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@anniemathiaskr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

we will be waiting for ur update

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#852

hey deeta when will u update???

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alex

@alex714

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Deetha aur kitna wait karna hai?jaldi update karona plz...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#854

hey guys!!!!!!!!!! missing me???? i mean meri ff???? and haa i know im late...par kya karoon yaar kaam bohut tha...abhi bhi bahar se aayi ...i mean 15 mins pehle...so i think u all waiting 4r the update...actually mai do short updates denewali thi...par late hogaya so do parts mai aaj hi de deti hun...kk??? chalo ab update padhlo...

third step of togetherness...

**** jhoome saari duniya hamari khushi mai****

( guys dnt be pissed of as hamesha mrng call se hi strt hota hai...par i like it...jhelo mujhe😆)

it was 5:30 in the morning when kriya's mobile rang...she irritatedly lifted the call...

r: godmorning sweetheart...

k: rey ...she checked the tym...aww rey abhi 5:30 baje hai...itni jaldi aapne mujhe uthadi...aur aap itni jaldi kyu uth gaye ...neendh nahi aa rahi hai kya???

r: nahi...

k: kyun kya hua??? tabyat theek hai na???

r: haan baba mai ek dam theek hun...bas teri yaad aayi ...baat karne ka man kiya so call kiya ...maine tumhe disturb kiya kya..itni subah call karke????

k: nai nai rey...waise acha hua aapne call ki mujhe jaldi uthna hai sweetu ne bataya ki bohut saare rasme poori karni hai...

r: acha ab mujhse jhoot ...bahane???

k: nai rey wo...

r: wo kya??? kriya tum agar mujhe bura naa lage isliye jhoot bolegi toh mai batadun...tum mujhe jhoot bol rahi ho .ye baat mujhe jyaada bura lagega...

k: hmm...theek hai rey i wont ...

r: thats my gud baatcutter...

k: toh batayiye kya baat karni hai???

r: wo wo...

k: rey dnt tell me ki aapne aise hi call kardi...

r: kriya wo...

k: rey aap bhi na itni subah subah...(she was cut in the middle)

r: miss u baatcutter...

she smiled...luv u rey...

he gave a kiss...theek hai ab sojao aur jaldi aana im waiting...

he cut the call...

k: im also waiting rey...

she smiled got up and then her eyes fell on her mehandi...it was very dark...and her hands looked damn beautiful...

k: mujhe pata tha rey aap mujhse bohut pyaar karte ho aur ye mehandi bohut gehra hoga...

...: aha...really????

she turned back in an alarm...all girls were standing there...

k: tum..tum sab log yaha???? mere matlab itni jaldi???? subah subah...???

sh: haa...kyunki hum ladki wale hai...dulhan nahi...hume bohut kaam hota hai...hum toh bas tere mehandi ki rang dekhne aaye the ...par tum toh kisi aur ki khayalon mai...

she blushed slightly...

k: ab phir se nahi plzz...

sh: chalo chodo...ab chalo fresh hojao...u know 7:00 se gaana shuru hojayega,...

k: par sangeet toh...

sh: haan par ye sharon raiprakash ki wish hai ...

all: haan...

k: theek hai chalo mai bas 15 mins mai aati hun...

all.: kk...all went down and kriya followed them after 15 mins...they had their breakfast and strtd dancing ,chatting,cracking jokes...a very healthy tym...and the same was in case of rey coz its a combined plan of swaron that sangeet will go on the full day...

and finally tym of wait is decreasing...sangeet strts at 6:00...its 4:00...

sh: (creating a havoc in the house...stood in the centre of hall and strtd shouting...soon all surrounded her...aakhir diva ka effect aisa hai toh hum kya karen???

sh: kriya!!!!!!!!!!! kriya!!!!!!!!!!

k: reached there...kya hua sharon kyun itni hyper ho??

sh: kriya sangeet 6:00 ko hai aur ab 4:00 baj gaye...hum kab rey ke ghar jayenge aur kab tumhari make up????

