~*KAHANI PYAAR KII PART 1*~ SUJAL KASHISH - Page 28

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: parvathicanada

fabulous part R.S. 👏 looks like love is in the air 😉 plz cont soon can't wait 4 the next part 😊

Thanx parvathi.

i'll cont soon😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

R.S toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
👏 the part really very nice..u keep up the good work......... 👍🏼
you are a STAR R.S....... ⭐️ good that charu aur akshat Shimla wapas chale gaye...sujal kashish ko bhi tho thodi privacy chahiye na.......... 😆 so ab sujal kashish akele hain i hope woh dono ek dusare ke kareeb aajaye... 😉 ab please continue very very very soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.............me will be waiting........... 😃

Suri yar i just love ur beautiful coments & uss se bhi zyada luv u yar😊 im sooooooooooo happy that u liked the part that much😃 i'll cont soon😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: group_1223

yes yes yes.....dono hadiyan challi gayein...lolz....i m sooo happpy....i m still puzzled abt kash's past.....n i guess she knows dat sujal likes her...the nxt part z gonna b fun...wid sujal n kash away 4m home n alone...... 😆 ...c meri imagination kahan kahan ja rahi hai---khair hai...brake marti hoon...lol.....will b waitin anxiously 4 da nxt parts....take carez...n ths part was totally awesome...gud job...luv ya...

S.H no thanx 4 comments😆 & i dint think that kashish knows that sujal likes her ab next part main fun hoga ya nahi cant say.

i'll cont soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey R.S wow, 😛 wow, 😛 wow.... 😛 wat a part... 👏 maza aa gaya.. 😊
yaar par Kashish ne aisa toh kya Bahot Kuch Dekha un Deep eyes mei???? 😉
dear plz cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
😃

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

S.H no thanx 4 comments😆 & i dint think that kashish knows that sujal likes her ab next part main fun hoga ya nahi cant say.

i'll cont soon

hey R.S....tum part to likho....sub kuch fun ho ga

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: KulBin

hey R.S wow, 😛 wow, 😛 wow.... 😛 wat a part... 👏 maza aa gaya.. 😊
yaar par Kashish ne aisa toh kya Bahot Kuch Dekha un Deep eyes mei???? 😉
dear plz cont soon.... 😊

Thanx kulbin

ab kashish ne aesa kyu kaha mujhe nahi pata😆 uss ne bataya nahi hai na abhi mujhe to main kese bataon?😕 well no worries dear RS is here😉 pata laga k rahege.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: group_1223

😃

hey R.S....tum part to likho....sub kuch fun ho ga

Ok S.H as u say the part is coming in a while😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
Here is the next part guyz.
Kashish & sujal air port se wapis aa rahe hote hain.

IN CAR

Kashish was silent all the time & sujal notices her silence.
All the time kashish was looking out side sujal was giving her sum side glances. Now sujal couldn't tolerate kashish's silence so he stops the car in mid way. This time kashish looks @ him.

K- Car kyu roki? Kya hua?
S- wohe to main jan-na chahta hu k kya hua hai kashish?
K- main samjhi nahi?

Sujal takes a deep breath
S- Ahhhhhhh yahi to baat hai k tum samajhti nahi.
K- matlab?
S- kashish main jab pehle charu k kamre main aaya tha tab tum bilkul theek thi magar jab main 2bara aaya tabhi se tum kuchh khoi khou se lag rahe ho. Pata nahi kyu magar mujhe aesa lag raha hai k koi baat hai jo tumhe pareshan ker rahe hai koi baat hai jo tum soch rahe ho.
K- sujal aesi koi baat nahi tum khamkha main tension le rahe ho.
S- kashish u can tell me yar.
K- sujal aesi koi baat hoti to main tumhe batai na wesa kuchh nahi jesa tum soch rahe ho.
S- kashish tumhari zuban to jhoot bol sakti hai magar tumhari aankhen mujhe sab bata rahe hain haan agar tum nahi batana chahti to its ok.
K- nahi sujal tum………
S- maine kaha na kashish its f9.

