its really good, i like that khushi left, even though its heartbreaking for arnav but its good for khushi and aranv...bcz if she stayed aranv would never learn what it is to repent, what it is to earn someones forgiveness, what it is to loose...for you only learn and appreciate the luck, the happiness and the pleasure of winning when you have lost, so i too hope they will reconcile, but a separattion is required for arnav to learn that jst bcz he is ASR does not mean he can get anything, especially not KKG, money power aura does not get you everything there is something called self respect, dignity, pride which is bigger than all that, and when you wound someones respect, trust, a sorry cannot bring it back, but it is the first step to earn it back...n he needs to learn all that...he needs to understand that she didnt leave him because she does not love him, for she does, she left him because he hurt her, he broke her trust and broke her heart and only time and space can heal it in order for her to find her way back to him...plus all that he was doing now forcing his love on her only drove her away for she doesn't want his love, she knows he loves her, but she wants his respect, his trust which he does give her but does not show her, n that is what she will see now when he finally lets her go...
moreover, if khushi did not, leave she would forever be left wondering if she made the right decision for herself, if she was fair to herself, yes one should take care of others and keep their happiness in mind but there comes a time in ones life where one has to think about themselves n be fair to themselves and put their happiness before others, n it is that time which ahs arrived in her life now, she needs the separation to find herself and to find out just how much she loves arnav, and she cannot do that by living with him n letting him know she has forgiven him (for she has, but he cannot know that, until she herself is not sure about it herself) living with him in the same house will keep on reminding her of all the bad, but being away from him will remind her of all the good, in him n his love, which will then eventually make her realise that after all is said and done she cannot live without him for he is the most important person in her life which is what will than urge her to make her way back to him and then will his penance end and he will get his khushi, and they will unite as equals, where he will give her love, respect and honour, and she will all that back, for right now they can give each other only love but the separation will allow them to respect and honour the other too o and trust!!!
lol sorry i kinda hijacked your story n gave it an ending that i think will happen so sorry for that but ur amazing script infused all these emotions in me that made me write all this, as this is what i thought u wer trying to show, how its important for them to separate in order to reconcile, nyway am loving your story, n cant wait to see how you go about it, and i think no matter how you end it happy or sad i think we all will be able to see (although i can only speak for myslef but ithink others will agree) y u gave it that ending because you write in such away that khushi and arnavs emotions come across and so one realises why they take the actions they take!!
nyway keep updating whenever you get the chance its really good!!! :)
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