PART-11
HI GUYS!!!!! IM VERY HAPPY AFTER A LONG WAITING I REACHED TILL 50...THANKS 4R U ALL ...I NEVER THOUGHT THAT MY WRITTING WOULD BE THAT WELL THAT PPL LOVE IT... THIS PART IS AS A CELEBRATION GIFT FOR U ALL...HOPE U LIKE IT...
sorry guys kal hi update karna chahti thi...par viva tha so i cnt...so im updating it now...i thought i will give an update on 50...par shaffy ...usne pura 50 .apni cmnts se bhar diya...and pushed me to 51😭...par thanks shaffy...so no more bhak bhak...first breath in well guys...make ur self comfortable and then start reading...so here goes ur
update of treat...
it was late in the evening(6:00)... and parents were sitting in the living room with sharon and rey when kriya and swayam were in their rooms...(guys 4rm now reyam in same house) ...parents were talking when they saw swayam in his track suit and leading out...
vijay: beta kaha jaa rahe ho??
sandy: bhai...sham ko walk pe jaana uski aadat hai...
vijay: acha..kk beta jao...
sh: dad mai bhi jaun????😳
gautum: theek hai beta jao...
sw& sh: smiled and bid all bye and went...
rey: mom mai apni room mai jaa raha hun...
preeti: theek hai beta...
he went up...but stopped in front of his door...aaj subah baatcutter ne jo bhi kiya...mujhe usse uske baare mai baat karni hai...he casually entered her room with hands in pockets as if entering in his own room...kriya who was struggling with her zipper in front of the mirror noticed him and turned in an alarm...his gaze fixed on her ..he closed the door and moved 4rward...she strtd breathing hard coz of his gaze ..he came to her pulled her by her waist making her gasp...slid his hand 4rm top to her waist of her back making her shiver found the zipper and pulled it up ...making it some easy 4r her...
r: baatcutter...( whispered)...
k: huh??( gasped)
r: subah jo tumne kiya wo kya thum ab kar sakti ho??
k: getting normal and confused...spoke in a normal tone...maine kya kiya??
r: kuch yaad nahi hai??
she thought 4r smtym...
K: acha wo...rey wo bas mai swayam ko.
r: wo nahi uske baad...
she got abt wat he was talking...looked at him...he stood ther with a smile...she leaned in closing his eyes with palm...he waited 4r her ...but as his grip loosened she freed herself and ran away...but he opened eyes in tym and they strtd chasing ...at last rey got hold of kriya pushed her to back with her both wrists tightly held in his palms...he pressed her wrists on the wall beside her face...
r: with a mischiveous smile...u cnt escape baatcutter...he leaned in...her breathing rate increased... they were mms away that the door sprang open and sharon hopped in...kriya was not able to move even after that coz still his face was close to hers...as he turned his head towards sharon...
sh: rey!!!!!
he came back to senses and flinched back leaving behind kriya who was trying hard to breath normal...
sh: ye kya kar rahe ho???
rey: wo.wo...sharon wo...
sh : bas maine sab dekhliya...thode din wait nai kar sakte...she went and stood beside kriya who was still trying to breath normal...
rey: sharon tum toh swayam ke saath walk pe gayi na???
sh: haa...aur wapas bhi aagayi aur ab wapas bhi jayenge...
r: confused...kaha??aur koun??
sh: hum,...mai , papa, mom, aur meri shona...hum apne ghar jaa rahe hai...
rey : kya ?? kyun??? kriya yahi pe reh sakti hai na...
sh: isiliye tha ki shaadi ke pehle tumhe iss se door rakhne keliye...
rey pouted,...krisha smiled and sharon caught kriyas hand and strtd gng...kriya even though not willing to go...gave him her the most cutest smile and walked...rey stood there back in his place and unknowingly a tear escaped his eyes...this was not gone un noticed by sharon she said kriya to go down and moved back to the room...
she went to him and hugged him...
sh: rey ... i never know...ur such a kiddo...are kuch dinon ke baad wapas hamesha keliye ayegi... faced him ...aur waise bhi,...kuch din mujhe bhi apni behan se rehne do...
he smiled...
sh: chalo ...now i got to go...
he hugged her again ...
sh: walked a little 4rward and turned...now go to ur bed early ...stop dreaming of kriya and sleep and at sharp 6:30 move ur lovely butt off the bed and get ready...
r: kahan??
sh: surprise ...!!!!!!! and went out...he went down ...bid bye to them...but soon cheered up and strtd talking wid swayam...at 9:00 he went to bed and slept and ...as usual went to kriya's dreamland...
at 10:00
swayams mobile rang ...he saw the flsh smiled and quickly lifted...he lifted ...and did sm pyaar ki baatein...and sharon said smthing to him and he agreed...