(as 4r haldi rey's side will be shifting to sharon's guesthouse...sangeet was conductd in rey's house...)

k: nai nai mai yahi pe tayyar hojaungi aur seedha tym pe jaate hai...

sh: par kyun???

k: sharom mujhe darr lagta hai...

sh: arrey engagement aur mehandi hogayi phir bhi logon ke beech jaane mai darr??

k: (murmuring) darr log se nai rey se...engagement ke din jo hua wo phir se...nai...aur waise bhi in do dinon me rey ne bohut kuch karli pata nai ab kya karenge???

sh: kya???

k: kuch nai...plzz na sweetu...plzzz...

sh: chalo dont make that face...u look damn convincing and cute...

kriya grinned all went to her make up and ofcourse their's...

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its 5:45

rey was already seated on the cushon on the floor specially arranged 4r them...he was interwining his fingers...

sw: arrey bhai itna tension mat le ...kahi teri ungli na thoot jaye...

all boys laughed ...they shut up when rey glared at them...

sw: chalo yaar itna tension mat le sharon told me wo exact 5:55 ko yaha aajayenge...kk??

vi: haan yaar ab has bhi de...

all: haan yaar...

rey gave a smile...all sat beside him and strtd talking but all were soon made to rush to door leaving rey behind to recieve our gorgeous dulhan...all boys invited her and blocked her that rey could nt see her,...but as she came near to the cushion they gave up...rey looked at her,...she was blushing ...he loowered his look...damn !!!!! i dnt expect this...how could i be away when she was in such a hot and sexy outfit...kriya...tum bhi na...ab kaise rahunga saara tym bina kuch kare...sab ke saamne toh kuch kar bhi nai sakta...

next part in next post... :)

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

kriya:

last pic...in orange and black...

http://latestsaree.blogspot.in/2011/08/bollywood-sarees-party-wear-sarees.html

rey:

http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQFXSllprcuqLoVe7-aob7wqtvLp863kqeqpF8SsGpiOlOoe3kU

rey was staring at her shocked...gosh!!!!!!! saree...kya yeh

meri khoon ki tayyari kar rahi hai??? sangeet ki ye haal hai toh pata nai shaadi mai meri kya haal hoga??? rey beta dyaan se tere shaadi ka din kahi teri aakhri din na hojaye...

kriya was really very uncomfortable in it...its the first tym in her lyf she wore a saree...its difficult 4r her to carry...she was somehow managing...she could sense rey's gaze...so she didnt lift her head and was blushing ...as they were reaching the cushion sharon whispered in her ear...

sh: dekho kaise dekh raha hai...bechara margaya shayad...*phew* bechara...she chuckled...

kriya glared at her walking and turned but she tripped on her saree and fell straight into reys arms...he didnt expect as he was in his own dream land...so they both fell back and coz of the force they twisted slightly ...they finally ended with reys legs under her's and his upper part twirled and his waist touching her side of waist and his chest touching hers...as soon as they ended he got lost in her...she closed eyes tight but slowy opened and got lost in his eyes ...both continued their LLHH till all strtd coughing...

all: uhh...uhh...uhh...

