Indecent Proposal- MN FF-Part13-pg35

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INDECENT PROPOSAL- MN FF


I am so glad you made time to see me.

How's life? Tell me how's your family.

I haven't seen them in a while.

You've been good, busier than ever,

We small talk, work and the weather,

Your guard is up and I know why.

Because the last time you saw me

Is still burned in the back of your mind.

You gave me roses and I left them there to die.



So this is me swallowing my pride,

Standing in front of you saying, "I'm sorry for that night,"

And I go back to December all the time.

It turns out freedom ain't nothing but missing you.

Wishing I'd realized what I had when you were mine.

I'd go back to December, turn around and make it all right.

I go back to December all the time.



These days I haven't been sleeping,

Staying up, playing back myself leavin'.

When your birthday passed and I didn't call.

And I think about summer, all the beautiful times,

I watched you laughing from the passenger side.

Realized that I loved you in the fall.



And then the cold came, the dark days when fear crept into my mind

You gave me all your love and all I gave you was "Goodbye".



So this is me swallowing my pride

Standing in front of you saying, "I'm sorry for that night."

And I go back to December all the time.

It turns out freedom ain't nothing but missing you,

Wishing I'd realized what I had when you were mine.

I'd go back to December, turn around and change my own mind

I go back to December all the time.



I miss your tanned skin, your sweet smile,

So good to me, so right

And how you held me in your arms that September night --

The first time you ever saw me cry.



Maybe this is wishful thinking,

Probably mindless dreaming,

But if we loved again, I swear I'd love you right.



I'd go back in time and change it but I can't.

So if the chain is on your door I understand.



But this is me swallowing my pride

Standing in front of you saying, "I'm sorry for that night."

And I go back to December...

It turns out freedom ain't nothing but missing you,

Wishing I'd realize what I had when you were mine.

I'd go back to December, turn around and make it all right.

I'd go back to December, turn around and change my own mind



I go back to December all the time.

All the time.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Nupur, we are leaving right now!"

"Let go off me Mayank...Ouch..." I shoved his hand off my shoulder.

"What you think you have done? Going behind my back like this?"

"If I'd had told you you'd have tried to stopped me."

"That's right!"

"See." I stared intently at him.

"Don't you understand? I care for your safety because I love you??"

"Maybe that's the problem!"

"Oh...m sorry...I...I didn't..mean.."

"No I get it perfectly. I am a liability."

"Mayank...MAYANK!!!"

I splashed the water on my face. It's a new day. New beginning. Come on Nupur, you will get the job. Today is your day. Have faith.

I tried smiling through clenched teeth failing miserably.

It's no good. Why would they hire a grumpy freelance writer who has absolutely no recommendations? When did the world last worked on merit?

That's the real world Nupur. Unjust monster with its tentacles out to pull you down if you dare to rise against it. I started to brush my teeth.

"Hey Dia, morning. Yes I remember my interview today. Will reach in time. Don't you worry." I took a spoonful of cereals.

"Nupur just be fine there. And do not start upon your high philosophies &ideals. Remember they are expecting a practical smart shrewd assistant for the job."

"Yup I get it. They want my pretty assistance in getting photocopies done and serving coffee. Being a writer is just an added bonus point."

"Nupur just focus on the job! Maybe it's not what you want but then you have your choices limited. It's this job or else..."

"Or else my visa is expiring and I'll be packaged back to India in the next flight."

"You have only six months left."

"I haven't forgotten my green card problem. The embassy seriously sucks big time."

"Nupur that is why just focus on..."

"Dia..Dia..I get it. The job is very vital to my existence in Big Apple. Don't stress babes."

"Finally I can see the few shades of my old Nupur back in you."

"It's the real me. I am already over it Dia. Trust me."

"Fine. Take care and all the best."

"Thanks. Bye."

I am already over it. The words echoed in my ears. The wounds have healed. He was just fragments of long-lost memory. Surely I don't remember anything to do with him now."

"They are coming tonight for dinner."

"You yourself invited us."

Doesn't he get it? I invited all his jerk friends for his sake. So that he comes along and I get time to know him some more.

"See you in the evening Nupur"

He turned away walking in his characteristic casual style with hands tucked in his jeans pockets. I was alone in the corridor. Is it remotely possible I can be kidnapped today enroute to my flat from college or a sudden calamity striking New York? Any disaster would be better than the disastrous food I would serve. I don't have enough pocket money left to order a take out for so many people. I sighed in desperation at the lack of my abilities to cook anything palatable except for Maggie.

"3 ml milk with 3 tsp custard powder." I read aloud from the bool performing the said task.

"Now Blanche the tomatoes." Okay does that mean peeling them off? I dipped my hands ion the bowl containing boiling tomatoes. "AAArghhh...my fingers!"

The door bell rang. The music mingling with my howls as ran to the fridge to get ice cubes."

Who the hell was here? Don't they know I am super busy tonigh?

"Yes what is it...umm...you...hey..Hi Mayank." Nervously I tucked the loose strand of my hair behind my ears.

"Nupur. I know I am well before time."

My heart started to pound loudly seeing him in his entirety right outside my door. Afraid it would come out my chest I kept my hand over it." No...Yes...I mean Great!..It's a pleasant surprise ." All the burning pain vanished instantly at the sight of him.

