SS:Arnav faces the demons of the reality Pt4 updtd

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Keep continuing! 😊

This was totally incredible.

Unspoken words still lie between 'em! *sigh*. That is sooo true!

But, apart from that, loved this OS to bits.. ~Thanks a lot for the pm!~ :) :)

<Keep Updating> 😉

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

This is getting better.and better...Dont stop here please...

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amisuv

@amisuv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Thanks for the PM 😊

A really gud & interesting take on Khushi wanting to be independent & Arnav still restless & his insecurities taking over.

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: amisuv
Thanks for the PM 😊

A really gud & interesting take on Khushi wanting to be independent & Arnav still restless & his insecurities taking over.

thnxxx a lot Suvi 😊😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: subiscs
Priyyaaa!!!! Loved it!!! CV's pls take a look at this!!!! something like this is highly appreciated 😊

am proud of u sweetz!!! and continue 😃

Thanxxx a lot...but think will end it here...rest let CVs do 😉

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UltimateBarun

@UltimateBarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

oye! u cannot do that!!! u hav to continue,,,,complete it in youre own style,, i was liking it co u using more brains than CV's!!

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

It was very well written! 👏 But U should have continued it!

Nice to read that inspite of all the misunderstandings Arnav is still protective of Khushi and doesn't want her to leave home in the evenings.

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280200

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: honeypriya
Thanxxx a lot...but think will end it here...rest let CVs do 😉

NOOO!!! Don't!! PLEASE!! For Barun's sake!! Rofl

At least 2 more chapters!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

great os i wounder how cvs will continue the track

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

hey!!! i was busy writing my descriptive comments while you came up with the third one too!!!! some roll you are on!!!! 😃 and what a roll!!! loved it!!!

what a heart tugging conversation!!! arnav should start believing her innocence now!!! she cant fake it all na!!! when will this boy start thinking with a cool mind!! isnt he wondering why she doesnt go to shyamu to share the pain that he is making her go through!!! 😕 something should trigger these thoughts now!!!
i have an idea what could actually trigger it!! 😳 khushi should use her charms and the beauty (that he doesnt want anything to disturb) to make him lose his senses completely!! this girl is too naive i tell you!! 😡 she doesnt even know the effects she has on him!!! high time she started seducing him!! and make it easier (or tougher???😲) for all of us!!!

anyways.. i am going debu..will be back soon!! something important bothering me!! i just have to leave on a search right now for that shyamu with my baseball bat!!! 😡 gonna beat him black and blue!!! interrupted such a beautiful scene!!! 😡 😡 i had started dreaming already of what not!!! kya pyar hai!! how adorable that he tucks the strand of hair behind her ears!! ahhh.. 😍

some proof reading i do.. nahi?? you are making me famous too dear gutter sister!!! going by the likes on the previous comment, we are all kumbh ke mele ke bichhde hue gutter sisters nahi?? 😆