~*KAHANI PYAAR KII PART 1*~ SUJAL KASHISH

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 19 years ago

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HI guyz sorry 2 keep u all on w8ing but i was caught up with sumthing there4 couldnt write the next part but im trying my best to write asap so will surely post in 1 or 2 days 😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#322

R.S u don't have to be sorry..u post the part when you are able to.... we will wait... 😃

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jyothi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#323

hey rs sorry 4 the late reply cool story plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzcontinue soon

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: golu_1677
wonderful part pls continue soon. Wen are u posting the next part pls post it soon

Thanx golu 4 ur commnets im posting the next part within sum mints😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
hey rs sorry 4 the late reply cool story plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzcontinue soon

jyothi thanx 4 liking the part & dont worry next part is coming veryy soon

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 19 years ago

#326

Ok guyz the w8 is over now here im posting the next part of my story 😊 actually i was posting the part in morning but the net prblm 😡 didnt L8 me do so 😕 but now im posting the next part hpoe that u like this 1 too 😊
Now lets see whats going in kitchen.
Kashish kripa ki help k liye kitchen main jati hai @ 1st kripa deny per kashish sum how convinces her.
Kashish & kripa r busy in kitchen both r talking to each other like they knows each other since years.
Now upstairs in prateek's room sujal & prateek are playing video game while angad is doing the commentary.

A-ye c'mon sujal kick him kick him.
A-prateek punch him.
A-wow sujal 1 punch woho prateek beat him baet him.
A-chal na sujal mar usse kya ker raha hai?

Angad ka ye pichhle aadhe ghante se chal raha tha now sujal was completely irritated by his commentary.

S- bas kar yar kab se bak bak kiye ja raha hai tu?
A-array maine kya kiya?
S- kuchh nahi pichhle aadhe ghante se to main he bol raha hut u to kuchh nahi ker raha.

He says this completely irritated.

A-achha sorry abhi nahi karunga.

Angad 5 mint chup ker k bethta hai per uss k baad wapis us ski commentary shuru hojati hai.
Sujal puts the game remote down & stands up.

A-kahan jar aha hai?
S- shanti dhondne.
A-wo aaj kaam pe nahi aayi.
S- what?
A-haan na shanty bayi aaj kaam pe nahi aayi thi.
S- tujhe ladkiyo k alawa bhi kuchh soojhta hai? Main uss shanty ki nahi peace wali shanty ki baat ker raha tha.
A-oooo main samjha k tum…
S- tu apni samajh apne pass rakh main pani pene ja raha hu.

Sujal kitchen main jata hai.
Where kripa was busy in cooking & kashish was cutting vegetables 4 salit.

Sujal enters in the kitchen.

S- hello beautiful ladies.
Kashish looks up @ him & didn't say anything while kripa turn around & says…

Kr- hello handsome. Tum yaha kya ker rahe ho?
S- main tennis khel raha hu khelo gi?
Kr- tumhara kuchh nahi ho sakta.

Sujal smiles & goes to fridge & take out the water pour it in the glass & sits on cabinate.

Sujal to kripa.

S- kya ker rahe ho?
Kr- cricket khel rahi hu khelo ge?

Both smiles looking @ each other kashish too smiles.

Kr- angad kahan hai?
S- wo cooking ker raha hai.
Kr- sujal kyat um kabhi theek jawab nahi de sakte?
S- array main sach keh raha hu abhi abhi uss ne mera bheja fry kiya hai ab pata nahi bechare prateek ka kya hall ker raha hoga.

Every1 laughed @ this & sujal was talking to kripa abt here & there & kashish was just looking @ him she didn't realize aur wo apni ungli(finger) kat deti hai.

K- ahhhhhh.

Sujal immediately looks 2wards her & find her standing holding her finger.
Sujal runs 2 her.

S- kya hua?

He looks & her finger which was bleading.

S- kashish ye kese hua?

In the mean time kripa too comes there.

Kr- O God ye to bohat khoon beh raha hai main first aid box lati hu.
Kripa goes from there to take the box.

Sujal was veryy worried abt kash & was looking @ her wound while saying..

