FF- Love You Eternally - chapter 25 & 26 the final chapter

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Anaya S.S

@nabnab

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Hey I haven't commented in a while I think cos I've been mainly Reading on iPhone!!

So I'd like to say I'm loving how you're building the story and the intensity! The last update is full of such suspense I'm excited:)

thanks for the pm:)

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

woww this was good ... awesome ... do continue soon ... can't wait to read the next chapter ...

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dumas

@dumas

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

arnav is sure its her loved it hope he finds the truth soon snake broke deepak legs and will be coming instead and the spirit has found its host loved the up date well written loved it

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

wow lovely i was longing for the update marsha 😃

i love this ff so much cant wait for the next chap

i can guess the poor lad was knocked down by shyam right???? in the black attire

beautiful and cute emotions between payal and akash so sweet

arnav and khushi share a gr8 bonding their intro was superb and fantastic that was living a fantasy/dreamy really i love the chemistry of the siblings just so awesome

that evil shyam from past is really swaying and hooting in the east corridor and buried in the impure vessel

i am really terribly scared to read the next update plzz pretty soon

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Wow, just read the last 2 chapters!!!!! Loved how Arnav was so caring with Khushi, that she was not haunted by his nightmares!!!!! Wonder how Khushi will feel when she finds out what happened during the night and how Arnav carried her back to her room!!!!! Oh no evil Shyam will now come to the haveli and become one with the evil spirit!!!!! Getting so exciting now!!!

Thanks for PM

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prachi

@Prachi..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

that was amazing

i guess it was shyam who attacked deepak

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Ghosts?... this whole Haveli has a mysterious feel to it...

Shyam attacked Deepak right... pathetic b***ard...

nice :DDD

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

This fic is interesting. I love the reincarnation theme with the backdrop of an ancient haveli and two seperated lovers.
As well as Shyam, who cant seem to leave Khushi alone.

HE seems to be as bad in this life as he was in the last. But I think in this life Arnav can overcome him. HE has more resources and he he has Aakash

Yuks

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Sidra

@siddy9171

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Wow great update! Loved it! Darn that Shyam! I bet it was him who hurt that man 😡 He needs to stay away from Khushi. I loved the way you described the darkness in the haveli. Gave me the chills. Thanks for the pm! And please update soon! 😃