Sujal starts the car & they reached the hotel.

S- kashish ab tum ja k aaram kerlo kal subah hamen jaldi nikalna hai.
K- theek hai sujal.
K- good night sujal.
S- good night sleep tight & sweet dreams.
K- u 2 bye.
S- bye.

Then both enters in their rooms.
(dono k rooms ek dam aamne saamne hain)

IN KASHISH's ROOM

She was lying on the bed.

K- mujhe ye kya ho gaya tha? Main kyu aese react ker rahe hu? Main sujal k bare main soch kyu rahe hu?

Magar kashish ki anter aatma K/A (lol) usse agree nahi ker rahe thi.

K/A- Charu ne jo kaha wo sab sach he to hai to tum ese kyu soch rahe ho?
K- nahi jo charu ne kaha wo nahi hosakta.
K/A- kyu nahi hosakta?
K- kyu k mera past… main nahi bhula sakti wo sab.
K/A- uss sab main tumhari koi ghalti nahi thi kashish.
K- jo bhi ho magar main aesa kuchh nahi ker sakti.
K/A- kashish ye tum achhi tarah se janti ho k sujal tumhe pasand kerta hai uss main wo sab qualities hain jo tumhe apne life partner main chahiye thi aur tum bhi to usse pasand kerne lagi ho.
K- janti hu main k sujal main wo sari qualities hain magar main nahi chahti k sujal ki zindagi berbaad ho.
K/A- sujal ki zindagi berbaad nahi hogi kashish ulta wo to……………...
K- bas mujhe kuchh nahi sun-na main koi baat nahi kerna chahti iss bare main sujal sirf mera achha dost hai aur kuchh nahi.
K/A- tum abhi to ye sab keh rahe ho kashish magar kab tak apne dil ko rokogi aakhir kab tak? Ek na ek din tumhe iss baat ka ehsaas ho he jayega k tum sujal se pyar kerti ho.
K- nahi aesa kabhi nahi hoga suna tumne kabhi nahi.
Her last words echoed & the aatma gum ho jati hai.

Kashish apne bed pe uth k beth jati hai & she remembers jab ussne charu ko apne dream man k bare main bataya tha.

FLASHBACK

Kashish & charu were sitting with her frnds. After sum time 1 by 1 sab chali jati hain to sirf charu & kashish beth hoti hian there charu told her abt her & akshat.

K- WHTtttttt? Tum aur akshat?????? I don't believe it yar.
C- haan na pehle main bhi aesa he sochti thi magar he's nice yar.
K- charu ye to bol rahe hai? I mean tum dono hamesha ladte rehte the wo to tujhe ek aankh nahi bhata tha aur achanak ye news I mean im confuse yar.
C- kashish c'mon yar yahan main tujhe apni love life bata rahe hu aur to hai k….

K- ook ok im sorry yar.
C- its ok achha tu bata k tujhe apna dream man kesa chahiye?
K- mujhe…

She gets a dreamy look on her face.

K- mujhe aesa life partner chahiye jo mujhe samjh sake jo mera he nahi sab ka khayal rakhe jo mujhe bohat bohat bohaaaaaaaaaaat pyar kare jo mere batane se pehle jan jaye k main kya soch rahe hu? Mujhe kya chahiye? Kahin Mujhe koi baat pareshan to nahi ker rahe? Jo meri aankho main dekh k mere dil ka haal jan jaye. Jis ki aankho main pyar ka samander ho jis ki aankhen khamosh reh k bhi sab kuchh keh jaye. Jo mere liye kuchh bhi ker sakta ho jis k dil main mere liye mohabbat he mohabbat ho jo…………………

C- bas bas meri ma aesa ladka agar dhondhne nikle na ham to tu to borhe ho chuki hogi magar phir bhi ye tera dream man nahi milega.
K- shut up main janti hu wo milega aur zaroor milega.

Kashish comes back to the reality.

K- kya kya nahi socha tha maine aur paya bhi to kya?