S- kashish diyan rakhna chahiye tha na dekho ab kitna khoon beh raha hai.
S- tum apna khayal bilkul nahi rakhti.
& he goes on & on & on while kashish was looking @ him only she was not listening to what he was saying she was just lost in him k usse pata he nahi chalta k sujal kya keh raha hai?
Sujal bolte bolte kahshish ki taraf dekhta hai & find her looking @ him.
Dono ki aankhen milti hain & they just 4got abt everything just keep looking @ each other then kripa enters in the kitchen & dono ko dekhti hai she didn't want to disturb them but she has to do so she clears her throat.

Kr- ahhem aheem.

Both sujal kashish came back in reality.

Kr- ye lo sujal.
S- thanx kripa.
S- chalo yahan betho kashish.

He made her sit on chair & applies antiseptic on her wound this hurt her & she says….

K- aahhh.

Ye sun k sujal thoda gussa ho jata hai not on kahsish but on her carelessness.
S- wah ab ooh aah ouch ker rahe ho jab kat rahe thi to kuchh nahi socha tha?
K- sujal im sorry main to bass.
S- tum to kya kashish? Tum bohat carelessness hoti ja rahe ho apne mamle main aaj subah bhi tum wo site pe pahad se girne wali thi aura b ye.
K- kaha na sorry.
S- tumhare sorry kehne se kya tumhara dard theek ho jaye ga?
Kashish was silent.
S- nahi na to apna ye sorry apne pass he rakho.

Sujal apna kaam complete ker chukka tha matlab kashish k finger pe plaster laga diya tha.

S- ab agar tumne kuchh bhi aesa wesa kiya na to main…
K- kya sujal kitna dant rahe ho ek to chot lagi hai mujhe aur tum ho k dant rahe ho aur maaf bhi nahi ker rahe.
Saying this she made a sweet puppy like face lol
Sujal sees her & says..

S- achha ab ye aese faces banana ki zaroorat nahi aur plz ab apna khayal rakhna.
Kahshish give a smile of relief.
K- theek hai baba ab khayal rakhugi.khush?
S- bohat.

Both smiles @ each other & kripa who was standing there watching the whole scene she too had a smile on her face.

Then sujal turn to leave & find kripa smiling & looking @ him.

S- kya hua aese kya dekh rahe ho?
Kr- hua kahan abhi to shuruyat hai.
S- kya kiss cheez ki shuruyat?
Kr- wese sujal lagta hai k mujhe k ab jald he tum bhi settle hone wale ho.
S- ye tumhara khuwab khuwab he rahe ga.
Kr- khuwab aadha poora hote to main abhi dekh chuki hu baqi ka aadha bhi jaldi he poora ho jaye ga.

Sujal looks @ her 1st surprisingly & then lowers his eyes in embarrassment.

S- nahi wo to……

He was fumbling with words.
While kripa was enjoying his state.
Kr- wo to kya sujal.

She said this hiding her smile.
Sujal notice this & says..
S- kripa tum bhi na.

& he leave from there smiling broadly.

Then kripa set table 4 lunch kahsish wants to help her but kripa stops her by saying..
Kr- mujhe sujal k haatho marna nahi.

Then every 1 had there lunch. after lunch they were sitting in hall.
Kripa & kashish was talking to each other then after sumtime sujal & angad went in the study 2 sign the papers.
They were signing the papers & were discussing the project after the project discussion they remember their collage days.

A-tujhe yaad hai kese sari ladkiyan tujh pe marti thi?
S- aur tujhe yaad hai k kese tu sari ladkiyo pe marta tha?
A-haan yar kya din the wo bhi.
S- achha abhi kripa ko batata hu k tu abhi tak nahi sudra.
A-array marwana hai kya?
S- kyu abhi to bohat bol raha tha abhi bolti band ho gayi.
A-yahi hall hota hai shadi k baad.
S- tujhe yaad hai wo ladki jo tere pechhe pada rehti thi.
A-mat pooch yar chipko ki baat ker raha hia na tu?
S- haan ussi ki baat ker raha hu.wese naam kyat ha us ka?
A-uss ka naam…
& he start thinking.

