Left a chota sa comment yesterday cause i was too sleepy to write more...but i couldnt help coming back to write this...came across this story last night...completed the whole thing in one go yesterday
I absolutely love love lovvveee this ff...its so different from the rest i've read...but still equally beautiful...I love the way you've made khushi so independant...whose well educated and so talented...its absolutely fab that along with jalebis she likes paitings as well...and awww arnav is her fav muse awesome that is..!
Haha good that you gave shyaam a break...i really like him in here...poor anjali deserved a break and a good husband someone to look after her other than arnav :) and also the realtionship khushi shares with everyone...akaash is cute too :)
Like the mystery that you've created...you have a vague still very catchy style of writing...keeps one gripped to know more...i think somehow adi and arnavs past is related together...maybe arnav and adi's mom are the same...or maybe he thinks so and is out to destroy arnav for that????!! I dunno i tried solving the mystery but its too early for that...keep dropping hints we'll figure it out soon ;)
Update soon ... Interested in knowing how arnav will be there for khushi and how the interview will go :P
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