SUJAL's ROOM

Sujal was working on his laptop( wo laptop laya tha saath main)

Kaam kerte kerte wo ek dam ruk jata hai.

S- aaj kashish udaas kyu thi? Uss k aankho main maine ek ajeeeb si bechaini dekhi magar main uss ki bechaini ko dekh k itna bechain kyu ho raha hu? Kyu kashish ki udasi mujhse dekhi nahi jati? Kyu?
S- kahin main kashish se pyar……
S- nahi ye pyar nahi ho sakta.
S- agar ye pyar nahi to phir kya hai? Kyu main her waqt kashish k bare main sochta rehta hu? Kyu usse takleef ya pareshani main nahi dekh sakta? Aakhir kyu?

Tabhi sujal ki aatma(lol aaj aatma day hai kya?) wahan ati hai.

S/A- kyu ki tum kashish se pyar kerte ho.
S- main pyar?? Kashish se?????
S/A- haan pyar kerte ho tum kashish se use bechain dekh k bechaini tumhe hoti hai udaas wo hoti hai to pareshan tum hote ho khush wo hoti hai to muskurate tum ho kya ye sab tum mehsoos nahi kerte?
S- haan kerta hu.
S/A- to ye pyar nahi to aur kya hai sujal?

Sujal smiles

S- pyar??
S- haan shayad pyar kerta hu main kashish se.

************************************************************ ****
NEW DAY

Sujal aur kashish project site dekh rahe ho te hain.

K- sujal mujhe lagta hai k site perfect hai.
S- han kashish site to theek hai magar main sare sites dekh k koi decision lena chahta hu ho sakta hai k un main se koi iss se bhi zyada achhi ho.
K- tum theek keh rahe ho.
S- to mr sharma (the property dealer) next site kahan hai?
SH- Ji sir chalen main le chalta hu aap ko.

Sujal & kashish sare sites dekh lete hain & ye ab last site ho ta hai.

SH- sir ye hai last site.
S- hmm ye site theek rahe gi kashish tum kya kehti ho?
K- haan sujal ye pehle wali se behtar hai.
S- mr sharma hamen ye site chahiye aap sari formalities complete ker le main sham main aake papers sign ker luga.
SH- ok sir main abhi ja k papres ready kerwata hu.

Then mr sharma wahan se chale jate hain & sujal kashish site ko dekhte hain chalte chalte kashish bilkul site k end pe pohanch jati hai per usse iss baat ka ehsaas nahi hota wo to bas site dekh rahe hoti hai jab sujal usse dekhta hai k kashish agar ek kadam aur peche hati to wo gir jaye gi to sujal daudta hua kashish k paas aata hai kashish ek step pechhe hoti hai aur wo girne wali he hoti hai k sujal usse pakad leta hai.

Sujal usse dantna shuru hojata hai.

S- kya kashish abhi gir jati to?
K- im sorry sujal.
S- SORRY kashish tumhare sorry kehne se kuchh nahi hota agar tumhe kuchh hojata to?
K- sujal main to site dekh rahe thi mujhe pata he nahi chala k kab main…
S- kashish magar tum apna dhiyan to rakhna……………………
K- sujal im sorry plz maaf ker do.

Kashish sujal ko baat poori nahi kerne deti aur pleading face bana k kehti hai.
Sujal usse dekhta hai aur uska gussa hawa ho jata hai.

S- its ok per aage se dhiyan rakhna.
K- ok boss.

Both smile.

S- ab chalen hamen lunch pe bhi jana hai.
K- haan chalo.

Wo dono hotel jate hian.

S- kashish tum tayyar ho jao mian abhi thodi dair main aata hu.
K- kahin ja rahe ho?
S- haan bas 5 mints main aaya.
K- ok.

Kashish apne room mian jati hai.& sujal shopping mall jata hai coz uss k paas kapde nahi the(lol) kyu ki ye sab to ek din k liye aaye the to koi bhi kapde saath main nahi laya tha.

