You are the Music in Me(AR) Thread#2 Link - PG150 - Page 40

sorry for late comment

sorry fr nt commenting abi tak. Par i will sooon

Originally posted by: teenorchid

sorry fr nt commenting abi tak. Par i will sooon

its ok Farwa :)
Will be waiting for ur comment

Where are others with their comments?
:(

Must have lost their ways..hahaha
jst kidding
dw they will hop out of no where soon!;)
cont. soon :D

sorry fr being late jani... The new semester started so ws adjusting in that. This ws certainly the longest nd most awaited part. I dunno by my comment whether i'd b able to do justice wd it or nt. The truth finally revealed. Nd padma ws the reason how cud she yarr. Ths is nt fair. I so feel bad fr em to b seperatd fr 5 long yrs. Ufff. But i am happie they re together again. Their kissesss were too passionate..making up fr lost time. Now they d stay togetherrr always...very well done yar. I cant get over the part. Its just awesomeee

woww the upddate was soo soo good :) U write soo well Its always a treat to read ur FF :)) Finally the truth is out Glad AR are back together

Hey

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

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I was quite speechless after reading this musical confession Madura.
I hope now you would have guessed the reason for giving my reviews soo late.
I wished to write in peace about what I felt about this part...
Finally I've got the time...

Coming to the update,it was purely magical from beginning till end..
Riddhima's surprise to Atul was wonderful..
He was so happy seeing his baby sister.
I liked Abhi's small interaction with the siblings in between as well..
I loved the way Ridz woke Atul up completely astonishing him and the re-union of bro and sis was awesome..
The scenes that followed were also very nice.Ridz cooking lunch for her bro and his roommate was very good..

I still can't believe that she travelled from Mumbai to Bangalore to visit her brother.I guess love does strange things to people.Armaan is somewhere the reason behind this confidence in her.
I hate her parents.They are really mean to her.
I love the overprotective brother of Ridz a lot.He is so caring towards her...
I'm sooo glad that Ridz finally moved out of that hell.
Atul is a great brother to support her sister in everything just like way she encouraged him to go to Bangalore.
It was quite evntful to read Atul accompanying Ridz back to Mumbai and showing his cold shoulders to parents that was followed by both the siblings leaving the house after Ridz fetched her belongings..
Also,I liked the way Ridz missed Armaan terribly.Both of them had a very harsh converstaion and the reason was plain and simple that they were really concerned for each other and so much in love with each other...Armaan shouted at her.That was least expected from his side but he immediately regretted it.That was so much like Armaan's nature..

It was a complete unexpected surprise to see Atul taking Ridz to her paternal house.No house/hostel could have been better than this...I loved Atul so much for this thoughtfullness.
Armaan was sooo much

Ridz gave Armaan a good piece of mind by not reieveing his calls.It was a treat to read how disappointed Armaan was after not finding her in the music classes and BB court.
Thank God she finally came to the academy and answered his numerous worried questions.
Armaan's affection towards Riddhima is really amazing.I've always loved the way he is sooo concerned for her and tries to analyze her her every expression,gesture and moves..
I was in awe by the way they made upto each other..I was enchanted with Armaan's spells when he apologized to Ridz.Riddhima is so understanding,,I have always loved her for this serene nature...She has forgiven him even before meeting him.Wow!
The extraordinary confession without usning the three special words was simply out of this world.I loved this romantic and naughty side of Armaan as well when he asked Ridz that she understood what he meant...
The musical confession that conveyed their feelings to each other was marvellous.I already love the two songs and when you used them in this ff ,these songs became even more appealing to me than before.
Ridz confesssed her love to her parents.That was so emotional yet wonderful...
Armaan and Ridz's terrace scene and Armaan's surprise to her by visiting at her long lost home was beautiful.
Finally Armaan put his feelings into words and every word that he said was simply breathtaking...
AR's close sweet moments were the best part of this confession.
The shy Riddhima and an equally romantic Armaan made this moment outstanding.Ridz confessed her feelings to Armaan as well and that too in words.That was so enthralling..
I could visualize each and every scene of this part in my mind.
The heart to heart confession was the best part of this whole ff.
This part is going to be my favourite one.
This may be your first ff Madura but you are already a star jana in my eyes.
You are one of the best writers on IF and this musical ff is one of my favourite ones.
Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful piece of your work...
Take care!
Love you!
A warm hug from my side for this lovely confession part...
Muah!!
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Asma

You made me speechless Asma
Girl, how do u write such a long comment? u r tooo good in it.
I am trying & learning to give long & descriptive comments

Atul & riddhima's bond is something Very Special dear. They have been through everything from their childhood together.
I am glad u loved their bond & scenes 😊

Riddhima is a girl who is scared to face the world because of what she went through in her childhood...it really a takes a lot of effort from her side to go from one city to another all alone. And u r right, armaan somewhere is the reason behind her confidence...I guess love does strange things to people & makes people do things which they haven't done before
Yes, she is out that of that hell. She was there only because of atul

Ridz's so called parents were always like that to her
Yep, atul is overprotective abt her & she is abt him. They both r very caring & supporting to each other.
Atul took her to her home..it is her real home..as u said, no other place could have been better than this

Armaan & ridz r soo in love with each other & their love & care for the other came out in the form of harsh words in their convo
Ridz is very understanding & i am glad u love this serene nature of her. Her anger for him don't last for a long time..she always melts...after all he is the charmer..right? ☺️
The thing is, they both r very understanding, but their anger is something they can't avoid, that too because they love & care for the other a lot
I love the romantic & naughty side of armaan too..typical armaan..hai na?

