The Life and Lies of Mr and Mrs Shergill-Upd:23/07

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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

wowww dear it was once again superb upd with twist and turns u penned it down superbly 👏 gosh u described gunjan's pain and state superbly it was heart touching ,incident which took place and unexpectedly changed sajan's life but in all this gunjan 's mental state her emotions u penned down superbly 👏gosh samrat's state u penned down superbly , now eagerly waiting for next part and thanks for pm do upd soon 🤗

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Mindblowing update !

Lets see what happens next and I'm sorry for such a short comment I'm busy in boards :((

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Hey Rit 🤗 Oh My God. What an update. it was outstanding. It was nice and lengthy.. the way I like :) You did dfull justice to the whole story. The way you showed Gunjan breaking down, going crazy even thinking about their marriage. And at the same time Samrat all wasted. I totally get what they must be thinking! So much tension in the atmosphere. Here I love the role Mayank played. I don't think Nupur was wrong either. She knows Samrat. He shouldn't have suddenly decided to marry her.. ( Acc. to Nupur! ) Her POV isn't wrong either! I was freaked out when Samrat decided to leave town. I was like WTH! But love dia for what she did. OMG. :D Superb. She hit him in the nuts! For the first time I was happy someone hit Samrat. He's being such a dick. But then FINALLY you gave him some brains and he realised what he was doing. Bauji is so scary. He can do anything, even toi his own daughter! Dreadful. But again he is a very sweet father when he calms down..!Well, I totally loved the entire update. Cant wait for the wedding :) Its going to be so intense. Its the first time they are actually SEEING each other after their semi-wedding! Please update fast :P I know you just updated.. but try! SUPERB update. LOVED IT🤗Manjari

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Nicky

@Richaarora

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Aww..it was a sad chapter! I couldn't see/read Gunjan crying her heart out trying to scrape the vermilion and later she was so lifeless! Poor Gunjan! And I literally thought (Just like Nams) that Samrat was leaving Gunjan behind in all this mess created partially by himself! But thank Dia, who gave him the dose that he needed! Mayank ROCKS! Like seriously, he's the man! Uday's change of words and his silence was touching..

An emotional chapter! Hope you come up with the next one sooner since you haven't given any spoiler 😛

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Poor Gunjan :( This Is Too Sad & I Can't Bear Gunjan's Condition :X 🥺 Someone Help This Girl How Can She Think That She Is A Burden & Blame Herself For Everything ?! ; O Good That Samrat Didn't Run Away . Thank God For That 😳

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Sonia

@SwaNia_1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Wow!! superb part ...cont soon dear n thnx a lot for the PM

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Thank you! Thank you so much for the wonderful response! I shall come around and reply to all of your personally after the 1st of June. Please don't expect updates before that cause I have 3 tests, 2 meetings and a couple of official dinners in the coming few days. I shall only be able to breathe after this Friday. So I'm hoping to be able to update and reply to you all by this weekend!

Cheerios!

Ritchelle

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Weekend Over Rit! Please update sooon!

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Surprised to hear from me? 😉

I'm surprised at myself as well! To be honest, I've been SO busy with uni and studies and ECAs and other stuff, that I don't have time to breathe! I'm back home for a week (where I'm supposed to be studying for a test), so I thought I'd take some time out to write and update Life and Lies! So to all my readers, I'll be updating this fic by tomorrow or Friday, by the latest!

I'd also like to address something a bit more serious..

When I started off with the fic, I got a FANTASTIC response to it..considering the fact that I hardly know anyone from the MJHT forum. But noticing the fact that the response has died out, I guess you all have lost faith in my fic, or its not appealing to you anymore.

Assuming the response to my next chapter is still the same, I shall STOP posting updates on IF. I'm planning to create a blog, where you'll be able to find updates to my fic. The link to the blog will only be PMd if you're a genuinely interested reader. I don't mean to be mean, but these days I feel like I'm not writing for anyone.

Yeah yeah, this may just be a case of writer's blues, but I can't help it. 😕

Once again, thank you for your love and support. Chapter 7 will be up in a couple of days for SURE.

Cheers,

Ritchelle