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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-9



guys im back ...i hope i made u happy... ...and this part specially dedicated to shaffy_arsha... and ha...picture abhi bhi baaki hai mere dost ...twists khatam nai hue...so here u go...par plzz cmnt guys...i wanna really write the shaadi epis ...i have planned a lot...




all the gang reached there...
sh: guys tum sab yaha...

simmi: kyun sharon hume nai aana chahiye kya.???

sh: arrey not lyk dat kk sit...im waiting 4r kriya...no no ...4r my sissy!!!! with a wide smile

all were waiting 4r kriya...she stepped out of car she looked with a confused expression at swayam...

sw: bas kuch mat kaho...chalo mere saath...he hugged her side wards...she too hugged him...they walked lyk dat to the rehearsal hall...when they entered all saw them and at sharey,...they both were smiling at them...as soon as swayam saw rey he strtd moving his hand but rey mouthed ...no!!!! he smiled and again held her...and rey mouthed thankyou... swayam smiled...

sharon ran to them and stopped...till now kriya was closing her eyes...swayam stepped back and kriya opened her eyes...first one she saw was sharon...she wanted to hug her,...twirl her...but smthing was stopping her,...it was not that easy 4r to take that coz she was seperated 4rm her father her twin sis...and later 4rm her frnds and she almost lost her love...just coz of dance which she loved the most after rey...she was sad, frustrated,felt betrayed, insecure, wat not every thing...( sorry once i gave a promo it was supposed to be used here but coz of my new changes im deleting it)
sharon pulled her into a tight hug...but soon kriya pushed her back...all were shocked all stood up ...sharon was taken back 4r once ...all were silent 4r 5 mins... then


go along with the song guys...4r first two bits sharon moves 4rward with her hand in front of kriya as if asking her to place her hand...kriya slowly lifted her hand but hesitated and pulled back...sharon started dancing as the song strts( guys ye mat poochna ki gaana kisne aur kyun bajaya... just go with me if u want the feel...)

sharon started dancing and style ...my fav contemporary...she does steps twirling around kriya who was firmly looking at mirror as tears rolled down her cheeks...

music...

kriya strtd dancing as shes gone mad...( at 2:08) she takes high jumps with strtches and twirls along the rehersal hall ( at 2 :51) ,...sharon and kriya does a step...as kriya was abt to fall sharon lifts her ...( jst watch this video frm 1:40...to 2:01).sharon as shaks and vandana as kriya.
..) sharon offers hand and kriya pushes it aside then kriya and sharon danced togther.. at 3:18...( imagine amar as sharon and dharmesh as kriya...4rm 3:03 to3: 09 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FbtrQofQO24

kk now stop the main song at 3: 30...)


sharon fell on ground and ended on her knees...

this was the limit...yes this was it..rey was fuming...he cannot see kriya hurting herself and his bestfrnd...and same was with swayam... both stood up and were abt to move towards kriya when sharon showed her palm as if telling them to stop...

sh: plzz...aaj jo bhi ho par tum log na kuch kahoge aur na kuch karoge...

K: she broke up...shouted at her top voice...tumhe kya lagta hai ..ki...ki agar tum aisi sweet baatein karogi toh main tumhe apni behan maanlungi...no..never...

sh: stood up and with a smile on her face...haa...u will...

K: tum ...tum,...tum kya samajti ho apne aapko...ha...mai..maine kaha na...( all this while kriya was pushing sharon back by hitting her on shoulders) tum meri behan kabhi nai ban sakti...kabhi nai...kabhi nai...sharon was jst smiling trough her tears,...yes she knew...kriya wanted to hug her ...but after all which happened in her life it was not that easy 4r her to digest... so she jst kept quite...and to everyones surprise kriya pulled sharon into a tight hug still murmering...kabhi nai...

sharon reciprocated ...and after a long tym she pulled back wiped kriyas tears and gave a kiss on her cheek...
sh: tum mujhse badi ho par tumhe mujhe calm karna padraha hai ...ur such a kid kriya...

kriya looked at her both laughed and kriya gave a tight kiss on her cheek...

sh: aww!!!!!! thank u shona...

all luked confused at her,...along wid kriya...
sh: kyun naam acha nai laga...*babyface*

K: bohut cute hai bilkul meri sweetu ki tarah... pulling her cheeks...

sh: jumping clapping her hands...aww!!!! sweetu...nice name...

they both hugged ..

rinni : they look too cute...!!!!!!!!

and now both our majnus in their dreamymode.: haan too cute...

all: aww!!!!!!!!
sharon and kriya blushed ...reyam came back to senses hugged them both which soon turned into a group hug...

all went to the terrace...rey meanwhile informed vijay that everything is fym it will take smtym to be back...

all were laughing ...talking...sharon and kriya sat hand in hand...and ...hahahaha...kai do cheez jal rahi thi,...😆 yeah it was reyam ...they were jealous coz after patchup their loves didnt even cm to them once and were gng everywhere hand in hand...they both caught each others hand and sat together,...

nil: chi!!!!!!! rey ,swayam tum log aise chipke kyun bete ho??

then they came to senses and jerked far...krisha understood and giggled...suddenly neha strtd crying...

vicky: kagu...kagu..kya hua??

neha: babu neha too wanting a sister...

vicky scrathed his head mumbling ...ab behan ko kaha dhoondhu...

all laughed hard at this...but suddenly kriya stopped laughing and stared at sharon...sharon looked at her...
sh: kya hua kriya aise kyun dekh rahi ho???

K: hugged her...papa tumse bohut pyaar karte haina...

sh: pulled her back...tumhe bhi,,,,,,,,.