they came back to senses and sat up...they were very embrassed and in a hurry while she was trying to stand rey pulled his legs...thus she ended on him...now she was fully on top of him...his hands wrapped around her and she cluthed his shewani...and her face touching his chest...they soon came back to senses as the gang again disturbed them...she strtd getting up but...crap her earing was struck in his sherwani...now its gonna be a tuf tym 4r them facing the teasing session...rey quickly took it and told her to get up ith ishara...she tried but was abt to slip again but he held her waist and pushed her up...shit!!!! ek toh iss saree se itni mushil hoti hai...aur inke upar gir gayi aur upar se ye mere kamar ko aise crush kar rahe hai...mai kaise theek se khade hojaun...he moved her up slowly and he raised and caught her by waist with his ri8 hand wrpped around it nd stood up slowly...all were waiting when they get straight and when they can strt they teasing...finally!!!!!! rey ab jaldi se isse door jaa warna sab ke saamne ghad bhad hojayega...he slowly loosened his grip and moved back...she was constantly looking down... sharon came forward and made them sit ...kriya sat unfolding her leg and back...i mean samjho guys ...ladkiyon ki baithne ki style ki style...( agar ab bhi pata nai chala toh dil mera muft ka type karo youtube mai aur strting mai kareena jaise bait thi hai waise) ab bhi pata nai chala to in sm mujhra forms we sit lyk dat...so she was slightly leaning towards him...there he was trying hard to keep his hands off her...sangeet strtd and there were many perfomances...sm by other dancers...sm by our 5 couples toghether as pairs and sm individual...sm of their parents ...and gang's solo...i mean each member solo...and all and in btw they pulled kriyaansh ...and it was gng on full blast...it was 9:00 kriya was feeling very hungry but she didnt want to admit...as till now no one strtd eating...and she didnt want to be the 1st one to ask 4r food...infact she wanted smone to offer her themselves...so she kept quite...but rey noticed the change in her expressions...she was trying hard to concentrate on dance as she was dying of hunger...rey didnt understand first...but soon she slid her hand inside her saree and strtd rubbing her tummy...he got it then...he was thinking whom to ask fixing his gaze on her...soon sharon came and snapped her fingers in front of him ,...gang who noticed laughed...kriya thought it was the nice chance...so she asked 4r water...sharon was abt to go when rey pulled her making her sit beside him...

r: aaj meri pyaari saali kitni cute lag rahi hai????

sh: aww jiju...so sweet of u...

r: sweet toh mai hun ...kya tum tumhare iss sweet si jiju keliye do parathe laa sakti ho??( guys i know itni badi function aur parathe.???but paratha!!!!!! yummy...it has its own taste and place...)

sh: ( sweetly) kyun jiju thodi der rukh nai sakhte??

r: nahi meri jaan...

swayam and kriya were burning...

sh: normally: rey sharam nahi aati tumahari sangeeet mai aaye hue sab log ab tak khaye nahi ...infact strt bhi nai ki...

r: toh ??? mujhe paratha chahiye...

sh: no...

r: chahiye toh chahiye...he folded his arms and pouted...

sh: chalo ab jyaada naatak mat kar laa rahi hun...

he grinned like a fool...all laughed...

soon sharon bought water and a plate of paratha's...kriya eyed them and scolded herself in her mind 4r not asking...chalo kamse kam iss glass pani se peth toh bhar lun...she was abt to take a sip when rey pulled the glass 4rm her...she looked at him confused...he took a small piece of paratha and stopped his hand waiting 4r her to open her mouth but she was totally confused of what was gng on... he slowly opened his mouth gesturing her to do the same...she just opened her mouth as he said and soon she felt like heaven...god kuch toh gaya mooh ke andar...she ate fast and quickly opened her mouth again 4r next piece...he smiled and feeded her...after cmpleting one whole paratha she gave a gap...

k: rey aap ko kaise pata ki...

r: i know u very well kriya...tumhari exprssion se mai samaj sakta hun...aur tumhari ye jo bhi ego hai use thoda side pe rakho...aur agardobara aisa kiya na toh ...

k: sorry...

smriti and preeti,& priya came upto them and said the whole gang to have the dinner...all insisted and sat on the dining table...they had a nice dinner having their gang tym...

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hehehe,,,,,,,,,,,,,...not cmplted ...ab romance nahi chahiye kya???😆 so wait 4r sm more tym...

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

hey first part was mind blowing...loved it very much

kriyansh phone conversation i loved it

and kria was right uska mahendi ka rang to dark hona hi tha after all rey loves her soo much

and poor kria she is affraid of rey😆 pechle 2 dino me bhaut kuch kar chuka hai...that was very cute

ab second part bhi jaldi se update karo cant wait for it

Edited by luv_arsha - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#857

now it was the tym 4r only young ones...DJ!!!!!!!!!

all parents were sent outside into the garden where they can have their meals...talk ...and enjoy themselves...

rey and kriya sat in their places...all called them both rejected as they were not intrested to dance in those outfits...soo the gang strtd dancing madly 4r the crazy songs played by the dj ...rey and kriya sat beside each other...they wanted to talk but neither knew wher to strt...the light got dim as 4r the effect of the dj...she grasped his hand...

r: kriya daro mat...mai yahi pe hun hamesha tere saath...

