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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: zaara2212
Simi what happened, hope all well

ugh lets see if everything goes well l8r...

right now everything is all same

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: nehaagarwalv
😭 Poor geet. Abusive Maan, makes her do so much of work and massage and then throws cold water on her, then again forces her. Very very bad and abusive. I hope he will soon realise all his mistakes and repent but even he should go through the same in some other way and realise, what he did with Geet was very very bad

😉 Loving the ff though and love this cruel, devil, arrogant BAD KING MAAN as well coz he will surly later on become worthy for our sweet little GEET😆

Thanks Neha!

haha lets see what happens with this king.he is so tricky 😉😉

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Part 12
Wow geet is making plan against him...using him against him only...trying to dowhaterver he wants and thereby escaping with vicky...
Is this so easy...?
Very well written

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Part 13
He is really shetan in all sence...he is using her like slave...
He is doing all this is because of her fefusal to his demands...
He cant accept her denial in any matter...
He married her only b'coss of she answers back and he is nothing imp to her which maan feels as his insult.
Lets see how she copes up with all his demands
Update soon

Thanks Madhuri for both posts!

lets seee if she is able to escpae with vicky or escape at all for that matter😆

She is strong lets see how she is able to stand up to him withotu loosing her battles...😉

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: Makpie
Whn will u rvl d past of Maan's rudness?

Well in this particular fan fic..he has no past except this is how he was taught to behave by his father but I will show little clips of him when he was little..his behavior and all if you want to make it easier 😳

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: doublecross

THAT was amazing!
maan's rude, stubborn and arrogant, but i guess not emotionless given his reactions every time geet got hurt
he has only learnt to annex or say capture
but i'm sure our feisty geet will be able to bring in some changes in his life

Thanks!

gald you like it and is slowly accepting this rude king hehehehe

Geet is no less then him😉

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shimmerr
hey simi!!
awesome update dear!!
just loved it!!
this maan is such an a**!!
still i like him some how!!
hope geet will come out of this hell soon and get to know where vicky is and take him with her.
but even if she will go away, wont he find her??
after all he is the king!!
continue soon dear!!

Hey!

how are you!

heheh yeah he is bad but no matter what we cannot hate him right?😉😆

well lets see if she is able to escape or not

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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

hey simi
good morning
how are u?
and who is ur day started dear?
and today ur alr8 na
cause yesterday u were not in mood to talk

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: nehaagarwalv
👏 Woow u write really well.
Maan is seriously arrogant and rude, but he cant stay away from Geet and cant keep his hands off geet 😆😉... Maan is forcing geet, raping her all the time, when will Geet have upper hand ??? when will he understand that Wife ke aage demonstration nai dete 😆
DEMOSTRATION WAS AWESOME- MAAN IS SO VERY INSENSITIVE 😉😆
Waiting for the updates make it soon!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!

glad you like my wriitng..sicne soemtimes I can't say that for myself...

Don't worry...Geet's turn will come for now am just building the charactrs...😆😆😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: zohafarheen
hey simi
good morning
how are u?
and who is ur day started dear?
and today ur alr8 na
cause yesterday u were not in mood to talk

hey zoha!

am good today!

yeah yesterday was just a bad day but now feel somewhat better😳

thanks for asking!

how are you?😳