OS----HOLI IN THE POOL!!! - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gosh Arnav! "Ya temme!" look ur pretty wife is there n all u wanna do is a conference call! Mein aoon Arnav!!? *chappal in hand!* 😡


*enters the famous bhang* dun dun dunnn!!! 😆


"phati sarreee tumhara pati kaha hai..hamra matlab hai arnav bitwa..?"- apart from the nick-name Mami seemed nice for a change with the 'pati' but then she had to go n ruin it didn't she!?


Ahaha I just realised, Arnav n Khushi are the super couple! One is 'Pati' the other is 'Phati' (too lame?? 🤣)


arnav "mai yahin hu khushi.."he applied red gulaal on her cheek.."happy holi wifey"- Wifey!?? Oh go away with your natak Arnav bitwa! Wifey my foot! No, no, Wifey Khushi's foot!!! 😆


They gave her one more glass wen they realised one glass made no difference to her..- Naughty!!!! 😉


she went inside..up to her room..- Khushi, alone, room, alone, Khushi!! Lemme read awn!! 😉😛


(they didnt realise that it was stilll daytime)- Lols, I though as much, I was like 'huh!!!?? Guys it's not sleepy time yet!???" 🥱


when they were near the pool khushi looked in his eyes and started crying.."ap itne ache hain..fir apne hamare sath aisa kyun kiya?"

arnav "tumne mera sath aisa kyun kiya?maine tumhe itna pyar kiya aur tumne mujhe dhokha diya..tumne .."- OMG!! OMG!!! Oh man!! Yaar you know how to just slip in the emotional twist in the story so naturally! I can imagine this, all fun n games, until this dialogue starts n then we have some, stringy violin sad music in the background! 😍



arnav "nahi..ruko..mujhe paas ake sunne do.."he came near and placed his ear on her heart to hear the heartbeat.."dhak dhak dhak dhak"- Ahem Khushi u kinda asked for it….just sayin' 😳😛


arnav inside the pool moving towards her "kyun mere pas ane se tumhe kya farak padhta hai khushi?"- Hayeee! The 'farak' is back! 👏


khushi suddenly.."apko pata hai hum pool me hain..hume thand lag rahi hai.."- Oh they were having such a romantic conversation n Khushi had to say this!! 😛


they hugged each other and started crying…- Could u make this anymore emotional??? I don't think so!!! 😭


he loved the smell of the towel coz it smelled of her..- Oi Sweetu!! ☺️


arnav held her hand "im sorry"

khushi "hum apse boht pyar karte hain"

they looked at each other and amiled and slowly fell asleep on the same bed holding hands..- Well finally!! Even if it did take like 6 glasses of bhang each to reach this moment, they did!!! Wohooo!!! Weheee!!



Yaar Chitran/Karvan (Karan Johar mixing!) You are so amazing at your dialogues! I know I always say this, but your meaningful speech makes your story! It's fabulous stuff and the number of likes n comments show it girly!! I know u don't write much, but when you do, well I think my above analysis sums it up right? 😆🤗

Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Wow, I can actually imagine the scene...well done👏
Please do continue...and thank you for the PM😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!! ⭐️
Loved the poolside part!! ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc one 😊ty 4 the pm 😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, love this OS. the poolside moment was splendid... its so cute, funny and romantic OS. great job done. thnx for the pm.
Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Awww that was adorable!! Loved it. Glad u used the poolside. thanks for the PM hun lovely OS x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWWW...this one is cute Chitz
loved how Arnav applied gulaal on Khushi's cheek...the water fight too..
damn how did i miss this...Lovely work :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just did part 1..
and i ended up saying-continue soon .. but am lucky to get late and you have already updated. LOL

okay,i loved the puppy face which Arnav made when Khushi showed him her big eyes when he messed up with her closet for his court . LOL.

and ha,he and she in bhang ka nasha!
I so wanTed it na.. ha ha..

and NK and Mami also here. ha ha..

Arnav possessive when Khushi's blouse ripped .. my mind went gutter,and am glad they both fell in the pool and enjoyed holi. LOL

their emotions and confessions.. loved it all.. <3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice😊 if u can in future os write the dialogues in English...after IPK i can understand Hindi little 😊 I struggled to read the dialogues in Hindi but I managed it & loved ths os 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
It was such an adorable post! 👏
Loved it! ❤️

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