she felt better after his words...he thought of changing the topic...

r: so kriya bhuk gayi???...he absentmindedly placed his hand on her tummy...(guys not on the saree...under it...no cntact they romance how???😆😉) aur bechari tumhari tummy ko itna takleef dedi tune...

she gasped as his hand touched her bare waist...lo phir agaya ...ab kya karega pata nai...she looked at him with wide eyes ...his eyes soon met hers as he realised his touch...he was trying hard to take his hand out...and the lights went of cmpletely leaving sm random colured dj lights...more on the dance floor less on their side...it almost felt dark...she grapped his hand on her waist and crushed it more into her waist...chalo gayi saari mehnat paani mai...ab mai kuch nai kar sakta...he tightened his grip and crushed a piece of flesh of her waist...she gasped hard...her hand flew away to her side...he slowly caressed her waist crushing,and squeezing it in b/w...she strtd breathing fast...she placed her left hand on his ri8 leg knee and gripped it...he played the more ...she got lost in the passion and slid her hands up to his chest and strtd making random designs ...he lost his control totally...he quickly pulled her into his lap such that her ri8 shoulder touching his left...he aging squeezed her waist ...she slowly slid down ...he bent and strtd exploring her neck...she passed her ri8 hand around his waist and left into his hair...she pulled him up and he strtd kissing her face...finally he took a halt at her lips crushed his into hers...she quickly let him in to explore more...their tounges played...he pulled after smtym and made his way don her chin throat neck and slowly brought his face down touching her curves and slowly slid the sareed aside and strtd kissing her waist and along the down line of her blouse...she let out a slow moan...her hand caressing his hair and his one hand her side of waist while the other was busy with her checked blouse which made him toch her skin sm places ...he slowly moved up caressed her curves ith his cheeks...went more up and kissed along her top edge line of her blouse which was actually smewat deep making her curves expose slightly ...she closed her eyes tight and gripped his hair tight...he slowly slid hand and squeezed her left curve ...she let out a moan and arched herself more to him...he placed wet kisses on her exposed chest and caressed with his lips...she was freezed ...she folded her leg fingers as tight as she could and crushed his face more into her curves...he slowly slid his hand at the back under her blouse and caressed her skin...she threw her head back...he slowly pulled her saree pallu and caressed her upper body with his hands and kissed it...his hands slowly found the hooks of her blouse...he unhooked the top most and and dug his face in btw her curves exploring the newly exposed place...she fell down and he slowly layed beside her never breaking his kiss...his hand reached the second hook when he quickly pulled of...she was frozen to the core...she was not even able to move ri8 now and along with these all a confusion of what happened to him suddenly...he understood that she was unable to anything now...he hooked back her blouse's top hook made her sit placed the pallu ...he could hear her deep and heavy breathing...he slowly adjusted took the glass beside him and made her drink the water and made his kercheif wet with water and slowly tapped the kercheif on her face...she finally came back to total sense...still breathing hard...

he passed his hands through his hair while saying...

r: dj ne kaha ki yehi last gana hai...

k: oh shit!!!!! rey mai aise sab ke saamne...no...mujhe apni saree theek karni hai...mujhe washroom tak le chalo...he stood and her helped her and took her to the washroom and waited outside 4r hr when she went in and straightened herself...but poor their luck lights were back ...all searched 4r them and located rey outside the washroom door...all eyed him with"care to explain and where is the other explain" ...

he was nervous but didnt let anyone know it...after all... "the coolest dude" kitaab aise hi nai milti...

r: guys wo kriya ko washroom jaana tha...toh mai use yaha tak lekar aaya...use andere se darr lagta hai na...

all were convinced as its the fact that kriya fears of dark...after few mins kriya came out relaxed ...she never looked at him...they had a small chat when the girls moved back to raiprakash mansion...

rey and kriya tossed in bed thinking what happened...thank god lights were off and dj mei kisika dhyaan inpe nai gaya... they dozed off without knowing when they actually got sleepy...and went into deep sleep...as they were very tired after the work they had done that day😉

kk guys this sangeet ends her...gud ni8...hope u like it...😊

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago