MoNaya SS *Dreams Coming True* (dis-continued) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
ria lovely part ..waiting for the sequel ...thanks for the Pm dear n cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Wow ria, i was waiting for this sequel. Very nice u r continuing it. Please add me too. Cant wait for it MORE!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: nityah

just read the epilogue...
thats a amazing concept...
will be looking forward to read more...
plz add me into your pm list...
thanx for the pm

Thanks nityah!!😛
I'll update after 2nd april... 😳
Keep reading and commenting!! 😃😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

nyccc nyccc n nyccc
i am realy happy dat u came up wid dis ss

thnx 4 d pm
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cont soon..after ur xams...lol

Heyy... tere hi comment ka intezaar tha...😛😃
finally u commented!! 😆
Yup bas ek exam aur hai... main waise bhi monday k baad hi update karungi!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Ambika..

excellent starting..:))
continue soon and thnks fr the pm

Hii ambika!! 🤗🤗
Thanks for commenting... I'll be updating my all FFs after monday!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

ria lovely part ..waiting for the sequel ...thanks for the Pm dear n cont soon

Thanks!! 🤗
Will update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94


Wow ria, i was waiting for this sequel. Very nice u r continuing it. Please add me too. Cant wait for it MORE!

Thanks for reading and commenting surabhi!! 🤗
I'll surely add you in!! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗 So finally I'm here with the first part of this SS. I hope you guys enjoy reading this.😳😳 It took a long time to update this because frankly speaking, I don't know how to write Honeymoon parts! 🤔 I hope you bear with this. 😆 Do comment and criticism is also welcomed.😛😳

P.S- A big thanks to one of my best buddies here, Shreya (SM_317), who helped me in collecting information on tourism in Kashmir. 😎 Love you Shreya!!! 🤗🤗🤗 And another thanks to her, because I was thinking to skip honeymoon part, but she encouraged me to write it. ❤️ (Or should I say, she threatened me to update! 🤣🤣🤣 )

Enjoy!

Love,

Ria.

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Part-1

It was a tiring journey from Delhi to Kashmir, and to Mohit, it was more than tiring, as he had to also bear with the non-stop chatting of Sanaya! He had concluded that no person on Earth was as talkative as his wife was! And the worst part was that he could not even tell her to keep quite, or else she would get angry and then he'll have to find different ways to cajole her!

But on other hand, Sanaya was completely enjoying the trip. Her idea of exploring India was giving her a mixed feeling of happiness and patriotism, as she had never seen any place in India except her hometown. Her excitement had no bounds, and that was very clearly visible on her face. The moment they came out of the airport, Sanaya felt like jumping all around like a kid and tell every body that how happy she was! She had seen snowfall many times in her life, but she'll be experiencing snowfall in India for the first time! She'd have Kashmiri cuisine today, she'll get to know about Kashmiri handicrafts, she'll discover more about Kashmiri culture, and etc etc etc! Her mind was occupied with these thoughts, when she felt a hard hit on her head.

"Ouchh!! Kashmir mein logon a welcome aise karte hain kya?" Sanaya muttered and turned back, thinking that some other person had done that. But she was surprised to see Mohit. "Tumne mujhe maara kyun??"

"Taaki tum sapno ki duniya se bahar aa jao aur taxi ki taraf chalo……. Pichhle 15 minutes se pata nahi kya soch rahi ho!" Mohit sighed, as he led her towards the taxi.

The taxi driver helped Mohit to keep the luggage in car, and Sanaya quickly seated herself, looking all around in amazement.

"Wow mohit kitni achhi jagah hai Kashmir!! I wonder hum ek din mein kitna ghoom sakte hain!" Sanaya commented. "mujhe yahan ki har cheez ke baare mein jaanna hai….. yahan ka culture, yahan ke log, yahan ki language……. Sab kuchh!!"

"jaan lena meri rani, lekin please abhi thodi der ke liye chup chaap baith jao…. Kitna bolti ho!" mohit said, and mumbled the last line under his breathe, so that she could not hear it. But his bad luck, she had already heard and glared at him angrily.