I am really happy u loved their confession with & without the three special words
And the songs, i decided to use them in their confession when I started to write the fic. It was in my mind from then.

Armaan's confession words were something i wrote in that moment as i wrote the part. I didn't plan what he is going to say till i started to write it. I am happy u liked it.

About ridz confessing her love in words, come on yaar...how she could control herself & not confess her love in words when she sees the ocean of love in his eyes & after his wholehearted confession..hai na? 😉

I am Sooo Happy u liked the part & AR's Musical Confession So Much & it's ur Fav Part

Trust me, many writers here in IF are my inspirations to write. And of course, U r one of them dear. U r one my favourite writers here in IF. I am happy u love my work & to know, u think I am one of the best here is an honour for me.
I personally think, I have a Very Long Way to go and Improve as a Writer. I just started my journey as one. Writing definitely has become my passion along with music.

I must thank Niki for encouraging me to post my fic here. I seriously don't know if I would have ever posted it here if it wasn't for her encouragement and support. I owe a lot to her.

Thanks a Lottt & Warm Hugs to u too for the Wonderful, Heart-warming & Encouraging Comment Asma 🤗 🤗

Love u too

Take care dear 🤗

P.S - I dont know if i did justice to ur long comment with my reply. I tried 😳

Lots of Love

Madura

Originally posted by: Jinal3patel

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hi!

wow!tht ws a long update!!!

i LOVED IT!

omg..omg..omg..

Their love is way more powerful than any other thing in this world. Anger or anything else can't stand in front of their love. It was their love which gave them the strength to survive the worst phase of their life. She couldn't help but surrender herself to him when he confessed he loves her and his blue eyes showing the ocean of love for her, mirroring his heart to her. His words echoed in her heart. They smiled with happy tears as they kissed. She was melting in his arms. He was more than a lover for her, he is her everything. He means the world to her. He is her life. Their soul belongs to each other. He is the reason for her existence and she is the reason for his. Even though they weren't with each other physically, they lived in each other's heart. Their music and ever lasting memories were with them. Every minute and every second of their lives, they loved each other and will always do.

I got goosebumps while reading this paragraph!

This shows depth of their love! They love each other so much na? *sigh*

i m actually really speechless right now?

u always do tht to me..by every chapter..u always make me speechless...

i can't even find words to praise u...where were you all this long?

where were u hiding this mind-blowing talent of yours huh?

OMG!Padma????!!!she did this?she lied??!!😲😲😲

how can she stoop down so low to ruin someone's life like this?/

i mean wht did riddhima do to her?

she destroyed 2 lives..by doing tht!bt y would she do this????!!!!

i m so pissed off at her!

aisa toh koi apne dushman ke saath bhi na kare!😭

bt all is well tht ends well..well this is jst the beginning..bt u knw😉😆

Finally they are together...

This is what they needed. Finally they are together after five long years. They had learned their lesson and will not let anyone or anything separate them again.

YES!! Finally they are together after those lifelong , heartwrenching painful five years!

I m so happy tht they undestand each other like in the PAST..

i loved how they would talk their heart out to each other...e.g. if one ws angry the other would stay calm and then talk to each other after the anger has passed..

the relationship Armaan and Riddhima share is THE PERFECT!

i think it's everyone's dream to have a relationship like tht right?

excluding padma's role...bt like riddhima said, god ws testing their love n they passed!

n lovestory isn't complete without any complications i guess...

And ofcourse now tht they have learnt their lesson no one would be able to sepaerate them!

omg!storm comming up?plz dnt let Armaan or Riddhima get in danger...they jst got together!(i m a thriller movie fan..so tht's where my imagination goes =P)

Armaan is such a professional na?!

he treats his employees as his collegues not his employees!i so love him!bt ofocurse he is riddhima's so i ll back off!😆

I seriously can't put in words how much i loved this part!

bt i jst want u knw tht i loved it alot!

Di, if u keep writing like this then i ll pester u everyday for an update huh?ok..if i negotiate then every two days yeah?🤣

Thnk u for including my fav songs,yet again!!

how do u knw my favourite songs!I love them!!!

n they did match the situation!

Thank u for writing this ff!<3

this is one of the best ffs on IF!

phew!this is the longest comment i hv ever written !i hope u dnt fall asleep reading it :D😆

Love ya <3 🤗

Jinal