Dying Embers..A SaJan SS...!!!Up.pg30(16/7) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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edited my comment on page 1...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for new ss🥳👏
awesome update🤗
thanks for pm
and happy holi🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another fic...congratz
Nixe title...
Good work marie...
loved it
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey merii congooo for ur new ss😃loved the concept its awesome very interesting cont soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear !
well..now a days i am not much active..as i am in my hometown enjoying my holidays..
but in free time..i like to surf on net..and today by chance i just searched sajan ss...
n there i find Dying Embers written by one of my favourite writer on IF .so i can't help myself n here i am to comment..
well firstly, congratz for the new ss...
i loved ur title..its so catchy..
n really amazing concept..
loved Gunjan's n' Samrat's POVs..
will be looking forward for the first chapter..
do continue soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing SS Marie 🤗
Its always a pleasure to read ur work 😳
OMG! Poor Gunjan, shez so much into tears & depression 😒
Hope Samrat is able to get her life back to her... Poor Soul ! :(
& Hope dat Gunjan puts sum seriousness & Understanding into Samrat's Stupid Irresponsible Brain :P 😆 He's so CUTE But :P 😍
M eagerly w8ing for thier 1st meetng ! :D Hope she gets appointed as his PA ! *FINGERS CROSSED*

Wonderful SS ! 😃

Do Cont Soon & Thnx 4 the PM ! 😳

Love,
Ekta 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!Meri 🤗new SS..That too with a rocking concept..😊 Congrats 👏 to u dear..Really very very happy that u started writing a new one on SaJan..I am sure it will be awesome like all your other stories..Everyone really enjoy reading it.All the Best sweety..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER TWO
First Touch Of Happiness

And then a guy entered... As the three men looked behind at door. I too turned my head a bit to find the reason of silence. And i saw a handsome guy..fair colour...dark brown blakish hairs...tall...Dressed in a branded black business suit...i relized i was staring at him when saw him standing along men. I scolded myself for gazing at that guy without any reason. I got up from the seat too as the other men had stand up also.. He did not looked up at me. He asked my name while slipping the pages of my CV... I got nervoused as heard his voice. I did not know why i felt myself shivering again. He looked at me as i did not answered back. As i say his suprised look. I stammered a bit on speaking GUNJAN BHUSHAN... He did not asked anything and after two minutes he decleared me as his new P.a and told me to meet him at sharp 8 a.m next day in his office. Along me other men were too shocked... He left. And other men asked me to collect my appointment letter from receptionist and to join office from the very next day. I was shocked and suprised. I was not aware that i should be happy or sad ? I want to smile but even trying i was not able to smile at the receptionist on collecting my appointment letter. I left the building. Roaming on roads i remembered eyelock with that guy. I was still unaware of his name. I want to thank him .. Or i had no feelings at that time. Wandering on roads lost in thoughts i reached at my home.. How to be happy I was unaware... Seeing me so soon back at home my aunt thought that i did not passed my interview. So she started scolding me again that i will not get my job till i will change my appearance. I blurted out that i got my job without any expressions. She was surprised and then hugged me and congratulate me. I smiled fakely and then left to my room as i had to change my dress and start household works. Whole day passed in doing all works. It was late night i came in room. It was time to do prepare for my very first day of first job. I looks at my wardrobe. I did not find a single suit which i could wear. And then i saw a white colour simple frok which i had made myself on diwali. I took it out and put it aside . I lied down on bed and tears started wetting my pillow...and i did not know when i slept.
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But then i met her...i was lost in that girl...fair colour...black shiny eyes..long brown hair...yellow western outfit...she was looking just wow...i went in her office without any knock or permission... As i admired her and introduced myself...she looks at me with a shock face. And then glared at me seeing stupid grin on my face... She called out her P.A and scolded her to send me without any call and asked me to leave the room. I was a bit upset that how she dared i was owner of that company actually son of owner..but whatever... I gave her my full introduction as "SAMRAT SHERGILL...BROTHER OF ARMAM SHERGILL...SON OF SHUBHANKAR SHERGILL..." She got up ...asked the P.A to leave and then told me to take seat ..and also advised me that i should at least knock. I apologized still smiling at her annoying expressin...and then before i had started the REAL Intro..she opened a file of site in front of me and started like a radio telling about the construction etc.. I was least interested in it...and kept on stealing glances at her...and she continued... And after half an hour giving me file she left to attend a meeting... I smiled to myself and then read the file which i had not listened before from her... I waited for her but she had to leave for home early. I felt sad a bit. And then completed my office work. Reaching home i felt lonley i was missing my brother ... Mom dad used to always busy in their social life and i was close to Amy bhaiya.. Other my siblings feels me as irritated one. Well actually i thought them boring and self centered. I am a bit selfish but i do care about other relations connected to me... After dinner i had just lyed down thinking to go pub or watch movie when bro called up me..i was so happy...listening him..we shared up whole day with each other...he was mising me in same way...he told me about his new p.a ... I felt interesting when he described me her appearance i felt something different in his voice... And then i told him about my new collegue ... He enjoyed my new crush description... It was late night when i had slept talking to bro... I ended the call in morning...
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My first day at job... I was at the time..i was a bit contented..but was still nervoused... He walks in the room and called up ROSY the receptionist to make me understand the work... I left silently with her. My boss name was ARMAN SHERGILL.. He was soft natured but still it feared me facing him. And i was more fear full when my collegues asked me to become careful as he was a total flirt and spoiled one rich guy... I tried to avoid facing him as it makes me uncomfortable but as days passed i felt that all rumours. He seemed much civillized person.