S- Janvi.
A- haan uss ladki naam jaaa

Abhi angad ne itna he kaha tha k kripa enters the room & wo chup ho jata hai.

Kr- kis ladki ki baat ho rahe thi? Aur ye tum kis ladki ka naam le rahe the? Jo ye JAA keh rahe the?

Angad chup ho jata hai & madad k liye sujal ki taraf dekhta hai.
Sujal usse assuring look deta hai.

S- wo angad to tumhare bare main he baat ker raha tha.
Kr- achha?
She says this as she didn't believe him.

Kr- to mera naam kab se Jaa se shuru hone laga?
S- simple kyu ki angad ne tumhara naam nahi liya.

Angad looks @ him with marwadiya look.

Kr- dekha maine kaha tha na. angad tum kabhi nahi sudro ge.
S- array meri baat to suno angad ne tumhara naam nahi liya coz wo to tumhe JAAN keh raha tha kyu angad?
A-haan (he says this haan as he is lost somewhere but later he understands & says ) haan haan aur nahi to kya? Kripa tum hamesha mujh pe shak kerti ho main sudhar gaya hu yaar trust me.
Kr- im sorry angad maine tumhe ghalat samjha.
S- lekin tum yaha kisi kaam se aayi thi?
Kr- array main to bhool he gayi main tum dono se coffee ka poochhne aayi thi poyo ge?
A-agar aap pyar se pilaye gi to kyu nahi piye ge?

They both start looking lovingly @ each other when sujal says..
S- ahhem ahhem main bhi hu yahan pe.
A-tu na hamesha wrong timings pe hota hai.
Kr- tum dono ab bahir chalo kashish akeli hai main coffee bana k lati hu.

Sujal & angad goes in the hall where kashish was sitting with prateek.
After some time kripa comes with coffee.
They were having the coffee when angad says…

A-sujal tu to India nahi aana chahta tha phir tu yaha kese aaya? I mean MR. SUJAL GAREWAL to jo decide kerte hain to unhe koi bhi nahi samjha sakta.
S- yes ur right koi bhi mere decision ko change nahi ker sakta per siwai BHAI k.
A-OO main bhi kahu k wok on hai jis ne SUJAL GAREWAL ko apna faisla badalne pe majboor ker diya.
S- shut up yar aur wese bhi yahan aa k lagta hai k Kash yahan pehle aaya hota.

Sujal says this while looking @ kashish.

A-tune mujhe miss to kiya hoga na?
S- array bohat yad kiya kripa ko prateek ko.
A-aur mujhe nahi kiya?
S- yar teri yad main to main gane gata tha.

Angad excitedly
A-sach main?
S- haan aur nahi to main kya jhooth bol raha hu?
A-kon sa gana gata tha?
S- abhi sonata hu.
A-jaldi suna.
S- tujhe bhool jana jana
A-hay maine ye song suna hai tum itna miss kerte the mujhe?
S- pehle poora sun to le.
A-ok ok suna.
Sujal start singing.

Tujhe bhool jana jana
Mushkil nahi
Tu yaad jo aaye
aesa koi din nahi.

Angad k chehre per se muskaan ghayab ho jati hai & kripa , kashish hansne lagti hain.

Angad dono ko hanste hue dekhta hai & sharminda sa hota hai.

A-ye sab teri wajah se hua hai ruk abhi batata hu.

Saying this angad runs 2werds sujal & sujal bhi bhagne lagta hai.
They both were running like tom & jerry😆
Unhe aese dekh k kripa & kashish ko aur hansi aati hai
Bhagte bhagte angad k haath main jo aa raha tha wo usse sujal ko marta jar aha tha & in last angad apni shirt uthata hai & throws that 2 sujal sujal catches the shirt & says..

S- kya yar angad kitne din se nahi nahaya yaar tu? Kitni badboo aarahe hai teri shirt se.

Ye sunte he angad ka para aur chad jata hai & he start running more fast & wo bhagte bhagte ghar se bahir chale jate hain leaving kripa & kashish laughing like hell.