K: nai wo tumse jyaada pyaar karte hai isiliye tumhe lekar chale gaye...

sh: agar mai ye kahun ki papa tumhe lekar jaa rahe the aur maa tumse jyaada pyaar karti hai isliye tumhe leliya aur mujhe papa ko dedi...

K: nai sharon maa aise nai karsakti...

sh: wahi ...papa bhi aise nai kar sakte...unhe bas donon mei kisiko lena tha so unhone mujhe leliya...aur kabhi aisa mat soch na ...and she explained how he searched 4r them...kk dobara aisa mat sochna...
K: kk...

rey came 4rward to console her but sharon hugged her...😆

he was fuming and same was in case of swayam...

sh: kk..chalo guys maa papa wait kar rahe honge...

K: haan sharon chalo aur mujhe tumse bohut saare baatein karni hai...chalo...they left all followed them but reyam were back...

r: swayam tumne dekha???😡

sw: haan maine dekha...😡

and they went home...krisha went and hugged their parents and rona dona ...sab khatam all were sitting ...krisha together and reyam opposite to them they were fuming on seeing krisha...krisha were living to their fullest,...they got their sister back and enjoying the smell of jealousy of their loves...they purposely ignored them...

gautum: to sharon ...beta ye sab tere frnds hai ...par baaki sab???

K: wo bhi humare frnds hai papa...

ji mai neha...
aur mai amar...
mai bharat ...
and myself vishaka...

still eyeing sharon...ji mai swayam shekawat...


vijay, smriti, preeti,& gautum: stood up in an instant...WAT????
swayam fell back in sofa feared of the sudden reaction ...caught reys hand...ji...ji swayam...sh...shekawat...

there was a long silence all the four looking at each others face ...and rest confused with feared swayam...

then
preeti: beta tum apni mom dad ko yahan bula sakte ho...

sw: still feared...ji...ji...

he called his parents ...after 1/2 hr swayams parents entered...

sw: maa papa...aayiye na...wo actually aunty ne bulaya...

swayams parents moved 4rward but as soon as they saw the 4 they were glued...preeti came 4rward and slapped swayams mom hard...all were shocked...( kk lemme introduce swayams parents...sandeep shekawat and priya shekawat...)

sandy: ( hehe poora nam likne me problem hai...lazy hun na..)
ji wo...

vijay: tu chup reh...

priya: di plzz meri baat suno...

preeti : pehle tum meri suno...kya tumhe hum itne selfish lagrahe hai??? are gussa the iska matlab ye nai ki hum ne tumhe hamesha keliye bhula diya...

sandy: ji sorry.par haan hum bhaag gaye the...hum simla chale gaye...wahan maine ek office mai naukri dhoondi thi ,,,...par ek saal baad hum wapas aana chahte hai...par tabhi meri promotion hua...mai woh mauka chodna nai chahta tha aur bete ki jarooratein poori karne keliye woh promotion mujhe chahiye tha...uske baad swayam ki padhai ki wajah se rukh gaya...ye ladka kisise jaldi sabse milta hi nai...isiliye aur uskebaad hum yahan aaye par aapki ata pata kuch nai tha...( imagine a typical senti scene btw al the parnts)

reyam stood mouth hanging...

rey: papa matlab...

vijay : matlab ye hai ki ...priya aur preeti behne hai...aur tum aur swayam bhai hai...
reyam looked at each
rey: bhai...
swayam: bhai...
reyam: shouted BHAI!!! hugged each other ...they were very happy they danced lyk mad ppl...and in excitement they hugged their respective love and gave a strong kiss on their cheeks 4r which krisha stood mouth hanging and all were shocked...but reyam got to their sense,...

gautum: ye kya tha??? kriya aur rey ke baare mai mujhe pata hai par tumlogon ka kya chakkar hai???

kriya : hugging sharon 4rm back...papa...sharon and swayam donon ek dusre ko pyaar karte hai...



kk dats 4r now...hope u all enjoyed,...

precap:

sh: rey kriya ko chodo na mai hun na...* wink*

k: swayam ... sharon ka toh pata nai...mujhe toh tum bohut pasand ho...*wink*



keep thinking...😉
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First to comment again..😊
Wud comment after reading d update..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
My god deetha..it was like a family movie going infront of my eyes..
Loved it..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome n amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its wonderful...awww rey aur uski mom ka patch up...
n leap of 2 years wow...sharon n kriya sisters great...
luved the way u described swayam-kriya's n rey-sharon's friendship...
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srry i didnt read the next update so here goes my comment for dat...
at first i was shocked y way kriya behaving lyk dat den their hug awww...n luved the dance...
finally krisha got their family n bechare reyam jealous hehehehehe...
wow last mai kya twist tha reyam bhai...amazing...update the next part soon...

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finaly KRISHA got der family.. Its was lovly update and yaa fistly i also thought rey goes to kria nd swayam goes to sharon.. Bt u write well dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res.

I know I ask other to comment but myself am not doing that.
Don't have time. But once I get free and well, I'm gonna read it and promise give you a bada waala comment.
Sorry for now. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey ply add me to ur pm list...i loved this ff...amazing parts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
firstly thnkew deetha 4 dedicating dis part too meee...awww i love uu yar

n nw coming too update bhen bhen n bhai bhai hahahahahaha...rili funny jb reyam ko pta chala ki dey are brothers...hahaha dere reactions are too funny i luv dem yar

n song selection too good yaar...n da way u xplaining steps tooo awsummm...i must say u r vry gud dancer..n hahahaha hmare bechare majnu fuming...hehehe

n nw waiting 4 shaadi yar...swaron n kriyaansh shaadi hayeee!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
it was awesome...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again an awesum update.. Krisha sis and reyam bhai wah wah kya baat kya baat kya baat. Dat means kria swayam ki nd sharon rey ki saali wowww supeb update. Bt precap confiusing.. Please update jaldi.

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