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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: HopelessCase

NOOO!!! Don't!! PLEASE!! For Barun's sake!! Rofl

At least 2 more chapters!!

serious Hopeless case 😉😉 and i am worse...Barun ke naam pe emotional blackmail 😆😆

off to sleep nw...will do another part tomorrow from office...thats one place where my gutter mind starts overworking 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Yayyy!! Thankyouuu!! :D

I love it, mention Barun's name, and nobody can refuse! ;)

Look what effect he has on us... ;)

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natashaa46

@natashaa46

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

👏awesome OS !!

i've alwz have loved ur writing 👏 ...n this too is added to the list

the show shud have a similar scene coz (n i think it will...) ...coz she has to let him know tht she's a human being wid some basic needs **(@ this sentence of u ...it was very dificult ot control my Arhilicious thoughts 😉 ) ...& also he must be made aware tht now tht her family has disowned her ...wht she'll do or survive after those six months tht he mentioned 😕

i also loved the ending ...the emotions of both were so aptly put into words ...n just like the CVs u too stopped ryt at the turning point of the story line 😆 ...& wht u alwz say tht u wanted PRECAPS ...here u too didnt give one 😆 (telling wht shud happen next 😕) ...but instead u just wrote "lets leave to CVs to continue"

thnx for the PM 😊

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

OMG...why did you close??? please continue...I was looking forward to the next part

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: shwetachauhan
hey!!! i was busy writing my descriptive comments while you came up with the third one too!!!! some roll you are on!!!! 😃 and what a roll!!! loved it!!!

what a heart tugging conversation!!! arnav should start believing her innocence now!!! she cant fake it all na!!! when will this boy start thinking with a cool mind!! isnt he wondering why she doesnt go to shyamu to share the pain that he is making her go through!!! 😕 something should trigger these thoughts now!!!
i have an idea what could actually trigger it!! 😳 khushi should use her charms and the beauty (that he doesnt want anything to disturb) to make him lose his senses completely!! this girl is too naive i tell you!! 😡 she doesnt even know the effects she has on him!!! high time she started seducing him!! and make it easier (or tougher???😲) for all of us!!!

anyways.. i am going debu..will be back soon!! something important bothering me!! i just have to leave on a search right now for that shyamu with my baseball bat!!! 😡 gonna beat him black and blue!!! interrupted such a beautiful scene!!! 😡 😡 i had started dreaming already of what not!!! kya pyar hai!! how adorable that he tucks the strand of hair behind her ears!! ahhh.. 😍

some proof reading i do.. nahi?? you are making me famous too dear gutter sister!!! going by the likes on the previous comment, we are all kumbh ke mele ke bichhde hue gutter sisters nahi?? 😆

shwets ur last line...seriously LMAO 🤣🤣🤣🤣 even I was thinking the same...gutter sisters ke gutter likers...🤣🤣 so see he presses hard, tucks the hair behind...lips inches apart...ohhh...my phone is ringing...will be back 🤣🤣🤣🤣 this Aman I tell you 😉😉😉

that Shyam is the person we need this week darling if we have to get that Arnie boy do some running around and f***ing around any time soon 🤣🤣🤣

Khushi is no naive...she doesnt know she just hv to stand inches apart and breathe heavily...and her man will be all over...6 months and jijaji all forgotten in matter of seconds...😉😉

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RASMI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Priya🤗,i was busy with some very important work today.so i couldnt comment on ur OS...Read all the 3 parts...Why are u hell bent on torturing me,ladyyy😡?how could u stop it at such a point????U are worser than LM😡
First to updates was amazing.i alwz wondered hw khushi,being in her selfrespective being, will be able to meet her needs in RM.Loved the way u penned our khushi.And haa,a major blow to hottie...Loved her answer on his comment to ask anjali or payal for her necessities... That would be main thing that tormented him later...the great ASR,who rules his empire cant take care of his wife's needs...and she has to take care of it herself...Loved the way u pointed arnav's turmoil...2nd update was superb..true to the title👏👏👏 'fighting his inner demons'...

Arnav's confusion and khushi's desperation-loved third update...i could practically imagine the whole scene...that last scene was superb..And again that damn phone😡😡...Damn Aman😆...u proved that u r LM's behen😡😡😡...CUT IT😆😆😆...

I dnt knw what has gotten in to me today😡.i'm being really boring na...I'm missing mami's bhoot badly😆😆😆...Actually...the busy schedule has drained me badly...Somebody gave me some jalebi's😲...

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: UltimateBarun
oye! u cannot do that!!! u hav to continue,,,,complete it in youre own style,, i was liking it co u using more brains than CV's!!

will do it tomorrow then...i was like they hv moved it to FF section nw...who'll bother to read then...if its in the IPK Forum,ppl do read atleast 😆😆

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Dew_drops
Priya🤗,i was busy with some very important work today.so i couldnt comment on ur OS...Read all the 3 parts...Why are u hell bent on torturing me,ladyyy😡?how could u stop it at such a point????U are worser than LM😡
First to updates was amazing.i alwz wondered hw khushi,being in her selfrespective being, will be able to meet her needs in RM.Loved the way u penned our khushi.And haa,a major blow to hottie...Loved her answer on his comment to ask anjali or payal for her necessities... That would be main thing that tormented him later...the great ASR,who rules his empire cant take care of his wife's needs...and she has to take care of it herself...Loved the way u pointed arnav's turmoil...2nd update was superb..true to the title👏👏👏 'fighting his inner demons'...

Arnav's confusion and khushi's desperation-loved third update...i could practically imagine the whole scene...that last scene was superb..And again that damn phone😡😡...Damn Aman😆...u proved that u r LM's behen😡😡😡...CUT IT😆😆😆...

I dnt knw what has gotten in to me today😡.i'm being really boring na...I'm missing mami's bhoot badly😆😆😆...Actually...the busy schedule has drained me badly...Somebody gave me some jalebi's😲...

hello hi bye bye...off to sleep...will reply on the comment tomorrow...cut it 😆😆😆

abhi is sweet things se kaam gettiya lo 😉😉

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: honeypriya
will do it tomorrow then...i was like they hv moved it to FF section nw...who'll bother to read then...if its in the IPK Forum,ppl do read atleast 😆😆

arre you continue na!!!!

tu jahan jahan chalega.. hamara saaya saath hoga!!! 😳
iss section ya uss section!!! 😆

we seriously need updates here!!! cant wait to see what happens next!!