Bahir ja k bhi dono apne kaam main magan the matlab running main.
& when they were passing by the window of hall which was opened they both saw their love laughing matlab kripa & kashish & dono wahin ruk jate hain.
Both were just staring @ them.
Sujal ne kashish ko pehli baar iss tarah khul k hanst hue dekha tha.

A-kitni khoobsurat lag rahe hai na?

He says this totally lost in kripa.
Sujal who was lost in kashish just hummed.
S- hmmm.
S- kash k ye hansi uss k chahre pe hamesha rahe.
& sujal apne dil main apne aap se vaada kerta hai k wo kashish ko hamesha khush rakhe ga.
Phir dono ander jate hain.

Kr- ab dekho inhe kashish kaun kahe ga k kuchh dair pehle ye dono tom & jerry ki tarah lad rahe the?
S- array madam yahi to khasiyat hai hamari dosti ki.
A-haan bilkul theek kaha tumne sujal.
S- achha ab hamen chalna chahiye.
Kr- itni jaldi kya hai?
S- nahi kripa hamen wapis shaimla k liye nikal na hai.
S- chalen kashish?
K- jii.
A-main project ki file lata hu.

Angad brings the file & then sujal kashish bids good bye 2 every1 & leave 4 the hotel.
They reached the hotel.

S- kashish tum ja k fresh ho jao mujhe property dealer se milna hai kuchh formalities complete kerni hain main bas yu gaya aur yu aaya tab tak tum fresh ho jao aur mere aate he ham shimla k liye nikle ge.
K- theek hai sujal.
S- bye.
K- bye.
Kashish open the door & was abt to get out from the car when sujal said..

S- kashish.

Kashish turns 2 him.

S- koi bhi prblm ho to mujhe call kerna.

Kashish smiles on his concern & says..

K- ok sujal main tumhe call kar lugi don't worry tum aaram se ja k apna kaam poora karo.

Sujal smiles & leave from there.

After abt 1 hour sujal came back & find k hotel main AAG lagi hui hai & he says.

S- KASHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIISHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#327

R.S yaar ur just tooo damn good yaar......... 👏 tum mujhe ek baat batao tum har baar itna mast zabardast kaise likhthi ho.....each part of your's is totally marvelloys , brilliant , toooo gooddddddddd , bindaas , dhassu , mind blowing naah actually mind blasting.............. 👍🏼
oh... i just love it....sujal ka kashish ke liye concern..unki nazro ka milna.......hye hye...me tho total khush.......... 😳 u know what R.S sujal ,kashish ko aur do theen din tum saath mein Delhi mein rakhna so that woh ek dusare ke aur kareeb ho jaye..... 😉
ab please jaldi se continue karna.. i'll be waiting.... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#328

woaw R.S. the last part jus made me sit up......ths part was jus sooooooooooooo cute .....n the vege cuttin scene was soooo sweet...da way sujal snapped at her...it was soo sweet.....i wonder wut will happen since da hotel caught on fire.......plz update soon.....n will b waitin eagerly 4 da nxt part...take carez...n luv ya....

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
great part
👏 👏

Thanx 4 ur comments😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: sun_423
R.S yaar ur just tooo damn good yaar......... 👏 tum mujhe ek baat batao tum har baar itna mast zabardast kaise likhthi ho.....each part of your's is totally marvelloys , brilliant , toooo gooddddddddd , bindaas , dhassu , mind blowing naah actually mind blasting.............. 👍🏼
oh... i just love it....sujal ka kashish ke liye concern..unki nazro ka milna.......hye hye...me tho total khush.......... 😳 u know what R.S sujal ,kashish ko aur do theen din tum saath mein Delhi mein rakhna so that woh ek dusare ke aur kareeb ho jaye..... 😉
ab please jaldi se continue karna.. i'll be waiting.... 😃

Suri yar ye sab aap logo ka pyar he hai jo mujhe her baar aesa likhne pe majboor kerta hai & im sooo happy that u liked the part😊😃 & i'll try to cont soon dont worry😊