Sujal apne liye balck paint & black polo neck shirt leta hai & wapis aata hai.

To ab agar sujal k pass kapde nahi the to kashish k paas bhi nahi the.
Kashish apne room main issi bare main soch rahe hoti hai.

K- oh no mere paas to koi dress he nahi hai ab main lunch pe kya pahen k jaogi? Ek kaam kerti hu sujal se kehti hu k meri tabiyat theek nahi haan ye theek rahega.
K- nahi agar maine sujal se kaha k im not feeling well to sujal bhi nahi jayega. Kya karu? Kuchh samajh nahi aaraha.
K- oh God plz help me.

Tabhi koi door knock kerta hai.
Kashish opens the door & find sujal standing there.

Kashish samajhti hai k sujal usse lene aaya hai.

K- sujal tum wo main bas tayyar hone he wali thi.
S- achha hua tum abhi tak tayyar nahi hui.

Kashish samajhti hai k lunch cancel hogaya hai aur wok hush ho k poochti hia.

K- lunch cancel ho gaya?
S- nahi to lunch kyu cancel hoga?
K- nahi wo actually main………………… kher chhodo ye batao k kya baat hai jo tumne kaha k achha hua k main tayyar nahi hui?
S- wo actually main chahta tha k tum aaj lunch pe ye dress pehno.

He gives her a box.
K- ye kya hai sujal?
S- kashish agar tum ye dress peho gi to mujhe achha lagega.
S- main chalta hut um tayyar ho joa.

Ye keh k sujal wahan se chala jata hai kashish closes the door & opens the box & wo dekhti hai k box mian wohi dress hota hai jo kashish ne kripa k ;iye pasand kiya tha mall main remember?

K- ye to wohi dress hai jo maine kripa k liye choose kiya tha magar ye dress sujal ko pasand nahi aaya tha to ye dress ussne mujhe kyu diya?

She was confused.

K- kher abhi to mujhe tayyar hona chahiye.

Then kashish tayyar hoti hai & sujal k room main jati hai.
She knocks @ the door & sujal opens the door.

Sujal was also wearing black & was looking sooooooooo hot damn good (ab main kya kahu imagine ker lo k kesa lag raha hoga) sujal ko dekh k kashish usse dekhti he reh jati hai & udhar sujal ka bhi yahe haal hota hai dono ek doosre main kho jate hain.
4 a mint dono ki aankhen milti hain then kashish apni nazre neeche ker leti hai.

K- chalen?
S- haan bas main car ki keys le lu.

Sujal car ki keys leta hai & wo dono hotel se chale jate hian.

Do tell me did u like this or not?
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Posted: 19 years ago
i din't like it at alll.....cuz i jus luved ths aprt....i luv dair antra aatmas---kitni smart hain yaar...dey noe dat dey luv each oder......bas kashish maam ke brain mein ye baat dalne ki dair hai....kash's past is sooo mysterious...i wonder wut happened.....
n ya...i wish dair was a pic where i cud see sujal n kash in da dresses dat u mentioned.....newayz....if i start on mi wishes...puri raat lag jaye gi...so take carez...n luv ya....thx 4 postin ths part since i was eagerly waiitn 4 it....luv u lots.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
R.S toooooooooooooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ddddddddddddddddddddd.... me bohat khush ki kahiin na kahiin dono ko yeh ehsaas ho gaya hain that they love each other...the part was really very sweet dear..........keep up the good work....... 👏 sujal is such a sweetheart woh kashish ke liye dress leke aaya.......shooooooooooo sweetttttt... 😳
u know what sujal fits into the picture for kashish dream man...aur haan me very sure that kashish aur sujal ek dusare se apne pyaar ka izhaar jaldi se karenge & me also thinking that kashish pehle will say i love you to sujal... 😉 now it is good that sujal kashish are spending some time together.....i hope woh ek dusare ke aur bhi kareeb aajaye..aur jab woh dono wapas jaaye tho let them miss each other...mazaa aayega... 😆
chalo ab jaldi se continue karo...me waiting... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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