~*KAHANI PYAAR KII PART 1*~ SUJAL KASHISH

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Posted: 18 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: priyanka_lover
great part👏

Thanx priyanka😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: sun_423
R.S dear kahaan ho..please jaldi se continue karo na...me waiting.... 😭

Dont cry suri m back & will try return back ur smile with the upcoming part of FF😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#913

M back guyz thanx u alllllll 4 being there & understanding my prblms & now no more w8 coz the part is on its way its coming in few mints & hope that u liked that 😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#914

Here is the next part wil be w8ing to know that u liked that or not

Its a new day @ Garewal mansion.
Every 1 is @ the dining table having their breakfast even charu & akshat r there too.
After finishing the breakfast every 1 comes outside where they found k yahan to koi bus koi vehicle nahi hai then all looks @ sujal..

S- relax guyz aese dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai chalo mere saath maine sab arrange ker diya hai.

Then sujal takes them with him & shows the the cool looking bikes.

S- ye raha hamare jana ka saman.

Angad goes to the bikes.

An- wow sujal they r just awesome man.

Sujal smiles.

R- ham sab inpe jayenge?
S- haan bhai kyu koi prblm hai?
R- nahi koi prblm nahi hai.
S- guyz here r the keys of bikes take them so tat we can leave.

All takes the keys from him & they sits on bikes with their respective partners.

P- per hamen jana kahan hai ye to bataya he nahi tumne.
S- that's a surprise.
Ak- per ham wahan pohchenge kese?
S- tujh se aesi he baat ki umeed ki ja sakti hai array tum logo ko jagah nahi pata per mujhe to pata hai na to u all will follow me na.
C- tum kabhi koi akal ki baat kyu nahi kerte aki????

Every1 smiles @ this.

S- chalo ab sab beth gaye to now hamen bhi bethna chahiye.
(Sk were standing was not sitting on bike)

S- chalo kashish.
Kashish nods & sits behind him.
An- all set to leave.
S- oh shit w8 guyz I 4got something.
An- yar yahan main impatient horaha hu picnic pe jane k liye aur tu hai k L8 pe L8 ker raha hai.
S- w8 na ro mat abhi aata hu.

Sujal goes to his room & take something from the drawer & hides it in his jacket & goes down stair.

S- chalo now lets go.

Sujal was leading them.
Angad apni bike sujal k bike k kareeb lata hai & says..

An- sujal yar ye bike hai koi bail gadi nahi hai jo tu itne aaram se chala raha hai.

Actually sujal was not driving fast coz kashish hadn't hold him aur agar wo fast chalata to use darr tha k kahin kashish gir na jaye.
On the other hand kashish was hesitant to hold sujal she was feeling shy & ghabra rahe thi.

Sujal to angad..
S- chala to raha hu na.
An- chala raha hai? mujhe laga bike reng rahe hai zameen pe.
S- was that a joke??
An- tha to.
S- aainda joke kehne se pehle bata diya kar so that agar hansi aaye na aayen main hansu nahi to aese he teri izat ka kachra hojayega.

Then angad moves his bike.
Now sujal to kashish..

S- kashish just hold me tight other wise we'll be L8 aur hamen abhi bohat door jana hai.

Kashish thoda sa ghabra k hichkicha k & of course sharma k holds him by his waist & sujal speed ups his bike.
All the other were following sujal's bike after a long journey sujal stops his bike in front of a bungalow.
Then ek ek ker k sab wahan pohanch jate hain.
Sab se aakhir mian angad aata hai.
Sujal goes to him & says..

S- kyu pehle to bada keh rahe the k speed badao drive fast aur jab fast drive ki to khud janab sab se aakhir main aa rahe hain.

An- haan to mujhe kya pata tha k tu bail gadi chalate chalate ek dam dhoom ka john Abraham ban jayega aur tujhe dhoom 2 k Mr.A ki tarrah tujh tak pohanchna mushkil hojayega.

S- achha ba bas kar aur chal.

P- wow sujal kitni khoobsurat jagah hai.
Kr- aur bhabhi yahan te pani ki awaz bhi aarahe hai as some river or something like that is near.
C- haan sach main jannat ka sama lag raha hai shahar se door khuli fiza just amazing.

S- ab bahir se he dekho ge ya ander bhi chaloge?

All went inside & they all looked here & there & enjoys the view & much to their excitement there was some kind of private beech or anything like that was there. Matlab ki the house was made on the bank.(guyz m confused what to call it? Bas samajh lo k ghar k saamne samandar tha ya nadi thi r a beech kind of)

C- wow its so cool.
Kr- just super.
P- its fantastic view.