"achha, main bahut bolti hun? Pehle hotel pahuncho, fir batati hun!"

"arre sahab, bolne do na madam ko!" the taxi driver interrupted, "bolte hue kitni achhi lagti hain madam!"

Sanaya smiled, thanking the taxi driver, and looked at mohit in anger, while he looked with the same look at the driver. "Shut-up, ye meri wife hai, iski tareef bhi main hi karunga! Tum chup chap taxi chalao!" he said.

"Kyun, tumhe jealous feel ho raha hai ki koi aur meri tareef kar raha hai?" she said cheekily.

"nahi, mujhe toh bahut khushi hoti hai jab koi aur tumhari tareef karta hai! Main tumhara pati toh hun hi nahi!" he replied sarcastically.

"Aaawww…… jab tum mere liye possessive hote ho toh kitne cute lagte ho mere baby!!!" Sanaya cuddled in his arms, making him embarrassed.

"don't embarrass me Sanaya…… taxi driver hamein dekh raha hai!" mohit whispered in her ears, trying to hide his embarrassment.

"come on, hum dono husband wife hain. Bhaag kar shaadi nahi ki hai hum ne, jo tum aise behave kar rahe ho!" replied an annoyed Sanaya.

The taxi driver looked behind at them through the front mirror, and smiled to himself stupidly, while mohit glared at him with much anger, as if he'll snatch his eyes and cut him into several pieces! Sanaya was looking at the outside view, while mohit tried to cover her half-bare shoulders.

"Kya kar rahe ho mohit?? Mujhe garmi lag rahi hai….." she said irritatedly, and then removed his coat from her shoulders.

"chup chap baithi raho. Yahan itni bhi garmi nahi hai." Mohit replied, grunting his teeth and again covered her shoulders with his coat.

Unknown of mohit's insecurity and possessiveness, Sanaya enjoyed the greenery outside and clicked some photos in her cell, while her husband was busy protecting her from the eyes of taxi driver and held her tightly, as if he wanted to convey the message that she belonged to him only!

In about 15 minutes, the taxi dropped them to the hotel, Hotel Pine Spring, Gulmarg, where Mohit had booked a room as for a couple on Honeymoon, and so, the hotel in-charges had already made preparations according to it. Sanaya was quite impressed with the out-look of Hotel, and with each passing second, she grew eager to explore not only the hotel room, but Kashmir too!

"Welcome Mr. and Mrs. Sehgal." The hotel manager greeted them with a warm welcome, and led them towards their room.

"I hope aap dono ko yahan koi pareshaani nahi hogi……. Aur agar aapko kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye ho, toh hum hamesha taiyyar hain." A waitress smiled to both of them, as they stood in front of the room.

"filhaal toh aap mujhe aur mere husband ko thodi der ke liye akela chhod dijiye…. Wo kya hai na, inhe kisi ke saamne mujhse romance karne mein thodi sharam aati hai!" Sanaya said cheekily, winking at mohit, who was embarrassed, as well as slightly angry.

The waitress grinned at this and left the two love birds alone. Sanaya waited for mohit to unlock the door, while he kept staring at her in annoyance.

"mujhe dekhne ke liye poori zindagi baaki hai…… abhi room mein chalo na, mujhe fresh hona hai!" she said.

He unlocked the door, and Sanaya entered in the room, to find it decently prepared and well-architected room. To say, room was really very simple, as per mohit's choice, yet it was beautiful and appealing to eyes. After all, it is not at all necessary to celebrate honeymoon in luxury or 5-star hotels!


Sanaya walked forward and explored each and every corner of the room with twinkling eyes.

"ye kitni achhi room hai baby!!" she pulled him forward, to show the room.

"kitna achha room hai!" he corrected her, and then walked away in fake anger.

"kya hua, tum mujhse naraaz ho??" she asked, making a cute baby face. "batao na!"

"tumne us waitress se kis tarah baat ki? Kya soch rahi hogi wo hamare baare mein!" he replied, looking other side.

"arre, mujhe gussa aa gaya toh maine ainvayi bol dia, isme tum kyun gussa ho rahe ho?"

