AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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harshadislove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

sooo amazinggg
soo sweet
plz write more ...

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teenorchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

u knw i re read raina beeti jaye na in the morning after waking up.

nd i am so glad u wrote an other beautiful piece.

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Nurshad.kajen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Wow ana di you are just best such an awesome OS..out of the world...whatever you write become my favourite .. Thanks 4 it

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Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

It Was Beautifully Written

Loved It

Good Job

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

awww... Sahi kaha armaan ne uske liya toh ye punishment nahi hui...

Hahahaha i loved the last bit to core... Haye ...
Osome one yaar...

Keep writing more...love to read ur work...

And plz update ur ffs too... WIting...

N plz update the index of this thread

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blessed4

@blessed4

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Awesome OS. Please do write more

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819504

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Hey!!! Awsome...beautifull...yet emotional shot ji..!!!:)

Loved it to the core...thorougly enjoyed...!!every shot of your's unique one..except arsh..:P!!

Keep up the great work ji...and let us enjoy you writing always..!!

Thanks for updating..!! <3<3

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Ana,

This was a beauty. It was sad in the beginning but the story was really nice. It was realistic, people do become possessive & presumptuous if their loved one doesn't give them their full attention.

I knew Armaan was going to ask her to leave as she had promised. I felt so bad for Ridz, after doing so much for, after putting him before her always, he misunderstood her actions. Those weeks must have been like hell for both of them as they had to stay away from each other.

But the way Armaan said sorry to her & then how she made him lie on the sofa with her propped up on him was so cute & beautiful.

You really need to tell me your secret of inspirations.

Love..