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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Slow n steady pace with a striking way of unfolding the events...Superb!! Read all the parts...each part very craftily etched...with how ASR is sinking in the series of events and slowly getting to the root.How I wish ASR in show..analyses..instead of gritting his teeth and throwing tantrums like my 5 yr old.

Please do continue..I so enjoyed with my evening tea.

Ash.

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@--Anna--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Beautiful!! And something that is quite likely to happen! Please continue soon and do PM me :))

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

That was so very nice to read. I liked the way you put forth all his un-told emotions, confusions and confessions. Just wish you could continue this one further. Great work!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow loved he 3 parts. interestint to see whather arnav figures it out

xxx

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

You really write very well...I would like something like this to happen ... Arnav to start trusting Khushi without knowing the truth completely... would also like Shyam to somehow admit everything by himself...

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pc17

@pc17

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Wow this was awesome! I loved how you vividly described everything-all the emotions and thoughts. It was fabulous and had me gripped throughout. I didn't want it to end Please please do decide to continue I'm dying for Arnav to find out the truth. xxx