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Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

Fine I will not comment from now on until i get another comment and hmm some of your reader are my freinds as well so i can make them agree as welll


i can stoop too low to get an update

hmmm...well ok as i already got ur comments on my last update😉😆
girl just think...i updated yesterday...i m not superfast writter in the least bit yarr...😕
atleast give me a week for the next update na...🤣...plus i m being overloaded with the request of my OS plus in addition, my new ss's next part...gosh...i m in trouble and above that ramazan, and i have to make whole iftari as my mom make sehri...so hardly getting any time...
ryt now too...my mom sleeping thinking that i must also be sleeping when here i m trying to write a lil for next update...
abh bachi ki jaan logay kia g...🥱

awww mera baby kitna sara kam


TO MAI KIA KARO,I TOO(too wala nai usrdu wala to) WANT AN UPDATE

but chalo ap bhi kia yad rakho ge
ak week ka consesion dia apko

but plz update with in a week ha
!

and are we getting asn os..awe some will be waiting for OS:)

within a week...i promise that...😎
i m right now working just on that...and after that i will update the other two of my work...
i myself too pretty excited for the next part g...thats why cant put that on hold for now...😍

Originally posted by: cool_SK

within a week...i promise that...😎
i m right now working just on that...and after that i will update the other two of my work...
i myself too pretty excited for the next part g...thats why cant put that on hold for now...😍

awe😳 somtime it happens na e wrote ff and there is one part or rwo which are more close to us than anythin else and when we read them we dont belive that we actually wrote them hai na??

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

awe😳 somtime it happens na e wrote ff and there is one part or rwo which are more close to us than anythin else and when we read them we dont belive that we actually wrote them hai na??

yup...for me, in this whole ff...this is the part i could read ever n ever...😛
i never like re-reading the first 11 parts again for a single bit...but i m in luv with the 12th one...n i m more excited for 13th one...
i usually read my earlier works again n again, all the time...they look fresh to me in my own eyes with each reading, but i don't know why, i miss that magic here somewhere...hope will get that back...
may be its cause of the changed writting style i have adopted...who knows😕
i don't know how u guys put up with the first 11 parts

Originally posted by: cool_SK

yup...for me, in this whole ff...this is the part i could read ever n ever...😛
i never like re-reading the first 11 parts again for a single bit...but i m in luv with the 12th one...n i m more excited for 13th one...
i usually read my earlier works again n again, all the time...they look fresh to me in my own eyes with each reading, but i don't know why, i miss that magic here somewhere...hope will get that back...
may be its cause of the changed writting style i have adopted...who knows😕
i don't know how u guys put up with the first 11 parts

same here you know I was totaly a wrekless but as we write we got improved i guess

hmm well about you i cant clear see a totaly change in your nes wrting styl as i honestly fan of your many SS and re read them as well..sorry to say this as your ff also included in now a days ff'f..there is almost no ff which you can re read and if i cehck the older one mostly of them i have read many times and every time i read i never get bored seriously

and now a days i start reading arhi ff and dont ask there are very few who are atullay readable bcz sorry if any one mind while reading my comment..they have basic story line and have lots of adult content...!

P.S ther are some loll sorry

you know ana what i most like about your previous ff there was soo much inocense but now you have become mature...!
you this is honestly mind blowing but i loved your previous one


hey you offended with my comment..Sorry..!

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

same here you know I was totaly a wrekless but as we write we got improved i guess

hmm well about you i cant clear see a totaly change in your nes wrting styl as i honestly fan of your many SS and re read them as well..sorry to say this as your ff also included in now a days ff'f..there is almost no ff which you can re read and if i cehck the older one mostly of them i have read many times and every time i read i never get bored seriously

and now a days i start reading arhi ff and dont ask there are very few who are atullay readable bcz sorry if any one mind while reading my comment..they have basic story line and have lots of adult content...!

yeah...writing do improve with time...
and yes, adult content has mainly become a part of the stories...
but i m trying not to explain too much of that stuff...a kiss or a passionate hug...a lil close scene but hopefully not that much explainary...i hope i don't make anyone feel uneasy...
i wrote two OS's...dilbar and loosen my buttons one in which i have actually warned everyone to beware b4 reading...as i feel that i got too much overboard but many said it was ok...i don't still know what that OK meant...😕
what you say...do i get overboard anywhere...reply honestly dear...