts so intense ...plz also add the things like "who takes her to the room and how" it really adds the intensity (though its already intense enough) but we still ask for some more 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

LOVED THE UPDATE!!

Thanks for the pm!!
Please please please continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Here u go guys. i dont thnk its as good as the first few parts..as in it may not be as well worded/written but hopefully u all will enjoy it!!

also i have tried to implement on some of the suggestions tht i have gotten (thankyou and keep them coming) but if there is anything else tht needs to be pointed out...it would be great!!

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Part 5:

Arnav's nails were digging down to the bone of his palms. He felt like he had been abandoned somewhere in the middle of the ocean. He felt angered to see her cry like that just because she hadn't gotten the "love of her life"... because he was starting to feel like The Beast from the Walt Disney classic. He felt ashamed at being such an animal. But even more furious at how and why she was making him feel so disgusted of himself when he knew he was right.

Was he not? Could she really be that sinister? Was there a witch hiding behind the Snow White mask?? But she had just broken. Shattered. But he knew the reason, did he not??

"i just wan--" she surrendered but didn't have the strength to complete her sentence

'AHAN!! there it is!!' he thought.

He was right. He had gotten a confession.

He saw her raise her head and look up at him hoping he would see what her eyes were trying to tell him

But Arnav was too lost in his heart breaking thoughts to hear what her eyes were trying to show him. Finally he slipped.

"YOU JUST WANT HIM DON'T YOU!!!!" he yelled at her unleashing the grieve that was locked up inside him for what seemed like infinity.

"YOU JUST LOVE HIM "SO MUCH" THAT YOU CAN'T STAND BEING NEAR ME CAN YOU!!" he yelled out, his pain clearly evident in every inch of his body, his voice...

Her head shot up, Khushi stopped breathing, 'what was he on about?!' was the only thought that managed to go through her mind.

Before she could do anything Arnav hauled her to her feet by her shoulders.

"HU??!! is THAT it??!! he said through clenched teeth. His grip getting tighter.

"Wha--" but her voice trailed off. Her brain couldn't continue, it was still trying to processing what was happening.

"oh please, don't look ever so confused and shocked," he said tauntingly, mockingly.

"i saw you two you know," he said, his grin reappearing, marking the transformation from Arnav to ASR.

"i saw you that night, and you thought no one saw you two," he continued to taunt her.

"it must be fun right??" , "the whole "forbidden love" deal..." his grin was starting to disappear.

His face hardened, it grew darker and darker .

"you make me sick Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta - Singh Raizada." he said coldly shoving her away.

He turned away he couldn't look into those eyes which seemed to be depicting all the grieve in the world.

'she doesn't know what you are talking about', Arnav jumped in joy at the hope that she was innocent.

'but you saw them with your own eyes!! she's just a really good actress!!' ASR mentally smacked him at the back of his head.

A war had broken out inside of him. A war that was inevitable and he had still tried to avoid it, just as he had tried to avoid his feelings for her. But now look where that had gotten him.

He shut his eyes tightly while Arnav and ASR bombarded each other with grenades, missiles and torpedoes. One hit after the other after the other after the other...

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as far as ur responses go, well i am MOST THRILLED!! thankyou all so much!! 😃but hey, that doesnt put u off the hook.. 😛 and once again too excited to proof read properly...

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice OS! do PM update pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
Give her a chance to defend herself Arnav
Whatever happened to innocent until proven guilty? Poor Khushi
Edited by shiv-gauri4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.Continue soon . and thanks for pm

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