Sujal goes to rishab.

S- bhai aap ko ye farmhouse kesa laga?
R- bohat khoobsurat hai it's the perfect place to relax away from office , meeting & all the worries of business it's the heaven on earth.

S- & now this heaven belongs to u.

Saying this he give a file to rishab.(jo sujal ghar se aane se pehle apni jacket main chhupa k laaya tha)

Angad sees the file…

An- sujal ye to wohe file hai na jis ki wajah se tujhe sangeet ceremony wale din L8 hua tha.
S- haan us din main is farmhouse ki deal karne gaya tha.
S- bhai this is ur B'day gift main chahta tha jab main file aap ko du us se pehle aap ye farmhouse dekhle aur mujhe khushi hai k aap ko ye pasand aaya.

Rishab just keep looking @ him doesn't say anything.
He was just thinking k us ka bhai itna bada kab ban gaya?
He just keep looking @ him & then hugs him & rishab ki khushi uski aankhon se chhalak padi.

Sujal separate him coz he knows his bhai very well he must have tears in his eyes. & when he separates himself from rishab his guess was right.
He wipes his tears.

S- c'mon bhai ham yaha emotional hone nahi aaye ham yahan enjoy karne aaye hain so lets do that ye aansu kyu?

R- aaj dekh raha hu k mera bhai kitna bada hogaya hai. kitna zimmedar hogaya hai.
S- kyu bhai pehle main zimmedar nahi tha kya?
An- main batata hu na tu pehle zimmedar nahi khardaar(ghusse wala) tha,
S- tu to nahi bachega mujhse..

Saying this he runs after angad who was running 2wards the beech.
After all relaxing all gathered @ the bank.
All were enjoying themselves.
Some were enjoying in the water.
Some were enjoying by sitting back & looking @ the view.
Some were enjoying by chitchatting.

Sujal was sitting with rishab @ was talking when he sees that kashish is standing alone kinare pe.
Pani ki lehren use chho rahe thi & she was feeling relaxed.
Sujal come to her..

S- kashish.
She looks @ him..
S- did I disturbed u?
K- kesi baten ker rahe ho sujal?
S- kya baat hai ye jagah tumhe pasand nahi aayi?
K- nahi sujal ye jagah to bohat khoobsurat hai its so beautiful yahan kitni shanti hai shahar ki bheed bhad main insaan kho sa jata hai & this is the best place to come & relax.
K- aur yahan ki naturally beauty aese hai k mano ek pal ko lagta hai k zameen pe jannat ka nazara ker rahe hian.

While saying this kashish ke chehre pe ek muskaan thi us k chehre pe khushi thi jo k sujal ko apni tarraf attract ker rahe thi & he just keep looking @ her.

K- sujal wo dekho kitna khoobsurat lag raha hai na?

When kashish realized that sujal is not saying anything she looks @ him.
K- kya hua? Dekh kyu nahi rahe?
S- tum apni jannat ko dekho main apni jannat ko dekhta hu.

Hearing this kashish ek dam lal tomato ban jati hai 😆 she was blushing.
Abhi sujal kuchh kehne he wala hota hai k peechhe se awaz aati hai..

An- agar jannat ka nazara ker liya ho to hamare bare main kya rai hai aap ki ye batayeneg?

Sujal looks @ angad with "tera aana zaroori tha" looks.

S- ji ji kyu nahi abhi bata dete hain. Aap ko dekh k ye lagta hai k yamdood ko dekh liya ho.

Angad k chehre pe jo hansi thi woe k dam ghayab ho jati hai.
& b4 he can say anything else koi us ka kaan khenchta hai..

An- ah ahh bhabhi its hurting..
Its prerna..
P- achha its hurting aur tu ye jo ker raha thaw o kya tha?
An- kya tha? Maine kya kiya?
P- tum sujal aur kashish ko kyu tang ker rahe ho? Ek to bechare honey moon pe nahi ja rahe to yahan to thodi si privacy de do in ko.

Hearing this both Sk were embarrassed
An- achha m sorry mujh se ghalti hogayi ab to kaan chode dard ho raha hai.
P- achha chalo jao aur agar dubara in dono ko tang kiya na to………..
An- samajh gaya ab sujal se 2 foot door he rahuga.

Then abgad chala jata hai & prerna to sujal..

P- wese sujal ye "JANNAT" ka nazara bada he pyara lag raha tha.
Saying this she goes away b4 sujal can react.

Then all gathered @ the bank.

C- lets play something..
Kr- not a bad idea.
P- per konsa game khelen?
Ak- game ko chodo lets sing 2gather & dance simple.
An- haan chalo isi bahane party ka maza aajayega.
R- then Y ru w8ing 4 lets start.

