AR:A Perfect Dream#3 Unexpressed Expressions - Update Pg 35

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Coffee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Frigging heck !! 😲 😲

I almost lost hope of seeing this day in this lifetime!! I am so darn glad to see you back Anokhee :D Can't wait to read on when you update next !! Yay :D

Congrats for the thread too 🥳I feel like squealing and dancing right now.
Welcome back <33

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Ahem Ahem!! Looks like someone's going to update soon!! So my pestering does seem to be working!! 😛

And yeah.. Congratulations on thread number 3. You may not want me to say this, but I hope we have more such boring threads that leave us yawning for more! 😛😆

Love ya! ❤️

Naam-mein-kya-rakha-hai

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Aanya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I can't believe you've started this again 😲 I read the whole thing twice just to make sure 😆

Can't wait to read more from you! :)

xoxo

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teenorchid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

wow. I luv u anokhee. U rock. Cont soon.

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blessed4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

congrats for the new thread and thank you so much for writing further.!!

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-Anku-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Firstly I can't help feel so excited that you're updating, 😆 I got so excited last night on seeing your update. And well, it was worth it :)

I so slow, I was more than half the way down and even then kept thinking why you'd named the update what you had. It struck me like a tube light suddenly illuminates 😆.

I loved the concept of the update, something only you can think of. First toh an Armaan in boxers makes you ☺️ and to top it Armaan has a running nose, so adorable 😆. The whole concept of including the IPAD was innovative, I couldn't help but giggle at AR's bickering on that gadget.

I can't say how widely I am grinning at what Riddhima told Armaan. It's so cute to hear Riddhima wanting Armaan so close, wanting him to follow her around and smother her. It's something you don't expect but yeah Riddhima in your ff has always valued Armaan more than herself. I love their cute confession, love how they're so much in love and it grows each day. The kind of understanding and bond they share is so strong, that even if there is a slight difference they both can't contain the restlessness.

Armaan's way of not scaring her was so freaking cute 🤣 I feel for both of them actually, it must have not been easy staying completely alone. Especially since they're both the only support and family to each other. But now that she is back she and he both will excel in their career and be satisfied in their life about it. Love how real and practical the story is.

OMG the last bit was so freaking cutee 😲 OMG they're planning a baby. I love how Armaan proposed that to her, and how the reaction wasn't emotional but it was so real. It's amazing how they both can't go on with anything in life if the other's agreement isn't with them in it.

I love how you've expressed Armaan's emotions regarding Riddhima's absence for 3 months and his emotions when she is now back. But somehow I feel that his emotions didn't get across so well here, even when he explained them out. I mean since its 'PERFECT' dreams, somehow everything is always so perfect I couldn't help point out how Riddhima didn't realize this when she was there away from him and now when she is back, about what he must have gone through sending her away.

Hope you update soon 😃

Edited by Ankita.M - 13 years ago