OS khushis worst nightmare part 2

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--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

this is a very very short OS...but its really nice.
plzzz LIKE/COMMENT/BUDDY.
its is my second time writing OS for arhi.
if i get around 170 likes or atlest 100 comments. then i will write part 2.

THE WORST NIGHTMARE

A motorcycle crashed into a building last night because of break failure. Two people were involved, a handsome boy and a pretty girl, but only 1 survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the 23 year old boy realized that his breaks had broke, but he didn't want to let his wife know. Instead, he made her say she loved him and felt her hug one last time, and let her wear his helmet so that she would live, realizing he would be the one that would die.

*************FLASHBACK************

khushi: slow down, I am scared
arnav: No this is fun. .
khushi: No its not. Please, it's too scary!
arnav: Then tell me you love me.
khushi: Fine, I love you, but slow down!
arnv: Now give me a BIG hug.*khushi hugs him*
khushi: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? Its bugging me.

***********end of flashback*************
khushi suddently waked up and tears were rolling down her cheeks. she quickly looked besides her to see if her husbend is still sleeping next to her or not.
she relifed a sigh and hugged arnav tightly not wanting to let him go.
arnav waked up and saw her crying, he got really scared and worried. he quickly hugged khushi back so she wouldn't be scared.
arnav: khushi?? wat heppend? why are you crying?
khushi: arnav... i'll never let you go...i wont ever leave you... wherever you go i'll always follow you... if you die then i'll die too.
arnav was really scared of wat she was talking about.
arnav: khushi wat are you talking about? off course i'll never ever leave you."
khushi was crying really badly. arnav hugged khushi and wiped her tears.
khushi: promise me...
arnav: i promise khushi. i'll never leave you and go"
he kissed her cheeks and told her to stop crying now.
arnav: by the way khushi, how come you suddenly waked up and started crying?
khushi told him everything.
arnav smiled and thanked god for the nightmare. he then had a flashback...
********FLASHBACK******

ooops i am eveil no?
sorry i'll only continue this OS if i have round 170 likes and atleast 100 comments.
by the way u must be really confused of why arnav was smiling and thanking the god for the nightmare that khushi had.

part two on page 11

part 2

Edited by darksydeangel - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

loveD it !
coNtinue soON.

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Piya dhaliwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely os it is really cute:)

thanks 4 the pm

i enjoyed reading it

loved it:)

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aashshhs

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Posted: 13 years ago

Cliff hanger much, eh! Do continue soon :) :) :)

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Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

shokofa luv...it was brilliant..

me wants another part...

and soonish... awesome... awesome

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was nice and interesting.

But you know, I have read that starting para story somewhere. Maybe in the hundreds of chain mails I receive. Were you inspired from that?

But you have added your own twist. So I liked it!⭐️

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--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: molten_lava
It was nice and interesting.
But you know, I have read that starting para story somewhere. Maybe in the hundreds of chain mails I receive. Were you inspired from that?

But you have added your own twist. So I liked it!⭐️

the very part of the story...well how can i explain that.

that was something like very very short story ON FACEBOOK... ( well it wasn't a story) but at the end of that it says like and comment if you belive in true love.

but i made it wayyy different from it.

I DID NOT COPY IT. so plzz don't think tht i coppied it from somewhere.

I AM NOT A COPY CAT or anything,

Edited by shokofa - 13 years ago

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey it was good.. the starting i mean khushi's nightmare i read it somewhere may be in some forwarded mails.. but i love it with arhi though :)

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shokofa
the very part of the story...well how can i explain that.
that was something like very very short story ON FACEBOOK... ( well it wasn't a story) but at the end of that it says like and comment if you belive in true love.

but i made it wayyy different from it.

I DID NOT COPY IT. so plzz don't think tht i coppied it from somewhere.

I AM NOT A COPY CAT or anything,

Hey! No worries! I just asked whether u were inspired from it. I am not accusing you of copying it. And I can clearly see your story is quite different.😃

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--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
hey it was good.. the starting i mean khushi's nightmare i read it somewhere may be in some forwarded mails.. but i love it with arhi though :)

khushis nightmare?

u didn't read khushi's nightmare anywhere. f

u only read the part were A motorcycle crashed into a building last night because... on FACEBOOK...

i saw that part nd i dicided to make a short story about it.

btw THIS IS MY OWN STORY i did not copy it from somewhere.

you can see the big difference LOLZ.