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She was my partner of the project. I was happy . I tried to do friendship with her. She was a bit reserved in starting but then we came along great... We used to discuss projects.. And used to enjoy dinner and lunch together. We had much friendly relation. She used to love my jokes. And i loved seeing her smile.. My brother used to be always in touch with me. We used to spend hours on phone. I find change in him. He sounds more mature but a strange happiness and livelness in his voice. Well i was a bit sure that he had liked his new P.A a lot. And this time it seemed serious. I was happy for my brother. And i was sure he must had choose some one really special for his life. I was too happy with my life. As Shilpa had proved really a great friend. I loved partying along her. Her likes and dislikes were like me. She was soft hearted gal caring for others that all matters. She was bold and confident. It made her more special for me.
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A month had passed almost.. It was good experience for me. I was contented with my life. I had learnt the work gradually. And was able to make my boss not to regret on appointing me. It was day before weekend. When that day i forget to bring my lunch so i thought to remain in my cabin . I was reading a file. When he had came out of his room as he used to go to near by five star resturant . He walks to me. I got nervoused and stand up. He asked me about lunch. I stammered while lying. And he caught it smiled at me softly. It made me hell nervoused. He asked me to join him for lunch. I was shocked to death. I was not willing to go but had to. I followed him to the parking. I seated back along with him in his car. It was so hard for me to control my nervousness. We were in resturant... He ordered himself and kept on staring me. I had just lower my gaze confused . He started telling me about himself. I was shocked on hearing from him calling himself flirt. He smiled at me. I avoid looking at him. He told me about himself everything like i am his friend. What he loves what he hates... Lunch was served...i ate a bit. It was difficult for me to avoid the staring of other people at us. After we had done..and then . That happened of what i had never ever imagined even in my nightmares..
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A month had passed. I really did not realize . We had become so much fast friends..we loved being with each other. Shopping. Cinema. Bike racing. Partying. Everything it was so much fun being with her. She was so jolly girl. I did not realize when i had fall in love with her.. It was just a month.. I was not ready to accept it. But i had to .. We oftenly used to go on dinner and lunch dates as friends. I had no courage to express my feelings. But my brother realized it and asked me to tell my feelings to her. I was still thinking about it when she asked for dinner date at her home . I was a bit suprised but was happy. That day i specially got ready. I was super excited for the date. I bought a bouqet for her. I reached at time at her home. She opened the door. She was looking gorgeous in a sleeveless knee length western outfit. We had dinner. She was great cook too no doubt. We really had great time. We enjoyed slow dance. And then that happened what i had never ever thought about even in my nightmares...
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He proposed me.
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She confessed her lyking for me...
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'gunjan..i know sab ney tmhey yahe kha ho ga arman shergill is a flirt..well yeah i was...but ab ...mein tumsey mila...mein yeh nai kahon ga k i saw u n fell in love with u at first sight...mjhey nahn pata mjhey yeh sab kehna chahye bhe ya nahn...but still tm mein kuch khass hai...wesa jesa mein ney khabhi socha tha...i want to marry you gunjan..mein khabhe promise ya comittments nahn karta kuin k mjhey dar lagta hai ..k shaid mein wo pori na kar paon..par ...still...mein tumhey sirf apna banana nahn chahta balkey apna mano ga bhe...aur i promise tmhey mjsey shadi k bad regret nahn karna padey ga...mera kia past tha wo mein tmhey bata chuka..i wan never serious for any relation but now i am...with my whole heart...aur tmhara past mein janta ho...na bhe janta hota still mjhey us sey koi fark nahn padta...fark padey ga tou ab jab tm merey sath ho ge...aur tm pe mjhey kudh sey bhe zayada bharosa hai...agar yeh ring tum kal pehan k ao ge tou mein jawab han mein smjho ga aur agar tm na bhe bolo ge tab bhe office tum wasey he a sakti ho mjsey tumhey khabhi complain nai ho ge...mein tmharey jawab ka intezar karon ga aur mjhey kushi ho ge agar tm ...!!!'
'HAN'
'kia??'
'merey pass apko deney k lea kuch nahn hai aur na he mein kuch dey sakti hon...mein apsey kuch bhe pochney ka haq nahn rakti...'
'tum ney sach mein han kha hai??'...
i slided the ring in my finger...n he smiles at me...but as usally i had no expression...i dont know why i had said yes...may be coz ..i want life to play with me..there were no feelings in me...to be alone from 23 years..how can u be familar from happiness...but his smile...there was something in him..that on coming out of resturant when he held my hand...i stared at him...i had started a new life...with a ray of hope n happiness..!!!

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"sam mjhey nahn pata tumsey jo baat mein kehna chahti hon wo...sun kar tum kasa react karo...aik month...hmey miley huwey huwa hai sirf...shaid yeh bohat jaldi hai...ya phir...but still...you are speical...more than a friend...mein ney jo tumharey sath feel kia wo mein ney khabhi kise aur k sath nahn feel kia...mjhey tum achey lagtey ho...'
'shona...you are really very special for me...more than a friend'

i smiles at her lovingly..and then pull her in hug...and we hugged each other contented..on what we felt we shared it with each other...i had started a new life with her..with hope to be loved by her in same way as i had ever wished.. ...!!!
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hey guys firstly i want to thank you to all...it was so special to read all your overwehlming response...loved everyones beautiful comments...thank you anjii apii soo much...thanks radhi ekta..rija api..aysh..nila...everyone i love reading your comments . it encourages a lot...
well secondly soory...yeah really sory..coz i know what i had wrote in the update...you guys now gona kill me...well thats my story...for sajan u have to wait...i told you what u r expecting from me...i am not gona fulfil them...!!!!!!
i dont know u lykd it or not...well do comment n criticize ...will love to read your views!!!!!!
Love n care
MARIE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so u updated ohkk let me read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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meri check out ur scrapbook n reply me asap

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