AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

My comments on other 4 OSs are still pending😆 but couldn't stop myself from commenting about this one 😆

Oh WOW WOW 😳😃 I have become you fan ..dear 😛

It was SUPERB just excellent OMG I loved it the diary entries were so cute ans specially ..Ridhima Rahul bond you have written so adorably and then her fantasies about Armaan typical girly thing HEEHE..but the best apart was arm's diary entries ..just in 2 meeting he was so attracted towards her aww..while reading I was eagerly waiting for their confession moment because they way you have explained Armaan's feelings emotions I just couldn't wait and finally that proposal scene was so romantic <33..and last few lines as husband wife were sexy <33

I really want another OS from you very soon I regularly check this thread for something new from you :)

So come soon !!

PS : I Love the way you include songs in your OS's they make story mush more romantic ..So do include one next time :))

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neelima

@araja1234

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

it's really amazing. Loved it and thanks for the pm

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mehruali84

@mehruali84

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

amazing os just loved it thanks for pm

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Ana 🤗

This is your best OS by far <3 .. I love the title, the concept , the writing style, everything about it !
Awesome work <33 :D

AR, both , were so sweet .. love the way you ended it !

Do write more :D

xoxo

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

aww.. that was so cute..😳

superb part...😊

thanks for the pm ..:)

pls cont soon..

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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

awesome OS😊😊...loved it❤️

continue soon...:-)

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

OMG!!
Now from where should I get praises for you...awesome, fantastic would not be sufficient...and I have a very poor vocabulary...
It's breathtaking...I had that smile on my face all the while that I was reading it 😊

Beautiful...
Thanks sooo much for the pm
Love
Nandi

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Reading os#5 over an over again...one of the best os I have ever read :D

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

amazing OS!!!!!

please do write more.

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: sameera_12

OMG!!!! It was too cute yaar!!!

I just adored this One Shot of yours!!!😳

It was written so beautifully especially the proposal part!... It was a long one but still i read it in one go as i already knew when i started reading this that i won't be able to sleep without completing this...

Dreams and Fantasizes do come true sometimes for sure and i Loved How you entitled this One Shot "Firstmarks and Fantasies"

All the feelings and emotions were portrayed beautifully!! so as some cute and funny moments ... I Just Loved Everything about this OS!!!😍

You are truly an awesome writer and what i love about you the most is that you always come up with something new and special!!

Keep Up the Good Work! And Thanks for the pm..

Love,
Sameera
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hey sam...
thanku sooo mmuch dear for liking this OS
hehehe...ya it get pretty long indeed but glad to see the response😃😳
thanku for liking the title...it just clicked me n i choosed it
n i just hope i don't ever let down this trust you guys show in me...😕
luv ya
ana❤️

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