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Posted: 12 years ago
M ji, I was a silent reader for over 6 months when finally I started speaking on the forum but not much. I used to read FFs silently without even pressing the 'Like' button. So when I started speaking, I remember PMing a few authors appreciating their works. Yesterday, I realised that Perspective was something that I had followed for over 10 chapters and that it is written by you and I never appreciated your work :'( Now you understand why the apology?

Sorry :'(


Abhi I will read it again soon and appreciate it like it should have been :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Very nice SS :D

I liked that you made Babuji recover,and reveal about Shyam.Thereby making Arnav realise his big MU.

I loved how Anjali emerged strong after life struck with bitter shyam truth.

Happy that Arhi are together and finally forgiving,moving on,giving chance to new life ahead.:)

Also,glad to have La play imp role at end.:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Meera (im going to assume it is your name)

I dont know what it is in your writing that just pulls my heartstrings!..I got so overwhelmed over every bit of the line you wrote in all your FFs, SSs and OSs (yes i have taken my time from the beginning of my summer vacation to read all your work)

This story was beautifully written...like majorly!..
It got me emotionally attached to itself thanks to you doll!..
The last part brought tears in my eyes!
The reuniting of true friends and finaly the reuniting of true lovers is always a bliss to read:)..
Glad the sleazeball got what he frigging deserved!
And also glad Anjali moved on and also admitted that she doesnt want to be the cause that her chotte's and Khushi's life was bothered!..
Over all...it was a beautifully, and a neatly written short story that brought tears in my eyes...so for a lack of a better term..I guess i was just an "emotional wreck"😆
Do accept my buddy request which i have already sent to you after reading "A Word's Worth " on your blog, so ill be able to recieve updates for your future work:)

Thanks...
~Simran
Edited by -HoneyBoo- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful story with an apt title!

I liked the way how everything fell into place during the course of the story; Shyam was punished, Shashi recovered, Anjali reverted back to her former self, Khuhi found some time for herself (which I think was much needed), Arnav realized his mistakes and made ammends. Even Lavanya's presence was perfect in this setting.

A happily ever after is what I absolutely adore😊

And with this, I complete thy index
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
the whole SS was just so much beautiful..!!
and you always write so beautifully...
i loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for this beutiful story.i luv it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Meera that was simply amazing...you showed me everything that i always wanted to see in the show.

Khushi's father - Shashi uncle finally got up and walked and spoke...u don't know how happy that made me. God that man was forever put in the wheelchair by the CVs. One man who knew about everything but was never given a chance to speak.

An anjali who did not whine or cry yes she had her heartbreaking moment well which women would not be heartbroken after coming to know that the husband whom she worshiped was nothing but a cheating scum. But she arose from the ashes and turned a new life and decided to be strong for her family and child.

And finally an arnav who feels sorry regrets what he does and makes amends for all the mistakes that he ever ever did.

I cant even tell you how happy i was reading this SS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved perspective..

the most catching dialogue that i found was "I am not trying to say anything. There was a time I believed that someday I will be in a position to talk to you. But I never do learn do I? Stupid, nave me! I thought in time you will see that I am not the person you have pictured in your head. I thought in time he will see the error of his ways, for his child if not for anything else. But I was wrong. His vileness and your prejudice are both part of who you both are. And I am done being caught in the cross-fire"

the trap in which we found khushi in IPK was addressed here in these lines and i liked it.

the entire ss was nice arnav and khushi being caught in such a precarious situation and then coming out of it while loving each other but always running away when it comes to admit their feeling for each other... it was beautifully written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is one of the best short story I have read on this forum. You have showed which I really wanted to see in the serial.
I have read few of your OS and this SS; you write amazingly well. Thanks for such a beautiful story.
Posted: 12 years ago
awww, this was so so so sweet! Loved it! Thanks for writing this amazing piece of work!! I am falling in love with your writings! You have an amazing talent! Keep it up!

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