The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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purplekid

@purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Loved it, Gargee!

SO the beginning... I don't know :( It was definitely sensual, but I'm wondering who... Please don't think I am a complete dumbass!

Loved the casual banter that Khushi and Arnav had established at the beginning...

Aakash and payal! Aww... :) Loved how jealous Payal got, especially because we never see this side of her in the show!

Really feeling bad for Anjali... Hope that gets resolved soon!

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

awesome update loved the bonding over breakfast loved the cute were conversation and it was nice to arnav and khushi having a breakfast routine and how he has gotten accustom to her coffee and her little sighs and rant over the book glad he realized she is a little bit afraid of him loved how he told her the ending of the book and loved how she wanted to do a new pic of him after she saw him smile dia and aditya ,aditya has an enmities with arnav family and she was the pawn to disgrace him in the public eye love how khushi seems to have made a special bonding with akash hope he really does tell her and ask for her help knowing her she will play cupid plays cupid for him loved how she stuff the food in his mouth so he can eat far and tell her about the book loved the update thank for the pm

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

hello!
SO.
i just finished the WHOLE thing!
this is so good! omg i love the concept, and i also love how you have so many parallels going on with all those other couples that [obviously] will eventually end up playing a huge role in arhi's lives.

😆 i loveddd the akash and payal convo, this one:

"Payal Sharma." She answered, her eyes demurely downcast, and he realized he couldn't get enough of that voice.

"Uh-huh. Go on." He said absent-mindedly, as his gaze lingered on her pink petal-like lips. The question was followed by silence, and he looked up into her eyes, only to find her gazing at him as if he was mad.

"Tha-that's my whole name." she said- stuttered- staring at him uneasily, and he had to mentally smack himself.

and also, when arnav told khushi how her book was bout to end 😆

these two are getting to a good spot, i am loving how theyre handling this!
honestly i was mad at arnav in the beginning, and then dia and obv bua n ammaji, but somehow i feel like garima has it out for khushi but bua simply just puts "izzat" above all else.

anywho, i cant wait for you to update! and please shoot me a pm when you do!

Edited by malluangel - 13 years ago

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

While I was reading it, it was very apparent how much effort and work went into this chapter - must have been exhausting to write.

I love how you portray so many relationships and they're done very fascinatingly. I wonder what kind of picture Khushi painted this time and what Arnav's reaction will be.

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princessnida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

Awww, ArHi are becoming "domestic" and more comfortable with each other <3 When Arnav ruined the suspense of the novel, I dieddd laughing!! He's too cute!! And, I loveee that Khushi does paintings of her husband! Superrr cute!

Khushi and Akash's relationship is super cute!!!!

Oh Akash, how can you NOT know she was pissed at you for having an almost naked girl sprawled over you!!! Time to start wooing your so-called lady love! ;)

Ahhh, what's going on with Anjali?!!!!! OMG!!! Is she preggers? But, isn't that good? Or has she previously been preggers and had miscarriages? Or does this not have anything to do with pregnancy! Ahhh. I'm making up stuff now, or maybe I'm just reading in too much!

And, what's up with Dia and Aditya? Maybe I need to read up on the Singhania thing again. I can't remember the whole Singhania and Aditya thing. Aditya better not be a problem for Arnav!!

Can't wait for more :)

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

verry interesting. i think that it would have been far more enjoyable as short updates.

the singhania thing.. hot.
the breakfast routine... awesomely adorably sweet.
the way he deduces her thought process.. wow.

yes darling.. always his eyes.

anjali is pregnant.. but she's not allowed to be. now what is she going to do??
loved your update. thanks!
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Edited by guturgutur - 13 years ago

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mali

@mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

loved their morning breakfast routine. My favorite and surprising part was when he told her the ending of the book..

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

Really enjoyed reading it.

There is always an undercurrent of sensuality--even the dialogue at breakfast.

And, I admire how you maintain the pace beautifully, giving more detail in the scenes where the reader wants to know every little bit. (After all, god is in the details!)

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#529

OMG what an update.. More mysteries!!

Oooh I love mysteries.. I'm guessing that you opened with Dia- Khushi's sister but who did Shweta Singhania see? Is her son and Aditya the same? Can't wait for you to reveal these secrets

Loved the work! Amazing work