"gussa na karun toh kya pyaar karun? Uske saamne mere baare mein wo sab bolne ki kya zarurat thi?"

"truth to bitter hota hi hai mohit! Aur waise bhi, maine use jaane ke liye isliye kaha tha kyunki wo tumhe dekhe hi jaa rahi thi!" Sanaya replied out of jealousy, "mann toh karta hai uski aankhein nikaal ke mixer mein daal dun!"

"oye, tum shayad bhool rahi ho. Jab hum taxi mein aa rahe the, toh wo driver bhi tumhe dekhe hi jaa raha tha…… aur upar se tum aisi dresses pehenti ho!" he too joined in argument.

"dekho, ab tum topic change mat karo, samjhe?"

"topic yehi hai ki ya toh tum us waitress ki aankhein noch lo, ya fir main us taxi driver ka!"

Sanaya was about to comment something, when she heard her cell phone ringing. An annoyed mohit went in washroom, while she happily received the call, as Kamini's name flashed on the mobile screen.

"kaisi ho beta? Tum dono theek se pahunch gaye na?" Kamini asked.

"haan maan. Bas, abhi abhi room mein aaye hain!" Sanaya replied, as she opened the suitcase.

"Ooh, toh kahin maine galat time pe phone toh nahi kiya na?" Kamini asked with a naughty glint in her eyes, assuming that what must be happening when his son and daughter-in-law were in room!

"nahi, aisa kuchh nahi hai." Sanaya blushed. "wo……..bas hum dono……."

"main samajh gayi beta!" kamini grinned. "maine toh bas ye kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ki apna honeymoon achhe se enjoy karna! Har pal ko aise enjoy karna ki kabhi zindagi bhar na bhool pao! Aur, ek aur advice dena chahti hun. Pehle batao ki mohit paas mein hai ya nahi?"

"umm…… nahi, washroom mein hai. Kyun?" Sanaya asked in confusion.

"great, bas ye advice dena chahti thi ki jitna ho sake uske saath romance kar lena, kya pata, ghar wapas aa kar wo fir se office ke kaam ko apni girlfriend bana le!" kamini grinned naughtily, making Sanaya blush like hell. After talking for some more time, they cut the call, and Sanaya realized that she and her husband were on honeymoon, and so, instead of arguing on small matters, they should spend time by romancing each other and exploring Kashmir.

Sanaya heard the door knob of bathroom open, and she turned behind, to see mohit stepping out, wearing blue jeans and a maroon shirt with black lines on it. She smiled, and went towards him, entangling her both hands around his wet neck. At first, mohit looked at her in confusion, and then with suspicion, wondering what plan she was having now in her mind.

"Naah….. tum geele baalon mein kaafi sexy lagte ho Mr. Sexy!" she whispered, when she saw him drying his hairs with towel.

"tumhe… achanak se…. kya ho gaya….??" He asked, still having the same expression on his face.

"bas, ye realize ho gaya hai ki hum hamare honeymoon pe aaye hain…. Aur aisi chhoti chhoti baaton par ladai karne se achha hai ki hum is trip ka har pal enjoy karein!" Sanaya smiled, and kissed him slightly. "main bas thodi der mein fresh hoke aati hun, tab tak tum kuchh khaane ka order kar do please……. I'm hungry!"

She then took a towel and her dress, and went in bathroom. Mohit made a call to room service to order some snack, after which they would take some rest and then start the exploration of Kashmir, starting with Gulmarg.

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As much as Sanaya had thought, the time spent in Gulmarg was even better than it. Though even mohit was first time to this place, but it was only Sanaya among the two, who really enjoyed the trip, as she had only heard about this place, or saw it in movies. But her experience in Gulmarg was something that made her jump with joy. They both had a nice time here by opting for some adventurous activities like snow-skiing, sledging, golfing, and even clicking many snaps of them together, some with decent poses and some with weird poses of Sanaya!

After that, they made their way towards Alpather Lake, a triangular lake situated under the shadow of Apharwat Hill. The lake is generally fully frozen in winter season, but in summer, is it partially frozen, with snow flakes covered on it. An extremely beautiful lake, people consider this to be an example of visual fantasy! And so did Sanaya!