morning
swayam entered rey's room and saw his cute cousin who was sleeping cutely hugging his pillow tight...
sw: paagal ...din bhar uski ke khayaal me rehta hai...
he stood there adoring his cute cousin...whom he liked the most even before knowing abt their relation...who was a "the perfect man" according to him...he went 4rward and brushed his hair but to his surprise he was pulled and rey got onto him trapping his both hands beside his either side of face...he yelled ...
sw: REY!!
he opened his eyes and got shocked to see his cousin in place of his love...but before he could get down sharon entered and screamed...
sh: CHI!!!!!
both the boys flung to either side of bed...
sh: tum dono bhai ho iska matlab ye nahi ki tum log kuch bhi karo...chi!!!!!!!
rey: sharon mujhe nai pata ki wo swayam hai...slowly decreased his voice...mujhe laga ki kriya hai...
swaron laughed at his cuteness...
r: bas bas bohut hasliye...toh ab ye bataogi ki tum yaha itni subah...
sw: wahi toh mai tumhe batane aaya tha...
sh: rey today we are gng 4r an outing with family ...to ur farmhouse...
r: kya??? matlab kriya bhi aayi hai???( excited)
sh: haan...kaha na aaj tumhare liye surprise hai...so this is mah surprise...try to steal some private tym...winked and went out...
sw: rey/...
r: haan...
sw: tumne kriya ko propose kiya???
r: HELL !!!!!! NO!!!!!!
sw: budhu...tym hai ...propose her,...shaadi bhi strt hone wali hai abt ak propose nai ki...
r: haan yaar,...i will propose her today...kk bye ...tayyar hona hai..and he hopped into washroom...
swayam shaked his head and went down...rey entered in 10 mins...(guys imagine him wearing the same blue jacket outfit...that he wore in goa epi...shirtless...aww ...he looks soo hot...😍)
he went down and was shocked to see kriya...she wore a stripped tee and a white patiala bottom...god!!!!!! how could she be too gorgeous even in this simple dress...god.she will kill me...!!
all strtd. and reached the farm house...( guys i will be giving sm pics. and describe sm so assume a very large farm house ...
and at the back of the building...
all went in gossipped ...swaron and kriyaansh came out into the garden...reyam and krisha were walking ...
k: sweetu tum subah rey ke room mai jaane ke baad chilla kyun rahi thi???
sh: strtd laughing ...and whispered every thing in kriya's ear while boys were shouting...no sharon no...
krisha strtd laughing hard...this annoyed the boys...they ran after their girls and got seperated...( as i told i will only focus on kriyaansh😊) rey finally got hold of kriya and both fell down...but kriya smhow managed to grab a pipe and drenched him...and rey while trying to save himself pulled the pipe and drenched her and again strtd their chasing session.after smtym suddenly rey hide behind a bush...kriya sensed no one turned back and sighed...
K: uff...bach gayi...ab kaha jaun in beege kapdon mei...
she looked around and found a small room made of rock...(that y i called it a cave...she opened the door and went in ...there were two small windows glowing the place...as soon as she went in rey followed her...
guys strtd the song...
she was facing her back to him and trying to wipe the water and dry her dress...
she turned and shocked to see him ...he was standing far 4rm her but it made her uncomfortable coz he was scanning her 4rm head to toe ...she looked at him..his eyes went down 4rm her head to toe and returned to her eyes...and he slightly gulped...seeing him gulp made her gulp hard... he locked his eyes with hers...she slowly looked down and saw at the door through the corner of eye and again lifted her lashes .to see him...but he noticed her each and every move she suddenly strtd running to the door ...but he blocked her way through his left hand on the door...he looked at her and with a evil smile he nodded as "u cnt escape that easily" ...he pulled the door and locked it without breaking the eyecntct ...she gulped hard...he moved 4rward as she moved back...as soon as she hit the wall of the cave he trapped her by his hands on either side...her heartbeat increased...suddenly their eyelock was broken by her as a drop 4rm her forehead slid down her cheek along the edge line near her ear...she was abt to wipe it but he suddenly placed his lips on the drop and sucked it as she gasped hard...he slowly passed his tip of tounge along the line of the drop 4rm her cheek to forehead...she clutched his collar and closed her eyes...he looked at her...her wet face ,lips were driving him crazy...he placed his hands on her hip and slowly slid it up rolling her tee and making place 4r his hands on her bare waist...she stood still breathing hard...her waist slipped his grip as she breathed out... he suddenly squeezed her waist to take a perfect grip ...she arched her body making her wet faminine front touching his chest and closing her eyes even more tight...dis drove him more crazy...he slid his hands back of her waist and pulled her aginst him crushing her more into him...he passed his hands up over her back under her tee making her dizzy...his hands moved to discover more of her back always looking at her face...but smthng always came btw his fingers he cluthed it with two fingers and suddenly removed the hook making its tight grip on her curves loosen...she felt a jolt of electricity passing through