thank yr and thank u for advice:)Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
very sweet n cute os..
just a small sggestion hope u dont mind..
u write beautifully no doubt..
but sometimes u rush things...
which dont make it clear...
so if not in long detail but a small bit of it..
so it seems perfect...n would make readers more connected to ur os..ff..
sorry again...hope u dont mind...but felt like telling u..
do write more..
thnx for the pm...