It was evening, around 6 p.m. Mohit and Sanaya walked on a road, eating corns, and enjoying the cool breeze and greenery all around. Mohit went on describing the specialty of Gulmarg, while Sanaya listened to him carefully with her both hands entangled around his left arm, and her head on his shoulders. No, she did not listened to him carefully, but only pretended to do that.

"Sanaya, tum sun rahi ho na main kya keh raha hun?" mohit asked, as he saw Sanaya lost somewhere.

"Hmmm……." She replied, hugging him even more possessively.

"kya hmmm?? Tum kuchh soch rahi ho kya?" he asked again.

"Bas yehi soch rahi hun, ki maine is pal ke liye kitna wait kiya, aur finally aaj main tumhare saath honeymoon pe hoon, hum dono saath hain, saari pareshaniyon se door, poori duniya se door………sirf hum dono saath hain!" she said, "aaj lagta hai, ki mere saare sapne poore ho rahe hain…….. kyunki wo sapne maine sirf tumhare saath hi dekhe the….."

"achha?" mohit looked at her, "aur kya kya sapne dekhe the?"

"aur……….tomato!!"

"kya? Tomato?"

Sanaya beamed happily when she saw a small stall, serving a dish made of tomatoes. Mohit, who stood startled at her reaction, asked several questions, to which Sanaya answered by pointing towards that stall.

"mohit, mere ko na wo tomatoes khaana hai….." she said, making cute puppy face.

"tomatoes? Par wo hai kya?"

"yehi jaanne ke liye toh mujhe wo khana hai. Please please chalo na……. dekhne mein kitna yummy lagta hai…. I hope khaane mein bhi yummy lage!!"

Sanaya moved forward, pulling mohit with him towards the stall. They both stood amongst the crowd, waiting for the dish to be served to them.

"Iss dish ka naam churmuri hai." Mohit said, as he saw the dish being served to them.

"what churmuri?"

"haan, tomato churmuri. Maan ek baar yahan aa chuki hain……… unko ye dish bahut pasand hai!"

"achha? Toh unke liye bhi pack karwa lete hain!" Sanaya suggested with a sweet smile.

"pagal, jab tak hum ye lekar ghar jayenge, tab tak tomato sauce ban jayega!"

They began eating the dish from one single plate, and the moment Sanaya took a bite of it, she felt as if she got something very precious! Her facial expressions said that she loved the dish. Seeing her happy, mohit smiled with content. He did not found the dish so much appealing, but her wife's smile made him happy. Within few seconds, Sanaya finished eating one plate of tomato churmuri, and ordered for the second plate. And this time, she was going to have all alone, without giving even a single piece to mohit!

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"Ab kahan ghoomne ka iraada hai meri rani ka?" mohit asked cheekily, as they made their way towards the taxi.

"Obviously, dinner karne! Raat ke 9 baje kahan ghoomne jayenge!" she said, "aur uske baad ek bahut hi zaruri kaam karna hai!"

"kaunsa zaruri kaam?" he questioned.

"wo toh waqt aane par tumko pata chal jayega!" Sanaya muttered under her breathe, with a naughty glint in her eyes.

"kya matlab?"

"Umm…….. wo……. Kuchh nahi, chalo na, kisi achhe se restaurant mein jaa kar dinner karte hain… aur wo bhi Pure Kashmiri Cuisine!"

They hired a taxi and drove towards the nearest restaurant, where they could get a chance to taste the most heard Kashmiri cuisine. Though the menu had several names, but Mohit ordered only those dishes which he had heard of, like Kashmiri pulao, Kashmiri Roghan Josh, and the famous Phirni in sweet dish. Sanaya argued to have some more dishes, to which he looked at her in amazement, having the expression like 'seriously girl you'll finish all the dishes in one go'? Sanaya then sat back silently to enjoy the food.

Precap-: Sanaya persuading Mohit to have a 'nice time' in room!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update yaar!!!!! yaar!!! try 2 update soon!!!!!plzzz
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very nice update .cont soon

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