"You have something on your forehead. "

"Huh...where?"

"Flour." He leaned forwards wiping it off my face. High voltage currents see to transmit in my body from where his fingers gently touched my skin.

" oh ..yeah..." I stared confounded at him.

"Well..If you don't mind can I come inside?"

"Yeah..sure...Sorry I forgot. You are most welcome inside." I closed the door after him.

This can't be true. The most happening good-looking guy in our college was in my flat all to myself atlast. I tried to stop myself from shivering so badly lest he noticed.

"Incase you'r wondering what am I doing so early in your apartment, lemme tell you I know your big secret."

Does he already know? Was he going to confess too? I knew it! He feels the same for me. The audacity with which my heart was pounding now I was sure it can come straight out of my mouth. My jaw dropped.

"You don't need to worry. I am here for the cooking." He winked with a mischievous smile illuminating his well chiseled face.

Was I in heaven or was it the sparkling white teeth that had blanked out my mind and set me in a trance? Were the twinkling white lights for real?

"Nupur. Nupur!..Are you alright?"

"Oh..yeah..." I closed my mouth. " I can't just thank you enough. You are my savior."

"The Savior needs your help in chopping these vegetables. Chop-Chop."

"Aye Aye captain..." I happily grabbed a knife and stood beside him only to be drowned in the good Boy soap smell he emanated.

"Nupur you have burnt your fingers!"

"what?" I looked down following his gaze. I had completely forgotten about it. " My poor fingers..Aaahhh...".the pain returned.

"Nupur you are too much. Sit down and keep your fingers in the ice-bucket."

"Mayank it's alright now. I can ..."

"Nupur. Sit. I'll make some coffee for you."

I drank the delicious coffee as I watched him preparing the night's dinner.

The coffee burned my tongue. Angrily I banged the cup on my table. It's been over a year now. How can you have the stupid details intact?

The door bell rang breaking the chain of my meandering thoughts.

I looked in the camera. Someone tall in black tux with his back turned was outside in the lobby. Who can it be early in the morning?"

"Screw these embassy officers. I ain't making a bomb here!" I muttered to myself turning the knob.

"Yes. How may I help y..."

"Miss Nupur Bhsuhan."

...

"It's me. Mayank Sharma in case you don't recall."

...

"Well you are allowed to close your mouth. I am not an alien species you see."

"You...here..."

"I am here with a business proposal. Will you marry me?

Edited by shivi02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I had to be the first🤗
Welcome Back Shivi Darling!!!🤗
Finally my wait is over..😃😃
Ok.. before going any further...I must tell you..no actually warn you.."This should be Romance-full FF"...otherwise you toh gone😳
Now coming bcak to the story...Hmmm..Pretty intersting concept...Can't comment much now..coz Story has to still unfold..But now all have great expectations from you Shivi as a writer...😃
and was that poem written by you??!!😲😲..MY MY...That was damn lovely!!😳..I guess you should soon start a thread for poems too..and I mean it😃
Can't wait to read further.😳
and Plzz Plzz Plzzz..UPDATE SOON😳
P.S--Can't wait to use my P.S for romantic and naughty lines..with red bold text☺️🤣
Edited by aysha_mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shivi you are back... I missed your writing dear... I'm so happy to see you with a new ff... It looks interesting... will be waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤗SIS🤗
Welcome Back
🤗missed u lodsss🤗

Awesome Starting SIS...😍
so my SIS is back wid a Bang!!!!!😎
i really missed u SIS...
i missed ur writing too...
Thank u so much for coming back as u said...🤗
love u lodsss...🤗
ok now abt d staring...😳
once again a very different story wid a Twist...
so MayUr were Together in der past bt now dey r not...
n Nupur is an unemployed writer!!!
n here Mayank again came for her rescue...😉
i mean as giving her a Business proposal to marry him...😳 bt still in other way its for her rescue from d Visa ppl...😉
Beautiful Twist...👍🏼
always wanted to read something like dat n now i m getting dat...
dat too written by my SIS...😍its like having a pizza wid a lottt EXTRA Cheese on it...😳😉😆
😆loved it lodsss...😳
love u SIS a lottt...🤗🤗🤗

ps: i hope tni8 m gonna get another update like d way i uesed to get in ur Previous ff...😳

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome back

very nice start ... interesting.

continue soon

dont forget to pm me .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start Shivi.. liked the concept 😊 .. The title reminded me of the movie The Indecent Proposal 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW ur back with a new ff...Thats just awesome...
As usual loved the first part...
Mmm so mayur wr separated...And all the while nupur ws remembering their past moments..But mayank's sudden entry and more shocking proposal added an interesting twist and im eagerly looking forward to this now...
Too good...
Cont asap...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Reserved!

Edited.

You're back with another FF! :)

Firstly the concepts seems interesting, it kinda reminds me of "the proposal" but this one seems to go in a different direction. Anyways loved the first chapter, Nupur's dukh bhara haal aur khubsoorat maazi. Can't wait for the story to unfold.. Thanks for the PM and continue soon.. You can't let Mayank stand at the door for so long now, can you? 😆

.SilentPrincess
Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago

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