SS:Arnav faces the demons of the reality Pt4 updtd

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bablio09

@bablio09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Brilliant piece HP. Will wait for the weekend.

You really put your thoughts and imagination into words very well.

Loved it

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Nice continuation!!
Why has he asked him to take her for shopping...maybe so that she can buy clothes for herself????
But nice update!!
I liked it!!

Edied: Forgot to say congratulation on being an IF dazzler and I al glad u have converted the OS to SS!!!😃

Edited by ss374 - 13 years ago

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: ss374
Nice continuation!!
Why has he asked him to take her for shopping...maybe so that she can buy clothes for herself????
But nice update!!
I liked it!!

Edied: Forgot to say congratulation on being an IF dazzler and I al glad u have converted the OS to SS!!!😃

thnxxx😊😊

if only ASR thought so straight forward like us...that he himself cn take her shopping 😉😉if she cn do nakhras...he also has too much attitude isn't it ?????

yipee Dazzler...hahahha..

and OS to SS...all coz of ur inspiration darlinggg 🤗

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sanaroxx
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Wow Di, its just amazing ⭐️!!! I seriosly wish this to happen in real😊 !! Why dont you take be the CVs and include these in them ??? I could picturize them 👏

The feelings of Arnav and Khushi explained really well and the next day he says - yeah it was bcoz of Mami he had to make her sleep on the bed ! and the dialogue - "Farak Padtha Hain Damnit .. YOU ARE MY WIFE "

Please Do continue and PM me... in the next weekend... as this is the only way to survive in the weekends you know😉

Brilliant Work ⭐️🤗

thnxx sweety...CVs dont hv time on slow and steady nw darlingg...looks like they are on a faster race...direct consummation of marriage 😆😆

thnx for the sweet words dear...really brings a big smile 😃 will surely PM once I update !!

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: himabindu05
For me it is not completed😆U have to continue...U cannot stop at this point!! It is so much real to me than the track they are showing...
The way U described his molten Brown eyes...WOW...it really made my heart skip beats...which doesnt happen that regularly BTW!!😆U really are such a romantic..arent U??UR hubby is a lucky Guy..Priya...Not many women can think so beautifully even in a messy situation!! and u are fantastic when there is chaos all around U...Good way of beating stress!!😆

I wish the Cvs really try to apply this kind of Logic in their story...The pain is there but he should be shown to bare his heart open to her...for her to heal his wounds...and they better make it the most beautiful scene..Or may be it would be still better if we could get an OS from U!!😃please think it over!!😊

Thanx Bindu...just did a next part...hope u like it...will surely love to hear ur input...coz u very well know hw much it matters..same like the assurance of seeing the smiley on the Crooner 😉

am romantic at heart...hubby hw lucky cnt say...coz well romance in real life is in some turmoil...so helping Khushi and ASR at the moment 😆😆

I just want the CVs to concentrate on ASR and Khuhsi...doesnt matter if they dont confess and know the truths at the moment...lots of other angles to exploit...these both have lots of insecurities and hidden fears which only they cn help each other from...and the CVs are so sensible...they though do it...but they do it all of a sudden...rather than dragging other plots for weeks...they can drag and take time to unreveal their turmoils and pain...will be so interesting to see how they heal each other...understand the fears...and when the truth comes out...the reactions !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: honeypriya
thnxxx😊😊

if only ASR thought so straight forward like us...that he himself cn take her shopping 😉😉if she cn do nakhras...he also has too much attitude isn't it ?????

yipee Dazzler...hahahha..

and OS to SS...all coz of ur inspiration darlinggg 🤗

Glad I could inspire someone!!!😊
I so wish he would also go with them...at least we can see some romance...but ASR will be ASR!!😆

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: annab
Feel so sad 4 khushi. felt a lump in my throat while rdg this. ur. a very talented writer. pls continue Writing.lookin 4ward to ur nxt update. well done 👏

thanxx a lot dear 😊

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: honeypriya
thnxx sweety...CVs dont hv time on slow and steady nw darlingg...looks like they are on a faster race...direct consummation of marriage 😆😆

thnx for the sweet words dear...really brings a big smile 😃 will surely PM once I update !!

😆😆 So true Di ...

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Koeli

@Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Honey as always you are absolutely fantastic...I love every bit of your OS. it is so real and can be felt by heart instantly...i have goose bumps in each and every romantic endevour. Very touching yet romantic piece of work. do write more and more as our weekends are always dedicated for your OS. god bless you.