OS: Just Another Day

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awww that was sad but amazing xx

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SStephy

@SStephy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

A nicely written OS!!

Khushi planning what all she would do for her birthday in her sleep and it was sad when she opens her eyes, her reality hits her. And her birthday did end up being just another day... nothing special about it. That is really sad.

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Brilliant!! I loved it!!

Thanks for the pm!!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Thank you so much everyone!

Am glad so many of you took the time to like / comment on my OS

It means a lot!

Btw, the promo is out and my mood is 100x better. So there maybe a happy OS soon before the episode airs and disappoints me :P

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hats off u made me cry really it ws heart drenching... awsmm os ... continue plsss

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Ishi

@Desai09

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Very nicecely executed OS...

Heart touching...

Almost felt likt crying for Khushin..

I wish you would continue on the same but as u said this is just one shot so...

But very nice OS...

Thanks for the PM...

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Awe. That was so like Khushi.

I loved it!

Please write more. and let pm me for any of your works. Thanks! :)

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

"PS: Please excuse the product of my dark mood. I promise to write something happier the moment the show exhibits any signs of redemption :)"

My thoughts exactly!

Felt really bad for Khushi...miss her bubbliness! Your story brought out the lowness of her mood!

Each episode is torture for me to watch these days! And I seriously doubt I will forgive Arnav in the near future!

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pringle6

@pringle6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

That was a beautiful piece of writing... it brought tears to my eyes😭👏

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Vsc94
"PS: Please excuse the product of my dark mood. I promise to write something happier the moment the show exhibits any signs of redemption :)"

My thoughts exactly!

Felt really bad for Khushi...miss her bubbliness! Your story brought out the lowness of her mood!

Each episode is torture for me to watch these days! And I seriously doubt I will forgive Arnav in the near future!

Tell me about it! I am pretty upset with the show. They are trying to retain Khushi's bubbliness but they are missing the point..How can anyone be their bubbly self without any answers from the man she loves but is forced to hate and with so many people upset with her

And why the hell is she still sleeping out by the pool!

Argh!