Dear Sarah,
Hope you do not mind me calling you Sarah which I picked up from the responses to your posts. After reading the full story of "I feel nothing" I feel a bond with you so I would rather be direct with the person behind the name.
I am a Canadian fan of the show. My real name is Maya and I am a matured woman with grown children and yet I cannot get enough if Arnav Sing Raizada and Khushi Singh Raizda. They symbolize the love that many of us would love to have in our lives but alas as you get older you are often just left with memories. I needed to tell you a bit about myself because my dear Sarah you have given me the joy of reading the story of IPKKND as I would have liked the show to have developed and also wanted you to understand that I recognize talent when I see, read it!
Indian television may not be ready for the over 18 versions, not sure I get that, and I have read every last bit of them and just simply relished that you were able to capture their love yet keep the story on par with the theme of the show! I placed comments on your blog under my IF signature of Mayad. Your redemption of Arnav was brilliant! You kept him in character yet you showed the change that love brought to his life! A life that was full of responsibilities but devoid of the love of a woman who could capture his mind, body and soul! I can never see him being brought to a simpering love sick puppy and I hope that it never happens in the show! You also opened up other storylines with Anjali's baby being alive, Khushi's past and whilst I have not read the sequel I can see that there are many avenues left open to carry the story in many different directions!
What I liked best is that you showed the trust coming back. The scene where they first made love showed such sensitivity that I cannot help but be very curious about you the writer and ask why you are not published! 50 Shades of Grey comes to mind! Arnav made LOVE to Khushi with his mind, body and soul! Wow it was so beautiful that I cannot help but mourn the fact that many who love this show will never get a chance to see Barun in this avatar! He would be absolutely fantastic as a sensitive lover. And I have no doubt that Sanaya would also be, shy, but brilliant as his on screen lover - Khushi.
Again I thank you for a most beautiful story and I look forward to reading all your stories. I will post, like once I have read the full future stories since I am far behind most viewers who already discovered your tremendous talent! If you ever decide to write a book please remember to include me in the invitation once published. I will stand in line to meet/greet you for an autographed copy!
Bravo and please take a bow! Keep writing not just on the forum but please consider taking it to a professional level!👏
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