They all sing & danced(slow) on this song 2gather minus Sk .

kyun chalti hai pawan
kyun jhoomey hai gagan
kyun machalta hai mann

na tum jano
na hum

na tum jano
na hum

kyun aati hai bhar
kyun lauta hai karar
kyun hota hai pyaar

na tum jano
na hum

na tum jano
na hum

yeah madhoshiya
yeah tanhiya
tasavur main hai
kiski parchaiya (sujal images him with kashish)

yeah bheega sama
umangey jawa
mujhey ishq le
ja raha hai
kahaaaa

kyun gum hai har disha
kyun hota hai nasha
kyun aata hai mazaa

na tum jano
na hum

na tum jano
na hum

dharakta bhi hai
tarapta bhi hai
yeah dil kyun
acchanak bhekta bhi hai

mehkta bhi hai
chekhta bhi hai
yeah dil kya
wafaa ko samjhta bhi hai

kyun milti hai nazaar
kyun hota hai asar
kyun hoti hai sehr

na tum jano
na hum

na tum jano
na hum

kyun chalti hai pawan
kyun jhoomey hai gagan
kyun machalta hai mann

na tum jano
na hum

kyun aati hai bhar
kyun lauta hai karar
kyun hota hai pyaar

na tum jano
na hum

na tum jano
na hum

all enjoyed a lot.
After some time..

P- kashish sujal to her baar apna gala phadta rehta hai.matlab gata rehta hai aaj kuchh tum sunao.
S- achha ji to meri awaz aur mera gana aap ko gala phadna lagta hai wese to kehti hain k sujal plz plz kuchh sunao.
P- han to wo mian is liye kehti hu k kahin tumhe ye na pata chal jaye k tum kesa gate ho nahi to tumhe bura lagta na.
S- wah bhai kitna sochti hain meri bhabhi meri feelings k bare main..
P- achha ba bas bhi karo jab dekho bolna shuru ker dete ho mujhe kashish se bat karne do.

Turns to kashish..

P- haan kashish ab dekho maine tumhare gane k chakkar main sujal se panga mol loya hai ab to tumhe gana he padega.
K- nahi bhabhi main kese….
S- simple muh se kashish gana muh se gaya jata hai..
P- very funny 2 mint chup nahi reh sakte tum??
P- dekha kashish sujal is liye ye keh raha hai kyu ki use apni awaz pe naaz hai..
S- maine ye kab kaha??
P- chupppppp.
P- kashish ab ti tumhe gana he padega..

Kashish looks @ sujal & he nods his head in yes so she agrees to sing.

S- w8 main guitar le k aata hu.
An- yahan guitar kahan se aayega?
S- maine sab arrange ker diya hai w8 main le k aata hu.

Sujal goes & brings the guitar & he plays the guitar & kashish sings..

ek din fursat main
thame haath hamare
le gayi us dagar pe
jahan rehti hain baharen
chal diye ham bhi ghar se
ho k kuchh be fikar se
dil tha apne bharose
ham the dil k sahare. [2]
rah main mod aaya
roshni hogayi kam
rah main mod aaya
roshni hogayi kam (she remembers her fathers death)
kuchh dil ghabraya
k kahan aagaye ham
aagay us mod k bhi (she remembers her life in shimla when she came there)
to baharen nahi thi[2]
bhooli kuchh khuwahishen aur
khuwab the bas hamare.
ek din fursat main
thame haath hamare
le gayi us dagar pe
jahan rehti hain baharen
(while remembering the old days she had tears in her eyes to cheer her up sujal plays the guitar & looks @ her & nods his head in NO & goes to her)
bewajah lag rahe thi (sujal wipes her tears)
jab talash hamari
bewajah lag rahe thi
jab talash hamari
ek khushboo uthi aurr
rut badal gayi sari (nods his head in NO manner)
saamne tum khade the
phehla k bahen
saamne tum khade the
phehla k bahen (sujal opens his arms)
jese jer dard mera khud main lo ge samaye (kashish hugs him)
pal bada mujhtasir tha
tere seene pe sar tha (kashish had her head on sujal's chest)
yu laga mar na jayen
itni khushiyon k mare (sujal puts his finger on her lips kashish again hugs him & cries)
(then all of them stand up & sings 2gather 2 cheer her up.)
ek din fursat main
thame haath hamare
le gayi us dagar pe
jahan rehti hain baharen[2]

It's a new day
After breakfast all are sitting @ the bank of the beech & enjoying the water.
Sneha & prateek were playing @ the bank & wo dono ret (sand) se castle banana ki koshish ker rahe the.

