OS: Khushi's Naughty Deeds (PART 2 NEW LINK)

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nancy_ipkknd

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Loved it MaryBarton...Hope you continue further..

Nancy
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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Alrighty kiddos! Part 2 is called Arnav's Naughty Deeds. And it is up! See below and don't forget to like and comment and show me some love like you did on this one.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2819957

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Raj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

wat a beautiful and funny and cute scene...i wish they cud show this scene on screen i wud av broke my replay button :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

plz make dis an ff its soo luvly ur awesum!!

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

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To all the readers of this one who requested. This is for you. Link to the next part is on the first page. Please comment.

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Juicee Sushie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

HaHaHa Loved it Mary 👏 👏 👏!!!

She is a cheeky one, but loved how he did't show her up in front of everyone which is a very strong theme in the show where they don't tell others what ever happens between them!!!

Looking forward to read about this retaliation!!!

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

lol loved it going to read his revenge now. This would have been great to watch 😊

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Nandalala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Hi, Mary😃:

This is my first time reading any of your fictional works! Wow, I absolutely adored the play on play in both the OSs!😆 Arnav's was sweet "revenge", redefined...I'm in *Gutter mode* once more...☺️☺️. Loved that Khushi was a lawyer; thats just the kind of empowerment I would like to see for her in the show! She's accomplished so much with whatever little she has been given...I can only imagine what she would be capable of were she given an opportunity to complete her education!

Will catch-up on the rest of your pieces in the coming work! Well done, hun!

Anjali😊

P.S. I'll send you a buddy request; would love to get PM notifications from you!

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Inaya Haya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Oh, so what do you do for a living Mary? Would you care to join the creative team of IPKKND? I'm sure if enough of us make some noise we could get you a spot there!

If only we could see this all in real life ... if only!

Beautiful as always.

Keep it coming!

-S