her body and wildly pulled him into a kiss...he continue the kiss as his hands kept on moving on her bare back...after smtym she pushed him hard ...he took the support of the wall to balance him but his eyes never left her...she strtd to move out but stopped to make herself ri8...she placed her hands back to hook it up but his gaze was making her shiver he moved frward ...as he was abt 2 feet 4rm her she froze...her hands automatically came down...he walked front covering the gap and once again got grip on her waist...she cluthed his collar and slowly placed her forehead on his chest when he dug his face into her hair and strtd kissing her nape...he kissed ,bit, sucked it...she slowly slid her hands around his neck...he slowly slid his hand up searchig the two ends...she pressed herself more into him flatteng her curves and he continously kissed her on nape...finally he caught the two ends and at an instant pulled the two ends which were far making her throw her head back ...he quickly nudged his face into the crook of her throat and strtd kissing and sucking the droplets...he finally hooked it up ...and he kissed her along the edge line of her top near the neck...her faminine smell was driving him more crazy he once again strtd to un hook ...but soon she pushed him again...made her top straight and walked back wards facing him to the door as he followed her she opened the door and continued her walk...he followed her ,...suddenly she hit a bush...he was abt to trap her when she escaped and agian strtd walking back...suddenly she fell into the pool breaking the eye lock of swaron...sharon came to her as she stood breathing fast and wiping the water off her face...rey smiled at this...
sh: shona tum theek ho...
k: ha...haaa...( breathing fast)
sw: are rey aana hum volley ball khel rahe hai join us...and u too kriya...(hehehehe...swaron playing ball in pool😳)
rey jumped into the pool as kriya startld...she was more consious abt him...they strtd playing..rey mischiviously smiling and looking at her when she was continuously looking at him...he got the ball...before throwing it he mouthed a kiss to her...her eyes widened...and she left the catch...it fell in back...sharon came to her and placed her hand on her shoulder...she jumped and turned and slipped and fell once again into water...rey smiled wide at this he is glad that even after getting far 4rm her abt 10 mins...still he had that effect on her... she stood up ...her skin was still burning where he touched...
sh: shona tum theek hona kya hua??
kept her hand on her waist to straighten her up...kriya jumped and shrieked...sharon stepped back...
K: kriya kya hua????!!!!!!!1
K: wo..wo ...( gasping 4r air) kuch nai bas thoda sir mei dard ho rahi hai...
sh: sharon found her ans stupid but didnt want to ask her as she would tell if she wants to...kk chalo andar chalte hai...
r: sharon tum log jao mujhe kriya se kuch baath karni hai...hum thodi der mei aate hai...kriya flung her head up and looked at him with wide eyes...
they thought to tease but ignored ...coz afterall they hand planned this trip exclusively 4r them...and they left the place...
he dived in and stood in front of her she flinched back...
he moved 4rward... placed his palm on her cheek...she closed her eyes fr few seconds and opened...their eyes locked ...
r: kya hua kriya??
she stood quite...he slid his palm 4r her shoulder to her palm took it in his and slowly lifted without breaking the eye lock...she again strtd breathing hard...he slowly slid a ring into her ring finger...she looked at it and again at him...
http://www.agogdiamond.com/images/diamond-promise-rings.jpg
r: kya tum hamesha meri baatcutter banke iss linecutter ki lines kaati rahegi...kya tum kriya ghai...nah...kriya raiprakash se hamesha keliye ...kriya reyaansh singhania banogi...kya tum chabilal ko ramaira ko humesha keliya apna banane ki chance dogi...kya tum meri sabse best dance partner se ...meri one and only life partner banogi...ever and forever...
she stood still expression less...and after a long silence hugged him with all force ...he reciprocated... they hugged passionately 4r a long tym...he slowly broke the hug kissing her forehead...he looked into her eyes and started walking back...he turned got out of pool and looked at her still looking at him...he again mouthed a kiss...her eyes widened and she looked down blushing...he grinned and ran towards the house...he stopped and called her...she luked up...he shouted...
r: kriya tension mat lo mai tumhare liya specially exclusive breathing classes loonga ...im sure u will be normal soon...and haan...thanks 4r making my day...u made my day...thank u tnk u tnku ...he ran into the house shouting...
she blushed...looked up...
k: hey universe ji...issi ladke ke wajah se ab tak meri skin jal rahi thi...fir issi ke hug ke baad im feeling normal...urrgghh!!!!!! ye kya hai????
she bent down and went underwater stayed there 4r smtym thinking abt what happened 4rm when they met in the morning...came out ...looked at the ring.kissed it .got out of the pool covered her shoulders with bath towel nearby...and went in...
thats 4r today hope u liked it ...guys plzz cmnt...and like also...😃
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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