Pr- array sneha aese nahi yahan se karo..
Sn- nahi yahan se theek nahi banega main theek ker rahe hu.
Pr- nahi yahan se theek banega..

They were having argument over how the gate will be & dono ko apni rayi (suggestion) theek lag rahe thi sneha was not listening to prateek to prateek gusse main aa ker sneha ki doll jo us k side main rakhi thi wo utha k pani main phenk deta hai sneha ye dekhti hai aur rona shurru ker deti hai aur wo rote hue sujal k pass aati hai..

Sujal use rota hua dekh k pareshan ho jata hai coz he cant tolerate tears in her eyes..

S- sneha kya hua? Tum ro kyu rahe ho?

Sneha rote hue sujal ko sab batati hai.
Angad listens this & wo prateek ko dantne lagta hai..
Prerna comes in btwn & prateek ko angad kid ant se bachati hai & sujal ki taraf dekhti hai jo sneha ko chup karane ki koshish ker raha hota hai..
Prerna goes there..

P- sneha ur my brave daughter na to tum itni chhoti si baat pe kyu ro rahe ho? Ham tumhe aur bohar sari dolls la k denge..

Sneha while crying says..

Sn- nahi mujhe wohe wali doll chahiye wo doll papa ne mujhe mere B'Day pe gift ki thi mujhe wohe chahiye..

Hearing this sujal immediately goes & ek dam pani main jump kerta hai..
Sab sujal ko rokne ki koshish kerte hain per wo to jese kisi ki awaz he nahi sun raha tha..
Kafi time hogaya tha aur sujal abhi tak pani se bahir nahi aaya hota.

Ab sab log us k liye pareshan ho jate hain.
All the guys goes in to the water aur sujal ko dhondne ki nakam koshish kerte hain per kisi ko bhi sujal nahi milta.

All the ladies were standing 2gather
aur kashish ko to jese her guzarta lamha her guzarta pal mano uski zindagi us se door lejata mehsoos horaha tha.
Then akshat comes to them….

Ak- nahi bhabhi sujal kahin mil he nahi raha…

Hearing this all were shocked.

Prerna had her mouth open.
& kashish ki aankhon se aansu behne shuru hojate hain…

K- ssssujjjjaaallll...........

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#915

R.S dear me soo damn happy that you have continued the story... me really very damn khush.... 😃
ab coming to the part it completely rocked... oh.. i tho loved it totally... simply amazing to the maximum maximum extent... yeh humare hero sahab bade hi samajdhaar hain he has decided ki sabhi bikes pe jayenge.. wah kya idea hain.. the newly wedded couple on the bike.. itne pass pass.. hye...hye.. how romantic could this get... just too gooddddddddd.... sujal ka idea is just amazing... kya dhassu idea hain.... mujhko tho seeti maarne ka jee kar raha hain sujal ke is idea pe.... he simply rocks yaar...... this was really a very romantic idea.... 😉
now all start driving the bikes... & follow sujal.... lekin sujal is driving so slowly... as ki kashish ne usse nahi pakda hain & sujal fears that may be kashish might loose her balance & fall... ab yeh angad aake sujal se kehtha hain ki bail gaadi chala rahe ho ya phir bike... phir angad ka kehna ki usse laga ki bike zameen par reng rahe hain.. then sujal ka us baat pe mazaak karna.... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha... this is was really very funny..... 😆 ab next sujal ka kashish se kehna to hold him... kahish ka thoda sa sharmana...hichkhichana... then she slowly puts her hand on sujal's waist... hye..... how romantic... aur ab sujal gaddi Dhoom ki speed mein chalatha hain.. you know what dear this is such a nice scene... indeed very damn romantic... mujhe bhi sharam aa rahi hain..... 😳
ab now when they all reach the place it is just soo beautiful... really very nice.. the relationship between rishab & sujal is very nice.. the bonding is too amazing.. & the place was really like a living heaven..... 😃 ab the scene between sujal , kashish... sujal telling kashish ki tum apna jannat dekho main apna jannat dekh raha hoon... hye... kashish ka sharmana.... uff.... inke pyaar ki ada par me totally fida.... balle balle...... 😳
then angad aur prerna ka sujal , kashish chedna... very funny.... 😆 then kashish ka sujal ke kehne par gaana gana... gaathe hue kashish ke aankhon se aaso ka nikalna..... sujal ka nodding his head in a no direction....then sujal ka aana aur kashish ko sambhal na.. kashish ka crying & hugging sujal... oh...this scene was soo very cute... it showed to what extent sujal cared for kashish........ ⭐️ 👍🏼 then in the last sujal ka paani mein khoodna to search for sneha's doll... aur when the guys go in search for sujal they don't find him... kashish ka shock hona...aur kehna sujaalllll..... ab yeh sujal ko kya ho gaya..... i really hope he is fine.. but me scared for sujal........😭 R.S dear next part mein i think sujal mil jayega... & then he will be sick may be with fever or may be he will be admitted in the hospital as ki woh pani ke andar bohat dhair thak raha.... yahaan kashish ka haal behaal hoga... in both the cases kashish will nurse him back to health.. take care of him... aur aise karthe karthe sujal , kashish ek dusare ki taraf aur attract honge aur kareeb aayenge... this is my guess.. tho tum kya sochthi ho is guess ke baare mein....
😉
ab please post the next part soon.. me will be waiting very eagerly... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#916

gr8 part.... 👏...n sweet 2 😳 😳 😳 ...bt where did sujal disappeared...waitng eagerly 4 nxt part...continue soon... 😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: sun_423
R.S dear me soo damn happy that you have continued the story... me really very damn khush.... 😃
ab coming to the part it completely rocked... oh.. i tho loved it totally... simply amazing to the maximum maximum extent... yeh humare hero sahab bade hi samajdhaar hain he has decided ki sabhi bikes pe jayenge.. wah kya idea hain.. the newly wedded couple on the bike.. itne pass pass.. hye...hye.. how romantic could this get... just too gooddddddddd.... sujal ka idea is just amazing... kya dhassu idea hain.... mujhko tho seeti maarne ka jee kar raha hain sujal ke is idea pe.... he simply rocks yaar...... this was really a very romantic idea.... 😉
now all start driving the bikes... & follow sujal.... lekin sujal is driving so slowly... as ki kashish ne usse nahi pakda hain & sujal fears that may be kashish might loose her balance & fall... ab yeh angad aake sujal se kehtha hain ki bail gaadi chala rahe ho ya phir bike... phir angad ka kehna ki usse laga ki bike zameen par reng rahe hain.. then sujal ka us baat pe mazaak karna.... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha... this is was really very funny..... 😆 ab next sujal ka kashish se kehna to hold him... kahish ka thoda sa sharmana...hichkhichana... then she slowly puts her hand on sujal's waist... hye..... how romantic... aur ab sujal gaddi Dhoom ki speed mein chalatha hain.. you know what dear this is such a nice scene... indeed very damn romantic... mujhe bhi sharam aa rahi hain..... 😳
ab now when they all reach the place it is just soo beautiful... really very nice.. the relationship between rishab & sujal is very nice.. the bonding is too amazing.. & the place was really like a living heaven..... 😃 ab the scene between sujal , kashish... sujal telling kashish ki tum apna jannat dekho main apna jannat dekh raha hoon... hye... kashish ka sharmana.... uff.... inke pyaar ki ada par me totally fida.... balle balle...... 😳
then angad aur prerna ka sujal , kashish chedna... very funny.... 😆 then kashish ka sujal ke kehne par gaana gana... gaathe hue kashish ke aankhon se aaso ka nikalna..... sujal ka nodding his head in a no direction....then sujal ka aana aur kashish ko sambhal na.. kashish ka crying & hugging sujal... oh...this scene was soo very cute... it showed to what extent sujal cared for kashish........ ⭐️ 👍🏼 then in the last sujal ka paani mein khoodna to search for sneha's doll... aur when the guys go in search for sujal they don't find him... kashish ka shock hona...aur kehna sujaalllll..... ab yeh sujal ko kya ho gaya..... i really hope he is fine.. but me scared for sujal........😭 R.S dear next part mein i think sujal mil jayega... & then he will be sick may be with fever or may be he will be admitted in the hospital as ki woh pani ke andar bohat dhair thak raha.... yahaan kashish ka haal behaal hoga... in both the cases kashish will nurse him back to health.. take care of him... aur aise karthe karthe sujal , kashish ek dusare ki taraf aur attract honge aur kareeb aayenge... this is my guess.. tho tum kya sochthi ho is guess ke baare mein....
😉
ab please post the next part soon.. me will be waiting very eagerly... 😃

What to say suri u always left me speechless yar

well just say that w8 4 next part & u'll know everything😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: priyanka_lover
great part 👏

Thanx priyanka😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#919

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*
gr8 part.... 👏...n sweet 2 😳 😳 😳 ...bt where did sujal disappeared...waitng eagerly 4 nxt part...continue soon... 😊

Thanx Guriya 😊 will try to post soon so that u can know where sujal is??